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Carapace


That guy who writes too many AUs and fluffy fics, apparently. Avatar is by Viria.

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Cadance didn't know what to expect when her formerly banished Aunt Luna returned from her thousand year banishment. But, she's quite entertained by the hilarity. Especially if it means a chance to play a little joke.

Edited by Habanc. Preread by The Albinocorn, Foals Errand, and Timaeus

Cover art was done by Silfoe and used with permission! In fact, this fic is a gift for her!

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Comments ( 310 )

Just as good as I remember - the characterisation is perfect. :pinkiehappy:

Nice one.

Timaeus #3 · Jan 23rd, 2015 · · 1 ·

This was fun to read. Nothing too serious in any sense of the word, but rather a nice little piece that captures some silly antics that I can totally see Cadance getting up to.

I still think Luna saying "Huzzah" is absolutely perfect... maybe you should have her say that for when she may or may not get a date with a certain pony in another fic you may or may not be writing. :raritywink:

Now don't you feel better? :derpytongue2:

Nice one. Quick, funny, and a very nice maneuver from Celestia.

:rainbowlaugh: A great read!
Also, I pressed the like button.. suddenly 5 turned into 11!

Fucking.... BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm sure you expect me to down vote this, greg.

But I wont!

I UP VOTED IT!

i.imgur.com/hhGkbGO.gif

All hail the most adorable one! also I still love this!

That was cute and adorable.

That was a cute story. I liked how you used Luna's personality from "Luna Eclipsed" here. The story had me smiling from start to finish, and I'm glad that I read it. Great work as usual. :twilightsmile:

Cadance, you should have known you can't out-troll the master! :trollestia::rainbowlaugh:

Just to let you know, you went a little back and forth with the spelling of Cadance's name. There are three two times you have it as "Cadence."

5540979
...I thought I caught all of those... ZOMG!

5540984
Er, make that two instances. My search command was counting the one from my comment, and there is one instance where the actual word cadence is used... :twilightsheepish:

For ease of fixing, here's where they are:

And in front of young Princess Cadence?

The fur on the back of Cadence’s neck stood,

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I think he left them in to spite me...

Hahaha I would love to see a sequel

It was fun to have read this. The moment Celestia had that wicked smile on her face, I felt true sympathy for Cadence. One will never have one over on sun butt for too long. :rainbowlaugh:

GOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLDDDDDD.

(THY TALE HATH—)
(*ahem* Indoor voice, Luna. We talked about this.)
(Ah, yes, of course. Our apologies. Anyway – thy tale hath amused Us greatly, o humorous scribe. Pray do continue thy literary shenanigans!)

No one out trolls Celestia:trollestia:

Such silly goodness. I love it!

A valiant attempt young Cadance, but your facing a mare who has had over 1000 years to refine the craft of trolling.

I'm honestly surprised that no one ever made a story about this before, but you went and took the plunge. This was magnificent, and I was holding my laughter back as well.

5542036 Buck holding laughter back, I dropped my laptop and didn't give a damn!

If you try and troll Celestia, she will troll you back. So if you try and mess with her, you better hold tight, because you're about to go for a ride. :trollestia:

I think this is S1! Luna we're talking about here. Luna in S2 and beyond would revert to medieval speech when angered.

This would be just a priceless introduction of Cadance to Luna, poor Caddy trying so hard to out do Celestia but realizing far too late Celly isn't about to go down alone if given the chance to take a tormentor with her ;0)

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
Found this before going to sleep. Laughed so hard I practically rolled off the side of bed.

Man that felt good. You caught all the characters to a T! :pinkiehappy:

That was fun.

Well, this was awesome.

5540779 You flatter me, Meri. I'm glad you think so, I was hoping I stayed true to them.

5540784 Why thank you, interwebz person!

5540793 Story? What story? I know nothing :trixieshiftleft:

5540820 I do! And yes, I was hoping the little maneuver was executed well!

5540823 SORCERY!

5540834 Thanks! Glad you liked it!

5540847 That gif... I love it... Fuckin' saved :rainbowwild:

5540920 I can't even be mad lol

5540968 Glad you think so!

5540975 Yeah, I wanted to do a bit of a callback to her old personality and have a bit of fun with it. Thanks, Manaphy!

5540979 D'oh!

5541058 No, I didn't.

5541117 She needed Pinkie's false mustache :trollestia:

5541253 R-Really? Thanks!

5541089 Ehhh, I dunno about that one, m8. Maybe another silly oneshot somewhere down the line.

5541340 Haha! Well, if Luna herself approves, that's all I need!

5541385 O-Okay. :twilightoops:

5541434 Damn straight!

5541566 Yaaaay!

5541588 She gets a "you tried" sticker.

5542036 Glad you found it funny! Thanks!

5542285 Don't drop your laptop, man! :twilightoops:

5542311 Indeed. Never troll the master.

5542925 You're welcome! :twilightsmile:

I........ Am going..... To PUKE!................ I laughed.... and laugh....... and laughed........ way too much...... I laughed so much pinkie pie would tell me to stop laughing or i might hurt myself!

Nuuuuuuuu i must have more:twilightangry2:

Hah! I knew someone was going to do this.

Going to have to read it now.

Ok, this was awesome, and we need a sequel right now :)

Oh, Cadence! Prepare for unforeseen consequences!

:facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof: out of :facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof:

Hahaha! My smile right now -> :pinkiehappy:

In just one day, you've smashed my Magnum Opus--hyped up for months, with 7 editors and hundreds of hours work put in--in ratings, views, and acclaim, with 5% the word count.

I'm not even mad. I'm just impressed.

Take my like. Such an achievement ought be congratulated.

SO close and yet so far. Good try though Caddy

Oh god, this was great.

Well done, dude. Well fucking done.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Never bullshit a bullshitter? :trollestia:

Great job. I clap for your hard work on such a lovely tale.
Wonderful. Funny too I suppose.

This is a lot of fun, what a great little story.

*cackles* And so began the great prank war.

Just wait for the moment Luna is introduced to her other nephew. You know, the one that also rather suspiciously happens to look like Celestia...

At first when Cadance was in control, I was laughing so damn hard.

When Celestia caught on and took control, I laughed even harder.

I can't stop laughing. Oh god... my sides! They hath been slain!:trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:
Just... just everything!

A Joke Too Far is ranked 1st on Fimfiction.

Well, that's it then. I bow to your superiority. I can never hope to match this. :ajsleepy:
Good show, dude. Good show. :rainbowdetermined2:

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