Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Nice.
Applejack is gonna get stuck in a ladder or a tree and ask drawn to help her "I'm stuck stepbro. Help me!"
This second chapter came out real quick lol, finished the previous chapter thinking I was done for now I went to my tracking and had to refresh it a couple times to make sure I wasn’t crazy upon seeing this story there still.
Anyways I’m intrigued what you plan on doing with Dawn and AJ but other then that great chapter and I can’t wait for the next one!
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I was more thinking just an awkward crush but now I almost have to do it even if they don’t in up permanently together. “Partner this heat is real bad can you help your big sis out?”
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That would be awesome. Just for the hilarious reaction. Personally I'm rooting for him getting with Celestia and Luna.
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With herding being a thing, I could see him ending up at least studding out for all of them.
Luna seems like a shoo-in for a deeper relationship and Flutters is clearly enamored. Twilight is probably going to realize sooner or later that she thinks he's attractive.
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Oh definitely, I don't think AJ will tho. I have more big sis vibes from her. Wouldn't mind it though.
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Agreed. According to the Chapter 20.5 age note they're all in potential partner range except for maybe Rarity, who has 6 years on him.
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Nah💀💀💀
Pleasant.
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Im pretty sure celestia knows him personaly so that childish moral outrage wouldnt work probably.
I like happy chapters like this. Just like Dew was thinking: everything’s right in the world.
Then comes the plot where you least expect it. Or maybe it slowly approaches from a distance like a wave that you can see but can’t do anything about till it gets closer.
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Officially, none yet.
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Lol that be halerius day and so much potential for misunderstanding and other shenanigans
another way would be for AJ and RD to get together like the fanon-semicanon has them end up marrying in background, and dawn get to put a bun in their oven like on paper his parent did.
For curiosity sake was the enchantment made with a spell that tie the whole thing to a bloodline or some dark ESC blood magic? I'm an Artificer nut for anything crafting related in fantasy or in general.
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So in my head it’s bloodline magic that got inadvertently mixed in with the family magic/curse. So the collar was tied to the strongest family member, Dawn who has the magic but no curse, once he was born. It wasn’t discovered since the grandparents never tried taking it off just giving orders with it. In fact if Dawn had tried, his orders would have overtaken his grandparents orders. But that’s all just side info.
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Hmm what's their bloodline exactly and curse, did I miss something in an explanation?
So how do bloodline work in your universe?
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...i swear if Dawn has the opposite problem of the curse im gonna LAUGH. (basically, if hes in you, it game over girl, you getting a foal)
Ah, the Japanese and Korean solution to non blood realatives
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Well that's one way to draw in a large herd or even many 'beneficial' mare to the table.
Thou that could also be annoying if ya just want casual s*x without getting the mare pregnant. Unless the curse only works in heat season that that another thing but if he can put a bun in the oven even outside of season? That'll be nightmare in some aspect.
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Well dang someone figured it out. Yes he will have a 100% success rate during heat season and a higher chance for colts. No off season without special intervention.
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Well interesting
He so going to be kept as a way to keep up the male population or even equalize it to 50/50
Random question: are ponies in verse full herbivore or more in line with irl?
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Ty as always. I think I’ll finally go back and make those connections today now that I have some new material out.
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They are closer to IRl. pegasi eat a bit of fish for the oils and the Thestrals do eat meat like the griffins though in smaller amounts. Most are vegetarian.
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Fair enough.
Don't know if this was asked previously or not but what is the general life span of ponies?
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Going with an average of 100 due to modern magic and medicine. Granted it varies by lifestyle and tribe etc.
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would be interesting if he ALSO becomes an alicorn.
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Hmm on one hand I feel it where it going on the other their never was a canon male Alicorn (unless you consider the Rule 63 verse of mlp)
And that actually bring a lot of grief for dawn since it means he immortal and has to barry all his family members and herd mate's.(unless ya going by that twit of ascended Alicorn aren't actually immortal just very powerful)
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My thought of it is more, celestia and luna deserve a stalion in their life that they are not gonna outlive. And the whole, better to have lived and lost than not lived at all.
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That based if they actually get together at all. Currently their interaction are more motherly then anything. (Aunt for Luna now since NM in control)
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True, but not necisarily needed to be the other way either. Another imortal would be another pony to not slip through the sands of time. And relasionships can change over time too.
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Again that if Ascendent Alicorn are also immortal or at least ageless.
My personal head canon is that alicorn life span is somewhat connected to their domain.
So Luna and Celestia are so long lived because they domain is connected to Celestial body and Starts. Since both have a marginally larger life span then practically anything we know, they live for proportionally longer then the ponies.
On the flip side love and friendship is somewhat finite in a sense it while permanent as the ideas of living thing it is can end just as abrupt as it starts.
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So in this AU alicorns in general are ageless to start but can become immortal. Meaning they can be killed by anything other than old age. Celestia and luna are true immortals though.
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Does that mean Luna and Celestia can't be killed period or they just invulnerable to most mortal means. Like if discord can kill them if he actually wanted and tried?
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Yah I was thinking ageless with my discussion rather than immortal.
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Basically yes. Its similar to Life Finds a way. When Celestia or Luna are killed they get sent to the asterial/alicorn realm and then can return to life. Other alicorns could learn this with enough power. Twilight will learn relatively quick as 'Magic' while Cadence might not for a long time. Idk about Dawn or if he will even become an alicorn yet as i have some other possibilities.
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AA so a godhood factual immortality. I suppose it take a bit of time for them to 'reform' and it already happened so that why ponies actually think them as goddess's.
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Reveled.
Heard*
Revelled*
Dawn will absolutely need to tread carefully when Celestia interrogates him about that.
Wouldn't she just call Granny "mom"?
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Well her name is Granny Smith, like the Apple. Ponies are more attached to cutie marks and smells than names as a primary identifier so don’t worry much about changing them. That’s why Derpy also goes by Muffins, married couples keep their names, and why Pear butter also went by Buttercup.
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