Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
Page generated in 0.028 seconds
Total duration
937 users online
160,257 hits today, 2,724,632 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Two solid chapters.
Things are really gonna get going now and I look forward to it.
A couple of things though.
A pinky is a finger while a Pinkie is a pony.
Also minitours should be minotaurs, though I am sure that they give lovely mini-tours of their labyrinths back home.
Thanks for the update!
11678438
TY, spelling should be fixed.
That was fun!!
Looks like Twilight might have two magic rivals and a romantic rival. Good luck, fillies.
Thank god The typo (and it must've been one) from last chapter had me worried Twilight would be Male... You should probably go back and fix it.
Interesting story so far, but a lot of spelling and grammatical errors. Still, its an interesting story and that is what counts the most.
A cannon is an artillery piece, the word you are looking for is canon
11700161
A cannon is also a bone in a horse’s legs.
Meaning that, yes, ponies can’t do finger guns, but they can do hoof cannons!
This silly comment brought to you by and insomnia!
11706018
Then there is the barrel where they keep the ammo.
Pens*
Meet*
Hehe, way to ingratiate yourself to one of the mane seven. 😈
You used meat instead of meet here. Very different meanings. I'm really enjoying the fiction so far though.