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ghostcyclone02


I am me, maybe, I might be someone else. *mutters* At least, I was last time I checked, oh well.

Sep
22nd
2017

A Thing Happened. · 7:42pm Sep 22nd, 2017

I wrote a thing, didn't turn out entirely how I'd originally planned it, but eh. Shit happens. Hopefully it isn't too bad.

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Thanks for the fave on Star Eater! Thumbs up if you like it!

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Well they're bug-ponies, so...
Swarm + string
Swing?
Starm?

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...would a group of fans of Changeling fics be called a swarm?

2449225 I'm trying man. I swear.:twilightsheepish:

As for long winded, I'm just happy to get some some actual feedback. Besides release time, is there anything you feel I could improve?

2448730 Jekyll is a likable character. Sunbutt is a bitch. And Luna is best pony. The whole King of Tartarus thing was a twist that I was expecting to be bullshit, but ended up well executed i the end. Otherwise, GREAT character development throughout the story, you had me hooked from the start.
Need to stop with the long replies, cheers, and until the next, Good Luck!

Edit: King, not Kong

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