Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Well the idiots who decided to kidnapp him certainly deserve to be punished.
lulled, like lullaby
Also, take your time, you spoiled us earlier, so I certainly don't demand the previous pace, as nice as it'd be, and am fine with whatever you give us.
As for this band of ponies heading to Canterlot, it almost seems TOO smooth, and I'm just waiting for the other horseshoe to drop. It'll be nice to see a happy reunion tho.
Also is it wrong of me to hope to see a scene or two of Dawn getting absolutely smothered in affection, like wing hugs, regular hugs, snuggles, from his trial herd, parents, friends and or Celestia herself?
I hope he gets to spend some time to just be loved is all, and know just how much he's missed.
I don't remember the pendent being mentioned before but it certainly makes sense for him to have such a thing. I'm excited to see Dawn introduce the
bat poniesThestrals to the rest of the family.It seems Celestia has made peace with her other self for quite some time. Hope Luna can do it too.
I wonder how Celestia will react to Dawn having murdered the gryphon kidnapper. He didn't exactly do it in a fit of rage, but I wouldn't call it premeditated either, so Idk if it'd be considered 'in cold blood'.
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Yeah it’s one of those things that make sense but wasn’t mentioned until needed. Twilight has one as well but doesn’t really grasp it’s full potential.
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Technically, they were all eaten by beasts. But yeah it will be an interesting reaction.
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Well all direct harm caused by Dawn would probably fall under self defense since they literally foalnapped him and Dawn didn't intentionally bring the beasts to them to eat them so at best you could charge Dawn with gross negligence but considering he is a minor (biologically) they would probably go easy on him and don't forget with the power of the royal treasury and nepotism anything is possible
Imago didn’t mention Trixie? Did something happen?
I don’t remember the seal, but I am glad Dawn has it. That could have gotten complicated. There’s going to be lots of talks with the Guard, methinks. PT them until no more racism, Shining. Hoorah.
Celestia is calling him her alicorn colt… I don’t know if I should pat Dawn on the back or urge caution. Probably both.
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Ah she only mentioned Twilight since she’s Celestia’s student.
I can safely say Star Song is getting on my nerves. If she is the same age as Dawn and his group, she sure doesn't act like it. Spoiled and immature. Childish if you will. While I don't mind if she sticks around and gets character development, I hope she gets some reality slapped her way if she tries to ingratiate herself into his current trial herd. I don't see that going well.
Mango is an interesting addition and she seems cute enough. I am also looking forward to Dawn getting pony piled from all the family and friends eager to see him safe.
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One day she will learn she can use it to commandeer any library or research site in the realm!
Nice
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Your honor I would like to present exhibit A:
- ch76 shortly before they were left to be eaten by the local wildlife.
We know it wasn't because we get to see his inner thoughts on the matter but if anyone had survived to tell the tale that's how it would look.
Beat the evil work with that nice hefty stick!
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If only
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Hrmmm, maybe you need a better stick then
eeeee loving the updates!
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Or alicorn have metaphysical powers to proscribe the fate
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For the evil inside yourself, a whip is required.
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Im assuming thats a case of "mah babbie" but would be amusing if stealth yandre daybreaker was a thing. (by that i mean not murder yandre, more like, earn it yandre? i might not even be getting the terms right.)
Let's hope he doesn't get napped a second time on a train don't forget about Spike he be happy too
You know, they could make this a yearly event, only make it fun next time!
Luckily pony prejudice is being held back. For now.
great chapter
Good chapter!
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But the evil is external
Honestly,if you ignore the tribalism, the reaction of the guards is at least somewhat justified. Given Dawn's ponynapping, it is likely that all guards in the area are in high alert, and then suddenly a group of thestrals - who DO abduct colts and stallions - appears in the area where a colt has vanished with an unconscious (sleeping) colt. Obviously that is suspicious.
Colt left the thestral city before he delivered Nightmare or Luna's message. He's gotta be the worst messenger pony ever
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Yeah lol.
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Woops XD
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He said she was returning. Message delivered he just didn't say when.
Even if it was unintentional he still technically delivered the message. 2 stars
I've only just realized that we haven't had any Pinkie Pie interludes since chapter 71. And while a self-aware fictional character is concerning, the lack of one when they are expected is even more so.
Now before I go anywhere further, a disclaimer is in order:
Any attempts to understand the nature of Pinkie Pie involves risk of confusion, frustration, insanity, And potential slapstick injury should the individual in question try to apply logic.
The last time we had her commentate beyond 4th wall was when she was warning Dawn about Flutterbat near the tree of harmony. Now one might assume the tree had something to do with that, or it's technically coincidence, as dawn would meet up with he Main 6 not too much later in the story, so Pinkie had no need to interrupt for a while, which would leave a sizeable timeline of events of which could have been the actual catalyst for her "radio scilence".
Additionally, I may be mistaken but as far as I recall Her pink text is only present when the story shifts to Dawn's perspective.
My best guess? it either has something to do with cheese or Nightmare moon. Either Pinkie doesn't feel like it (either because she doesn't want to weigh in on Cheese until she meets him, or dislikes the Thestrals trying to make a move before her), or Dawn's subconscious is already full with another entity becoming closer to escaping her cosmic restraints.
Dawn going whit the thestral and not delivering the only message he need to deliver? are we sure he is Celestia pupil and not Derpy`s?
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Agreed, i miss those parts.