2813277 Really emoji's are unessicarly and add little. Not releasing the same info over and over is solid advice too. Every writer has weaknesses doesn't matter if your an amateur or a pro. If your unclear what the person means by their criticism ask them, a good critic wants you to improve and will tell you more.
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Really emoji's are unessicarly and add little. Not releasing the same info over and over is solid advice too. Every writer has weaknesses doesn't matter if your an amateur or a pro. If your unclear what the person means by their criticism ask them, a good critic wants you to improve and will tell you more.