Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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YOU SWEET SUMMER CHILD IF YOU ONLY KNEW
So Lust for them is like fast food, sugary cereals and donuts?
It is the season to be running run run run
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Pointing out there major flaws. Starlight did start an occult against magic because her friends found there talent. Who's to say she doesn't do something just as drastic over having her heartbroken? They all have some growing up before any of there would really fit the roll. Also isn't AJ Dawn's brother? Yes it's not by blood but we don't know how the world handle that sort of taboo.
Well this is a nice chapter.
So rarity, flutter and RD get into a trial herd, well let's see how this trial by fire goes.
I suppose the shows flying school is the closes equivalent of csgu and the earth pony school. Cutie mark sure help in life.
Dawn and twilight going to go full into the school. Thou I definitely see Trixie leaving after the mandatory 4 years to start her magic show, starlight actually going with her to make sure she doesn't end up in a ditch. Could be an interesting way to have either a break up or maybe trying to make long distance relationship work.
List turning into super glue with isolation property? That a new one.
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Truethfully no one of the cast seem to be ready and fitting for a lead position, most have one or more quality that can lead to problems thou that a given in most situation.
WOW now rainbow dash, flutter shy and rarity hahaha thay have no idea and rarity thinks she is lead Mare trying to get balanced Dawn I can't whate for Dawn brings his 2 maybe 3 mairfrinds back home and introduce them to everyone
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Basically but worse since it can become addictive as well if digested instead of just spat out as goo/waste.
If both groups get together and show how serious they are, I’m pretty sure Dawn will have to let his secret out but just to them. Then nopony will want to back out of a prince’s herd -especially Rarity.
Well done, Fluttershy!! You were quite the persuasive one here!
All these clues about Lyra. Dawn, when are you going to try to coax something from her about this? Also, why won’t she ever have to deal with heat? Was she spayed or something? Or does she have some humanoid biology interfering with her pony?
Will Dawn start any alicorn-specific lessons?
Congratulations on Chapter 50, author!!
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So ponies handle non blood siblings in an odd manner. With the example of AJ and Dawn their parents would find it perfectly acceptable if they wanted to herd together.
In fact some herds will scout out a mare to join them if she is single and has a colt from a stud contract or if her previous her dissolved for some reason, just so the colt could get close to their own daughters. That situation is both good for the single mother, who wants a loving herd with a stallion, and potentially good for the colt as he’s now blood tied to the original herd if he sires a child with his ‘step sister’.
The ‘step sister’ (EX; AJ) might be interested since they are already family and she wouldn’t have to compete as hard for a stallion.
In the Example of Dawn and AJ if they got together and sires a foal, Dawn would be blood tied to clan Apple instead of just marriage tied via his mothers.
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Big Spoiler if you read this please don’t share. Thats fairly in line with what I’ll have happen. Trixie will go help with her parents magic show after the 4 years and Starlight will have to choose. Dawn will also need to head out for a while to track down the thestrals and train outside of Equestria similar to how Cadence did so the trial herds will dissolve but they will all remain in good standing.
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Oh Lyra is fine, she just doesn’t know if she will go through heat as a former human. Idk when I will have Dawn find out, it will probably be after mirror world if not at some other random point.
Thanks for writing this story! Love the pace right now.
Woo, another good chapter.
Much as I love the massive, hour and a half to read per chapter, grand epic stories, it's nice to have something like this too.
A fun little story with little slice of life chapters that updates frequently, so every day or two you get something new to read.
Keep up the good work!
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I’m stoked that you’re planning so far!!
I do like colts as well, despite my colors
I really hate how we have to point that out nowadays. Nothing against homosexual, trans, pan, est: but it makings using color's sometimes annoying since without knowing you could be imitating a pride flag you didn't even know existed
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Yeah but it does make for some great comedy in regards to RD.
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Never heard of them so….Oh wait do you mean the prince of the crystal empire in the Equestria chronicles series?
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I see, so he unconsciously suppressed those memories. That would actually explain somethings. You should mention that.
Thanks for talking the time to answer
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Odd I thought I did bring it up during one of the Nightmare encounters but maybe I did that thing where I thought about it but forgot to write it down.
read the two chapters before this one and this one all three are great
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Ty.
And now this is just one big mess.
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Point taken. I normally just read her being called Skittles. Pride is not used that often.
I've also gained a dislike for...I guess not wanting to make sexuality flag's?
Nice
Author-san may i have question?
How many chapters this story will start seoson 1 mlp and the future of dawns secret to his freinds
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It will honestly be a while before season 1 starts since there’s about 10 ish years left before NMM shows up.
Wait am i remembering it wrong or what, did he not find out she used to be human during the kidnapping?
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The readers found out but Dawn didn’t.
Couple instances of loosing and loose instead of losing and lose.
I dunno why that's such a common error world wide, but I figured I'd mention it.
Also you have Dawn spelled as Daw in the letter. Not sure if it's a nickname or not here.
I'd talk about the chapter itself, but I don't have much to say on it. I am enjoying this story a lot tho.
Would have been a great time for Lyra to reveal, but alas, the cards are not in alignment.
Heh... heheheheh. Heh. Sure he is