Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Suprise, mini side chapter.
Nice world building
No real comment on this, just extra stuff is nice and also extra.
Not sure if Gioded is a name, a title or something else tho.
Ah.
I see where this is going.
Interesting twist with Tempest.
Chrysalis is totally going to target Dawn when that shoe drops. … Guy is going to have to get a Foalnapping Bingo Card at this rate. lol like Mokuba from Yugioh the Abridged series.
So Tempest will no longer be a "bad" person, that job will go to the really evil twins, interesting, very interesting
Thank goodness she put up some defenses.
Shouldn’t “Storm King” be capitalized?
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Ponies? Check!
Griffons? Check!
Thestrals? Technically In Progress!
Changelings? Imminent.
Everything Else? TBD.
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Fillyfriends? Likely.
Herd family? Possibly.
Hedgehogs? Increasingly probable.
Nightmare Moon? I think maybe.
Dawn: “The last guys had donuts. What kind of foalnapping is this? You don’t even have donuts.”
Foalnapper 1: “Oh, uh~ I guess we have some hard cider?”
Foalnapper 2: “Dude, that’s my cider.”
Foalnapper 1: “Yeah, but we don’t want to be worse than those last guys.”
Foslnapper 2: “Yeah. Buck those guys!”
Dawn: “Alright. Now we have a foalnapping.”
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Yeah idk why auto correct really messes with my stuff sometimes.
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The Thestrals still herd so they want him to sire a few foals with one of their own. They just care that he is a thestral alicorn not his previous bloodline.
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Typo sry, it was ‘gilded’ twins
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She’s still bad but working for those bits instead of relying on the storm king.
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Hmm that’s more fit for if he’s on a boat, also there was another fic I read recently that used that song.
great 3 chapters
I like the super mini chapters especially when it involves Tempest shadow.
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Yeah just a lol something to move the story along without the MC needing to be around.
A coup!
So this Tempest, unlike canon, won't be nowhere near loyal to the Storm King. I wouldn't be surprised if she ditches the moment the invasion starts happening instead of waiting 'til the end of it.
Butterfly effect? Yeeeah right.
More like steroids fed raging Mothra.
Seeing things derail so much already is incredibly satisfying.
Hmmm. Tempest the Storm Queen?
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And somewhere a certain Draconequus is laughing his plot off!
I wonder if tempest become dawn personal bodyguard,,,
And also herd member..
So hang on, is Dawn's alicorn form permanently a thestral? I originally thought it was just a joke used in the Gala, but when it was referenced again and again it became clear that wasn't the case.
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Not 100% just currently stuck like that. Normally he can shift on command which was something he learned after the Gala. The other alicorns can do it as well, (think NMM) but typically don’t.
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Well the Griffon's did the dirty work it was a minotaur who hired them and his goat assistant
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Dawn starts reviewing foalnappings on Yelp
Dawn: "Uah gross, I know foalnappers are poor but you can't even get a golded carriage to take me away in."
Foalnapper: "Uh uh, sh-shut up, I'm the one in charge here!"
Dawn: "You don't even a new herd member for me, fillies are literally everywhere how could you not foalnapp at least one, that's sorta your whole job."
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Why does this ending make me think your gonna have Tempeat(aka Fizzy) end up in Cheese's herd?