Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Cheese ? 🧀
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Sandwich? 🥪
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Was this chapter that cheesy from what you read?
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Oh he isn’t around yet considering where we are in the timeline.
I don't recall Dawn identifying Bon Bon as Agent Sweetie Drops and her identity was overwise never being spoken about. Does Dawn not remember her Agent Identity? How much does Dawn recall of "FiM"?
Bon Bon/Sweetie Drops is really getting the important missions now. That mare will be the director of SMILE one day!
.... I wonder if Bon Bon can make candy as powerful as the Ultimate Confectioner Ruruka Ando....
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Oh he knows and while he doesn’t remember exactly everything about FiM he still has the overall plot and important details remembered. I could have sworn I brought it up though as her first mission was befriending Lyra.
Close the gaps, Rarity!
This was a nice day to watch Ponyville.
What will Bon Bon do if Lyra asks her about Dawn? Possibly a conflict of professional and private interests?
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But why did either have to marry? Why do they have to be connected? It just feels so forced, out of anybody why do Dawn's parents find her. Feels like they could've been just family friends instead of this
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Guess it might be a bit confusing since I didn’t focus on them but… Basically Pear wasn’t in a great place after loosing her husband and developed feelings quickly for her saviors. It didn’t exactly start out as healthy but she also didn’t want to be alone.
Dawn’s parents also were somewhat feeling like empty nesters from him leaving, so Pear became a side replacement for the loss they were feeling in their own lives.
You also have to remember they are ponies so that need for ‘closeness’ is even more engrained into their social norms and herding/ getting married quickly is not looked down upon but something to be celebrated. Trial herds among young ponies is very common and sex is viewed more casually when outside of heat season and there’s no worries about producing foals.
As for Dawn’s parents finding her, that plays into the butterflies. Pear and Bright were destined to die on that delivery but because Dawn was born, Forest was working that storm and happened to find Pear while under attack.
I think that what you mean?
Nice wholesome fun. Pinkie is so funny
Still having us guess who actually be in relationships with dawn.
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Yeah. Even Idk who Dawn will end up with yet except maybe one or two.
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Oh no, the story states in "Unwanted family reunion. Pt2" that "[Celestia] had a junior S.M.I.L.E. agent befriend [Lyra]". It was clear that Bon Bon's mission was to befriend and monitor Lyra. But it was never stated that Dawn knows Bon Bon's agent identity.
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Ah he knows but never mentioned it since he didn’t want to explain why he knew.
"This message will self-destruct in 5 seconds."
As always thanks for the new chapter
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Is... actually did, just not violently
When you enjoy the little said chapters that means acts as a filler you know you've done well. Can't wait for more of your work
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🎶 morning in Ponyville shimmers... 🎶
Unless they're saying the order for the eggs and milk was given verbally through them, why are they blaming the delivery pony? 🤔
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Thats my line
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The delivery mare didn’t didn’t load up her cart properly so items got damaged resulting in not enough. But it was just carelessness not a true accident, which is what happens to Derpy.
How old is Bon Bon again? The younger half of the cast is supposed to be early teens, I think, so I'm a bit confused on where she stands.
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So I don’t think even she knows. She’s an orphan that was raised by S.M.I.L.E under an illegal project from when she was a baby. Celestia shut the project down but Bon Bon wanted to remain an agent so that’s where she is now. I would say she’s about 16 and with ponies living to be over 100 and maturing quickly thanks to magic and equine nature, age gaps are not as big of a deal as with humans.
I look forward to BonBons mental breakdowns when Dawn accidentally admits he knows she’s a secret agent. Also would you ever consider an interlude of discord’s perspective of the “Chaos” Dawn has inflicted upon the world?
I'm imagining a situation where a plant pot or loose shingle heads towards Dawn and Bon Bon either discreetly blocks or smack it away. Or, she 'conveniently' was there to pull or shove him out of the way.