Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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And just in time for the new chapter today.
This was really sweet, I liked this chapter.
I wonder if Dawn and Twilight are going to try send spike to public school. Nobody can out eat Derpy when it comes to the muffins. And I wonder when Twilight's going to try set her claim on Dawn after what Fluttershy did.
Did Dawn do something wrong or were they expecting to have him alone?
Was Rainbow on duty? Was Dawn curious about who Dinky’s dad is?
Big character development for Trixie ! Good for you, Trixie.
Hooray!! The CMCs together and they have Spike!
Nice
Hmm, yes. Yes indeed. They are cute.
Overall I think it helps Harmony's plans that they all met earlier. Stronger bonds and all that.
Besides Glim Glam shouldn't feel the need to create Our Town. Chrysi too would probably be easier to take care of.
Huh, one variable changed and things snowballed from there.
Good wholesome chapter, many say it too slow but I feel you nailed the MLP mix of adventure, slice of life and wholesome cuteness.
Now all we need is for the twin changling grubs to go to ponyville school with spike and CMC and watch the chaos summon discord and him adopting the 6 as his personal students.(I can already hear Harmony mental scream)
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Butterfly effect.
Thou I argue that chrysalis will be harder to deal with unless of course the author choose to lobotomized chrysalis.
Since now she has a 'rival queen' to deal with and Canterlot being aware of them plus less forces to work with. She mostly go the utterly ruthless tactician mod with liberal use of divide and conquer strategy. Lost of sabotages and treachery. So I see the weeding fiasco being a lot more dark and gruesome.
“She seams nice. I’m actually a younger sister myself and technically a mom.” [seems]
found this one for you gotta love spellcheck.
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Nah Rainbow napping after practicing stunts all day and is more excited for Cider.
Ug it didn’t save my last minute edit of that ‘huff’ line. Should read a bit better now.
*That looked bored
I do believe this is a typo
towners. At first I thought you were talking about Twilights tower, but then I clued in on what you actually met.
I normally don't correct speech as this might just be a way of talking, but it should be "well"
at the sight of foals, or at the sight of the foals. Maybe even "at the sad sight of the foals"
and bord is bored. The only Bord I know is in Fire Emblem.
Wow, that went a lot better than Twilights first visit to Ponyville in canon. I have to wonder what Celestia's excuse will be for sending her off later. JUST the summer sun celebration? OR is she going to throw some nonsense in there about friends again. Nor sure if the story will get that far, but I'd love to see it. Looking forward to more of this.
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Ty hopefully that reads a bit better now. Celestia won’t need an excuse she will just have her go visit her friends while working on the Celebration.
Heh, Harmony working overtime. Had to sent Sweety to let Twi see real Rarity.
Perhaps Twilight can disillusion Rarity on the glam of Canterlot couture. Maybe even change how she approaches Blueblood at the gala eventually?
Wonder if the comparison of Derpy's strabismus is solid,or if her condition is symptomatic of a deeper problem?
Pony cuddle pile is best pile!
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i think she wont want blueblood at all considering dawn is right there.
Good chapter
The fact that it might be true!
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Haven't even heard anything about Blueblood yet
You gotta LOVE whatever Eldritch Horror Pinkie is
???????
Any theories? Or is this just another symptom of being in an alternate universe?