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ghostcyclone02


I am me, maybe, I might be someone else. *mutters* At least, I was last time I checked, oh well.

Sep
22nd
2017

A Thing Happened. · 7:42pm Sep 22nd, 2017

I wrote a thing, didn't turn out entirely how I'd originally planned it, but eh. Shit happens. Hopefully it isn't too bad.

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Well they're bug-ponies, so...
Swarm + string
Swing?
Starm?

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...would a group of fans of Changeling fics be called a swarm?

2449225 I'm trying man. I swear.:twilightsheepish:

As for long winded, I'm just happy to get some some actual feedback. Besides release time, is there anything you feel I could improve?

2448730 Jekyll is a likable character. Sunbutt is a bitch. And Luna is best pony. The whole King of Tartarus thing was a twist that I was expecting to be bullshit, but ended up well executed i the end. Otherwise, GREAT character development throughout the story, you had me hooked from the start.
Need to stop with the long replies, cheers, and until the next, Good Luck!

Edit: King, not Kong

2449167 It's an original idea for a 'displaced' story (not that I don't enjoy them, hell, look at my favourites :derpytongue2: ) with an engaging storyline that makes part of me wish you would push out chapters at a faster rate, but at the same time, quality over quantity, right?
At the same time it makes me wish writer's block wasn't such a bitch and that I could get back to writing my own story, with it's mediocre comedy and toku bullshit.

As for the bio :twilightsheepish: there's a story behind that, but for another place and another time.

Regardless, this is probably getting way too long winded for a reply, and I am curious to see if you're going to integrate the story into the Displaced multiverse at some point. Until the next, good luck!

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