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Willsons


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I offer black and white or full color portraits of you OC's for free. You can find some of my work below. I now also do cover art, free also.








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2125768 I'm at chapter four of the second book, it's getting pretty insane.

Thank you very much for the fav on Legionnaire. I hope you continue to enjoy it as things get progressively more... insane.

Thanks for the fave on The Twilight Enigma! :twilightsmile:

1704885 There are more coming.

Thank you kindly for the faves.

1687548 Meant to do it when I first read it, forgot :(

Thanks for the fave of 'Sins of the Fathers'! :)

Thanks for the watch! :twilightsmile:

1354865 Neat, can't wait for more.

1354698 Yes, more is coming. I estimate it's about 1/6th or so of the way through. And I'm quite glad you enjoyed it. :pinkiehappy:

1354691 Enjoyed it today (I might say I was hoping it would last me a little longer but more is coming, right?) and will continue to enjoy it as you update it twords completion.

Many thanks for the fav on New Roam Innovatus, good sir. :twilightsmile: I do hope you enjoy it.

1321977 They were both amazing, how could I not favourite them? I can't wait for more!

And thanks for the fave on The Luna Cypher, too! :twilightsmile:

Thanks for the fave on The Celestia Code! :twilightsmile:

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Overall it read like a sequel of something

That would be from my choice to tell the overall story with a non-linear narrative. We can talk about it further on Skype; I don't particularly want spoilers posted where just anyone can see them.

I didn't know what was up and what was down, my comprehension of the story just kinda flopped and it took me most of the story to get my head back into shape.

And by then, it reverts! It's just another day in their crazy lives, and everypony goes home.

1281145 Overall it read like a sequel of something, it felt like I was missing a massive amount of information, some of it I could accept, like the mind meld thing but discord as a father just came out of left field, among other things. I would have loved some of these things explained in more detail, it's kinda why I followed you.

The confusing parts were trying to ascertain who was who, just as I got used to one being male and one being female, BOOOOM! I didn't know what was up and what was down, my comprehension of the story just kinda flopped and it took me most of the story to get my head back into shape.

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Allegations of a too fast pace I can't defend against; I don't think it is, but that's a subjective thing.

However, was it only confusing from the pronouns I used? If so, that's kind of the point. If not, I'd like to know what it was so I can hopefully clear it up.

1280642 Must have gotten you confused with someone else.... Irregardless I've now read all of your stories and thoroughly enjoyed them, even if I found the body swap a bit confusing and fast paced at times.

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