Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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I must admit, I did not expect this to happen quite so soon. I'm also surprised he didn't mention NMM to Celestia. First time to the astral/alicorn plane is a perfect excuse for seeing her... unless he's trying to build up trust with her for the future? I suppose it would be a bad look for him to betray NMM if Luna is going to get her memories...
Dunno how i feel about this one. I have no issue with Alicorning him but it feels too early, like it wasn't earned yet. I guess the explanation that Luna's power gave him the seed of ascention will have to suffice.
Still, enjoying the story and thanks for the Christmas present.
Okay now youre just being blatant.
Well, at least there were no pies.
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Yeah, I debated on it but I felt like that’s kinda the point with Dawn. He didn’t earn it but also doesn’t exactly want it since it will bring more trouble and he just wants to be a foal for now. Yet it’s chucked at him by Luna and his family if even accidentally.
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Yeah. Not much uniqueness with becoming an alicorn. If exploding is good enough for Twilight it's good enough for Everypony. Though I did like one fiction I read where the exploding was literal so guts, blood, and viscera was left behind.
Huh, quite an interesting chapter. Not at all what I was expecting. Just have to see how this goes from here.
You think he could make edible literal golden apples?
Merry Christmas! Also great chapter.
I accept this so far. Looking forward to what you have in store, you've done well with the story up until now so I have some good faith built up.
Lmao, Twilight will ascend dramatically, and him just popped out of existence then came back as an alicorn when he realized that what he was doing was not normal kek.
Hehehe love dawn’s antics. Thanks for the gift my good author and merry Christmas!
Oh yeah he's an alicorn can't wait but the public reaction will be when they announce it probably going to get a lot of marriage proposals from Nobles and from other countries to marry off their daughters to him.
Ok firstly down dawn or twilight will pull a rapidash on you.
Secondly dawn an alicorn now, well this be a blessed curse.
He'll now have to constantly refine his control or he will have Ichigo problems.
Hmm i wonder can he turn something to gold (nonliving preferably) and melt it reshape and cool it down and then return to original material.
That'll be an interesting way to make stuff. What if he mixes two different melted transmuted material?
Very good love to see this continue
Nice
A bit sudden, but can't complain
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Well...he did explode and the training area was a mess so. The only thing making Twilights dramatic is that fact it looks like her friends blow her up.
I wonder how Twilight will react when she finds out. Hopefully after her own.
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It will be. I don’t want to keep Twilight from becoming an Alicorn.
half
Notably this isn't actually cartoon magic, you can actually break apples in half. IMHO its way cooler than it is useful though as now you have two halves of an apple but you still have the core and the peel to deal with like you did before, except now it's no longer round and thus more difficult to peel, if you don't care about the peel it does make it easier to eat around the core.
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Edible and solid gold? Maybe by dragons? Can dragons eat gold? I don't think they do in canon. He could make apples with a literal gold peel. Would a apple be easier to peel if the peel was literal gold or would it be easier as it wouldn't want to adhere and would be thin so you could just cut/tear it then remove the entire peel easily as one piece.
Well that makes 13 male alicorns I know now.
I can’t remember the first one.
I can see Dawn with a hoof-kerchief wiping Twilight as she purses her lips with an embarrassed puffed-cheek scowl. lol
I guess those aberrant test scores are about to be explained. Hey… if the foaling spell was also a first, could Dew be eligible for alicorn as well? Would Celestia know if she ascended 9-years prior in this Equestria and has been hiding it?
Somealicorn made herself a husbando. That’s the opposite of waifu, right?
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1. Blank page?
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I know Nightmare Moon is evil, but he's 9. You gotta draw the line somewhere.
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She suspects he isn’t mentally that young after checking out his early dreams, so not as bad but still creepy. Also Alicorns live forever so she doesn’t mind waiting until he’s old enough.
What exactly is Dawn the alicorn of, because we have Celestia = sun, Luna = moon, Cadance = love, so is Dawn the alicorn of balance or what, his brand is that of the tai chi symbol except with the day and night.
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I also forgot about blank page.
Cure wave. Good story
Off the mark, first in the series, has 1, author Goldfur. Very good read, Still on going.
A different perspective, starts the series, has 3.5 alicorns, author Goldfur(last book in series you see a modified star trek.) Very fun series. Completed for now
The worst equestrian necromancer has one. And hes not the main character. Rated T and it's a light hearted comedy. Does not go into the necro magic at all. 6-7 hour read and it only gets real serious 3 times. My face hurts every time I read through it.
Alicorn of music, story interesting but canceled.
Many more but they are very short and canceled.
All the ones I listed are good reads and are for more mature audiences. No porn but the occasional guard walk by door, turns red, and walks a little faster type of thing.
Too*
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Neil from AAA? ;P
Is it me or the reactions have gotten a bit dull. I feel like the reactions do not correspond to the magnitud of the events.
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Gary Stu.
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Seeing it to. Feels rushed don't you think? 🤔
Perfectly Balanced as all things should be...
You literally sound like his Mom
Dawn: *performs spell that no unicorn could as an entry exam*
The Universe: *sleeps*
[months larer]
Dawn: *repeats the spell by Celestia's request*
Celestia: Dawn, no unicorn was able to pull off that spell, not even Clover Herself.
The Universe: WAIT HOW DID I MISS THAT
"You're an alicorn, congra-!"
"Nope." Leaves.
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Yah just read that one Blank page is a human turned pony very good read Haven't finished it yet. Made by Hiver the first story/Book is [New Beginnings] I would suggest reading it Good slice of life.
I almost feel Dawn ascending way earlier is kind of parodying the many other human turned pony ascension. Honestly laughed so hard with just how out of the blue it was. But you did low key set up beforehand.