Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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dam. dawn is impressing daybreak. thats high praise
That was a very nice and loving chapter. I hope when he gets in his early teens he starts to have some chest fluff on his chest.
Please oh please tell me she'll keep being "not a bad changeling"
O my double upload of my favorite fic
Love the atmosphere and the banter. Dawn's grandparents reveal!!!: pinkiecrazy: at least the good ones.
Wonder when he'll clue in his grandparents on the Alicorn thing.
The spark family trying to summon discord.
Over all nice couple of chapters can't wait for more especially the MLP canon start line.!
This was just too adorable. A perfect gift after a long day at work.
Holy shit! That shadow walking is OP AF.
If he can get into Celestia's private quarters with no problem, I don't think anyone can stop him from going anywhere.
Very touching chapter all around!! Hooray for cute Applebloom and Spike!!
How are the incarcerated and partially convicted ponies doing this fine Hearth’s Warming?
And good job, Fluttershy! Trixie’s totally going to be showing off her gift at school.
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You could probably set up runes or something to counter shadow magic but Celestia might just not have since the only pony who knows the spell is on the moon
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So it is actually caused by a loophole in her wards. Dawn is on the access list for her room, as her student, but the wards do block teleportation for anyone except her. The shadow magic would have been blocked if he didn’t have access. If he used the door/window she would have been alerted to him arriving.
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I just want to say, i am really impressed with this coment, it is a delicious bit of world building that is both funny and logical
I love it
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ph'nglui mglw'nafh Discord C'ntrlt wgah'nagl fhtagn
Discord having a milkshake on a beach where the water is slime juice and the sand is sugary... while inside his head: Well, I love it when I don’t have to create chaos for chaos to exist
Dawn: I’m the shadoooooooooooooooow~~ before dawn Lmao
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Don't forget the captain attempting to reach the punch line
(you might not know the reference though)
Honestly the idea that shadow magic sounds awesome
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No don't lesson to the horn dogs there's plenty of fast fluff story's already!
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Didn't do him a lot of good. Might not have been caught but was pretty much saved by only a second
This might possibly be my favorite story on this site
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Although to treat them, I doubt that the language barrier will let you achieve it, literally only survive here by the translator Lmao
Nice
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That's also correct, you can leave out the extra "s" to avoid redundancy; if you wanted to
Both are correct though
Apparently, this topic is under heated discussion by the English language fans
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English, the bastard highway robber of languages, has fans? I guess it makes sense for such a chaotic, nonsense language to have fans that debate grammar rules.
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"It's like three languages in a trenchcoat..."
-average English enjoyer
I've been Binge Reading this for the past few days when I had the free time. Despite the constant grammical errors, I think the plot and the story has been simply amamzing. You have made quite the wonderful story and I can't wait for the twists and turns in the plot. Keep up the amazing writing. I'll be here, waiting patiently.
Take your time and be awesome... maybe 20% more
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Wait grammatical errors? I only know of the spelling and punctuation errors
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Your good, I'll throw some stuff in because I KNOW I'll be reading this more than once and I'll show it if I see any. If anything, I'm only sad because I've ready many good fics over the years, and the biggest thing that saddens me is that people would write bloody yelp reviews and all of a sudden, its just gone...
Also, I know I got a good sense of typoglycemia because I just don't care. The damn Nazi Grammer Police, I just want to say things that I know will get me blocked here.
Also, yes, I WILL reread this... its that good...
This and the last chapter were nice. This one is cute and the last one was an enjoyable look into the civilization.... im getting hints of main six shipping here, and i like it~ (also insert joke about rarity being a cradle robber here)
Like i can see Pinkie just KNOWING about him somehow and him not judging her would be a good step toawrds a relationship, AJ might be weird not sure, Rarity is obviously at the very least sweet on him but that might be in a protect the little brother kind of way rather than the i want him kinda way, Fluttershy and Dash im not too sure about, would have to re read the fic, and twiggles has great study buddy that is probably going to develop into something more.
Nice
Pinkie uses hammerspace jumping
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The rule applies to double s only, but some try to use it plural forms too. I thing , that' time to learn how to use clauses.
Celestia doesn't have wards around her room? Weird.
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She does, Dawn just has access to them as her student. Also thanks for reading.
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😇
Whenever I see this anywhere, all I can think is XP
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