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The 24th Pegasus

Author of the Commander Hurricane series (A Song of Storms), co-founder of the Price of Loyalty universe, and overall world building fanatic. Join my discord!

The 24th Pegasus Joined 6th Sep, 2012 · Offline

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Hey, Look! Story News!

I'll try to update this thing daily so you can see where I'm at with your favorite stories.

Stories in Progress:

A Rainbow of a Different Color: Chapter 25: Posted
Story posted on Equestria Daily

Census: Chapter 6 Posted

Unshaken: Actively Updating
This CYOA story will continue until the main character's fate is resolved.

Accolades:

Of Skies Long Forgotten: Complete
Story posted on Equestria Daily

Snow and Shadows: Complete
Story Posted on Equestria Daily

Sunny with a Chance of Shipping
Part of the Lovefest Fic Event for EqD, 2/14/15
Dafuq was I even on when I wrote this

The Mare of the Equestrian Eighth: Complete
Winner of 'The Rarity' award in EFNW's Scribblefest 2016

Daring Doodle Donkey: Complete
Story posted on Equestria Daily

Why?: Complete
Story posted on Equestria Daily

Sierra: Complete
Submitted for EFNW's Scribblefest 2017

Dashes to Dashes, Dust to Dust: Complete
Honorable Mention in Jake the Army Guy's Horsewords Extravaganza

Numbers: Complete
Story posted on Equestria Daily

The Music of the Reef: Complete
Second place winner in Jake The Army Guy's Horsewords Extravaganza 2!

24's 2021 Goals:
[ ] Pass 1100 followers
[1/6] Publish 6 stories
[ ] Finish Unshaken
[ ] Finish the rough draft of TTM3
[ ] Participate in at least 2 writing contests

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My Best Work

  • Why? As an orca pony swims one night among the fiery monuments of a global conflict, she finds a sailor freezing to death in the arctic cold. She has only one question for him. by The 24th Pegasus 4,350 words · 614 · 4
  • The City Must Survive Under the ceaseless snow and the frigid frost, there is only one command: the city must survive, no matter the cost. by The 24th Pegasus 8,117 words · 283 · 8
  • Surviving Sand Island An airship wreck leaves Rainbow Dash and Rarity stranded on a deserted island. Together, they must find a way to survive until help comes—if it comes. by The 24th Pegasus 482,403 words · 458 · 34
  • Numbers Fluttershy suddenly starts seeing timers over ponies' heads. So why does Rainbow Dash only have three hours left? by The 24th Pegasus 12,129 words · 1,025 · 10
My personal favorites and best work among the stories I've written. It's a good sampling of my work if you're not ready to commit to the big Price of Loyalty series.

More Featured Stories

  • Midnight Oil In the middle of the night, Rarity forsakes sleep to work on a special project for a special somepony. by The 24th Pegasus 3,104 words · 228 · 8
  • The Mare of the Equestrian Eighth A mare, a soldier. A soldier, a hero. A hero, a veteran. A veteran, forgotten. by The 24th Pegasus 2,564 words · 218 · 3
  • Celebration at Twilight's Twilight just accidentally killed everyone in Ponyville. Celestia's coming to visit later that day. She has to think of something to keep her from finding out, and fast. by The 24th Pegasus 3,104 words · 766 · 15
  • Unshaken The age of gunslingers is coming to an end. As the law closes in on outlaws across the Equestrian southwest, Kestrel must find a way to help her wanted gang of misfits escape or die trying. [A CYOA Story] by The 24th Pegasus 203,827 words · 83 · 4
  • Dashes to Dashes, Dust to Dust When Lightning Dust and Rainbow Dash meet in a bar, Lightning begins a journey of redemption, discovery... and love. by The 24th Pegasus 13,716 words · 176 · 10
Apr
5th
2021

New Story: Night Moves · 10:10pm April 5th

It's another one of them stories where I hear a song on the radio and then just have to write a story to capture that feel. This time, it's Bob Seger's "Night Moves", hence the title.

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The Price of Loyalty

  • A Song of Storms: Of Skies Long Forgotten The pegasi that founded Equestria have a dark past, a past Commander Hurricane played a key role in. by The 24th Pegasus 107,531 words · 461 · 8
  • Where Loyalties Lie: Honor Guard Rainbow Dash saves Princess Luna's life, and uncovers a conspiracy bigger than Equestria itself. by LoyalLiar 219,645 words · 700 · 16
  • A Beginner's Guide to Heroism A unicorn wizard must come to terms with what it means to be a hero, and whether that choice is worth abandoning his magical mentor's teachings. by LoyalLiar 246,346 words · 177 · 4
  • Wind and Stone The Red Cloud War saw the pegasi lose everything to the griffon hordes. Legends rose, heroes died, and through it all, Pathfinder survived. Eighty years later he must confront those painful memories. Memories of loss, of home, of the wind and stone. by Ruirik 225,126 words · 177 · 9
  • A Song of Storms: Shattered Skies Two brothers, separated by cruel circumstance, shall face a great war apart and be forever changed. by Sigur024 53,529 words · 45 · 1
These stories are a part of the Price of Loyalty universe, covering different aspects of Equestrian history, past and present.

Top Favorites

  • Austraeoh Rainbow Dash flies east. by Imploding Colon 212,744 words · 2,608 · 84
  • Silver Glow's Journal Silver Glow takes an opportunity to spend a year at an Earth college, where she'll learn about Earth culture and make new friends. by Admiral Biscuit 997,130 words · 1,433 · 97
  • The Mare in the High Castle Under the eternal moonlight, a hoofful of strangers cross paths on the streets of Canterlot, capital of the Empire of the Moon, over the course of one eventful day. by ponichaeism 161,695 words · 150 · 17
  • Spring is Dumb Rainbow Dash definitely didn't do anything wrong. Rarity is the one who's wrong. Rainbow Dash is absolutely, totally, a hundred percent sure of it. But then why did she just buy a wagon load of apology bouquets? by HoofBitingActionOverload 9,255 words · 1,372 · 38
  • The Writing on the Wall Beneath the earth rests something beyond equine understanding. by Horse Voice 5,659 words · 1,456 · 24
My favorite works of all time. Give them a read sometime.
Comments ( 170 )
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Darthzelda
Darthzelda #170 · March 2nd · · ·
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are we going to see those moonshiners from unshaken again

Darthzelda
Darthzelda #169 · February 23rd · · ·
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you'll find I can get very wierd

The 24th Pegasus
The 24th Pegasus #168 · February 23rd · · ·
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3006983
That sounds like a very specific niche kind of fic. I'm sure you'll find somebody interested in writing it, but I'll have to say no to that concept.

Darthzelda
Darthzelda #167 · February 23rd · · ·
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Would you ever try and write a story about Reel big fish being teleported into one of your stories

The 24th Pegasus
The 24th Pegasus #166 · February 20th · · ·
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3005881
At the moment I don't plan to. Unshaken is sort of an experiment I wanted to run to satisfy my own curiosity. I may do more one day, but I'm not sure about it right now.

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