Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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I wonder if he'll wait until she gets her pair of wings to reveal his.
Wholesome and cute!
Dawn so going to be nearly couth as a Alicorns untill the big revel.
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She's smart and good at magic, I think she'll notice before then. And if she doesn't notice the wings themselves, she'll notice that something is amiss with him.
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Who knows she can be quite oblivious to the world around when it isn't magic or Celestia related. And magic rates higher of the two.
yay new chapter. Spotted three times you were attacked by wild typos. Beware the typo, they are both fast and sneaky.
and started filling the bath while reliving myself [relieving] I think?
than I tempered from the show [remembered] ?
they were not the calm molts like snow [motes] ?
Good story keep up the good work.
Take your time bud it's all good.
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Reminds me of the time The Doctor kissed a River Song that only he can see and after he was like, “Since I’m the only one who can see you god knows how that looked!?”
What’s a Janefilly?
Hey there's been a update. Yay. Can't wait for more and keep up the good work
I do wonder if his wings will be discovered before he decides to reveal them. Love the chapter by the way, worth the wait!
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A Janefilly is like the male equivalent of a tomboy
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Yep, in RGRE it’s a colt/stallion that acts like a filly/mare but technically it’s just acting more like a typical human male since the gender roles are reversed…
Not gonna lie, would’ve love to see the freak out Twilight would probably have if she saw Dawn’s wings. Anyways great chapter as always and I’m rearing for the next one.
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I have zero doubts that it will happen eventually. And when it does, it will be hilarious
Nice
Worth the wait banger chaptor as always ill be reading 👀
I imagine Dawn’ll have to inform his mothers for some wing use and maintenance practices but also because of bathing and other activities that might give him away? Pinkie probably figured it out, anyway.
Trixie has it bad. Go get him, girl.
I imagine Celestia made a ‘whipping’ sound just under her breath right there. lol
Dawn hasn’t hung out with Cadence since ascending?
Thanks for the chapter
Glad to have you back.
Question: he's not gonna hide his new alicorn status to his parents (Applejack's mon too of course) right?
This level of wholesome fluff is great. I love it.
Now time to show off for the parents!
I hope it doesn't become exaggerated RGRE.
I'm really enjoying this story.
I recommend getting a proofreader or an editor. I noticed some sentences are missing some punctuation.
But overall, very nice story.
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I think you mean Glorious!
We know that Dawn saw through candaces disguise but why doesn't he see through Feathers disguise
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Changeling vs unicorn magic. Also he already knew about Cadence from his memories so knew what to look out for while he doesn’t suspect Feather at all of any deception.
There was a post that stated that Starlight and Twight were the only confirmed members of his future herd. I have a feeling Trixie wouldn't mind joining and Lyra kinda wants to rejoin. Hopefully he'll have at least one non-equine member.
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Just reading Spike's interaction with him makes me feel like he'll literally refer to Twilight and Dawn as mom and dad. Once he found out he'll pretty much stop but push them both together to make it literal and call them as such again.
Roar!
But he already knows how to preen? Learned from his dam for when she was feeling lazy, and demonstrated on Flutters if memory serves.