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The 24th Pegasus

Author of the Commander Hurricane series (A Song of Storms), co-founder of the Price of Loyalty universe, and overall world building fanatic. Patreon!


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Keep on Spinnin', Spinny Horse

Probably Rarity When She Sees the Bottom of My Page

Hey, Look! Story News!

I'll try to update this thing daily so you can see where I'm at with your favorite stories.

Stories in Progress:

A Rainbow of a Different Color: Chapter 25: Posted
Story posted on Equestria Daily

Census: Chapter 5 Posted

Two Thousand Miles, Book 2: 24 Chapters Written
Story will be posted and regularly updated once it is complete

Surviving Sand Island: Updating Daily

Completed Stories:

Of Skies Long Forgotten: Complete
Story posted on Equestria Daily

Snow and Shadows: Complete
Story Posted on Equestria Daily

The Life I Chose: Complete

Brother of Mine: Complete

Sunny with a Chance of Shipping
Part of the Lovefest Fic Event for EqD, 2/14/15
Dafuq was I even on when I wrote this

The Torch be Ours: Complete

Midnight Oil: Complete

The Mare of the Equestrian Eighth: Complete
Winner of 'The Rarity' award in EFNW's Scribblefest 2016

We've Got Tonight: Complete

Daring Doodle Donkey: Complete
Story posted on Equestria Daily

Why?: Complete
Story posted on Equestria Daily

Sierra: Complete
Submitted for EFNW's Scribblefest 2017

Celebration at Twilight's: Complete

How Does She Do It?: Complete

Through the Prism: Complete

Dashes to Dashes, Dust to Dust: Complete
Honorable Mention in Jake the Army Guy's Horsewords Extravaganza

Two Thousand Miles, Book 1: Complete

Numbers: Complete
Story posted on Equestria Daily

The Summer Lands: Cancelled
Act 1 Complete
Story posted on Equestria Daily

24's 2017 Goals:
[X] Release all of Two Thousand Miles Book 1
[ ] Finish the first draft of TTM Book 2
[ ] Finish A Rainbow of a Different Color
[8/4] Release four new stories
[X] Pass 500 followers
[X] Reach 150,000 story views
[X] Have a story reach 500 likes
[2/2] Participate in 2 writing events/contests
[X] Get another story on Equestria Daily
[X] Be on a panel at Bronycon!

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My Best Work

  • Why? As an orca pony swims one night among the fiery monuments of a global conflict, she finds a sailor freezing to death in the arctic cold. She has only one question for him. by The 24th Pegasus 4,350 words · 2,620 views · 512 likes · 5 dislikes
  • The Mare of the Equestrian Eighth A mare, a soldier. A soldier, a hero. A hero, a veteran. A veteran, forgotten. by The 24th Pegasus 2,564 words · 1,651 views · 174 likes · 2 dislikes
  • The Torch be Ours Rainbow Dash has spent nearly five years away from Ponyville, fighting and dying alongside so many other Equestrians, when a piece of home unexpectedly appears at her hooves. by The 24th Pegasus 7,785 words · 2,750 views · 305 likes · 18 dislikes
  • Numbers Fluttershy suddenly starts seeing timers over ponies' heads. So why does Rainbow Dash only have three hours left? by The 24th Pegasus 12,129 words · 5,453 views · 584 likes · 4 dislikes

More Featured Stories

  • Midnight Oil In the middle of the night, Rarity forsakes sleep to work on a special project for a special somepony. by The 24th Pegasus 3,104 words · 2,409 views · 207 likes · 7 dislikes
  • Surviving Sand Island An airship wreck leaves Rainbow Dash and Rarity stranded on a deserted island. Together, they must find a way to survive until help comes—if it comes. by The 24th Pegasus 154,423 words · 1,216 views · 166 likes · 6 dislikes
  • Celebration at Twilight's Twilight just accidentally killed everyone in Ponyville. Celestia's coming to visit later that day. She has to think of something to keep her from finding out, and fast. by The 24th Pegasus 3,104 words · 5,366 views · 647 likes · 15 dislikes
  • How Does She Do It? An extremely intoxicated Twilight rants to Fluttershy about her own lacking love life and, in contrast, the quite prolific love life of her student. by The 24th Pegasus 3,605 words · 3,394 views · 386 likes · 26 dislikes
  • Dashes to Dashes, Dust to Dust When Lightning Dust and Rainbow Dash meet in a bar, Lightning begins a journey of redemption, discovery... and love. by The 24th Pegasus 13,716 words · 1,068 views · 129 likes · 5 dislikes

New Story: Numbers · 6:56pm October 24th

It's been a little while since I've written a thing. So here's a thing.

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Fluttershy suddenly starts seeing timers over ponies' heads. So why does Rainbow Dash only have three hours left?
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The Price of Loyalty

  • A Song of Storms: Of Skies Long Forgotten The pegasi that founded Equestria have a dark past, a past Commander Hurricane played a key role in. by The 24th Pegasus 106,447 words · 5,741 views · 428 likes · 7 dislikes
  • A Song of Storms: Snow and Shadows With the onset of the windigo curse, Commander Hurricane and the other tribal leaders leave in search of new lands. They aren't the only ones to face challenges, as the tribes inch closer and closer to ripping each other apart with each day. by The 24th Pegasus 230,481 words · 2,681 views · 296 likes · 5 dislikes
  • A Song of Storms: The Summer Lands The problems between the three tribes didn't end with the founding of Equestria. As the nation faces race riots, assassinations, and the threat of a civil war, it will take everything Commander Hurricane has just to see it survive the years. by The 24th Pegasus 251,245 words · 1,339 views · 169 likes · 10 dislikes
  • Where Loyalties Lie: Honor Guard Rainbow Dash saves Princess Luna's life, and uncovers a conspiracy bigger than Equestria itself. by LoyalLiar 214,426 words · 8,941 views · 671 likes · 15 dislikes
  • Where Loyalties Lie: Ghosts of the Past With Equestria facing a war on three fronts, Princess Luna, Rainbow Dash, and Shining Armor must join forces to unearth a secret buried years in the past before it's too late. by LoyalLiar 335,612 words · 4,334 views · 387 likes · 17 dislikes

Other Price of Loyalty Stories

  • From Stalliongrad With Love When Guard Captain 'Red Ink' is sent away from Canterlot as punishment for abusing his position, he finds that writing Friendship Reports and living a normal pony's life in Ponyville is much harder than any exile to the middle of nowhe by LoyalLiar 101,936 words · 6,121 views · 209 likes · 4 dislikes
  • A Beginner's Guide to Heroism A unicorn wizard must come to terms with what it means to be a hero, and whether that choice is worth abandoning his magical mentor's teachings. by LoyalLiar 77,049 words · 458 views · 56 likes · 5 dislikes
  • I, Witness Waking up beside a dead body is a terrible way to start a Nightmare Night. Helping a guardspony solve the case when you're not an angel yourself is even harder. by LoyalLiar 10,458 words · 1,119 views · 106 likes · 1 dislikes
  • A Song of Storms: Shattered Skies Two brothers, separated by cruel circumstance, shall face a gret war apart and be forever changed. by Sigur024 19,505 words · 277 views · 34 likes · 0 dislikes
  • Wind and Stone The Red Cloud War saw the pegasi lose everything to the griffon hordes. Legends rose, heroes died, and through it all, Pathfinder survived. Eighty years later he must confront those painful memories. Memories of loss, of home, of the wind and stone. by Ruirik 143,541 words · 1,108 views · 147 likes · 8 dislikes

Top Favorites

  • Austraeoh Rainbow Dash flies east. by Imploding Colon 212,744 words · 32,605 views · 2,239 likes · 72 dislikes
  • Silver Glow's Journal Silver Glow takes an opportunity to spend a year at an Earth college, where she'll learn about Earth culture and make new friends. by Admiral Biscuit 1,000,007 words · 9,391 views · 1,294 likes · 88 dislikes
  • Spring is Dumb Rainbow Dash definitely didn't do anything wrong. Rarity is the one who's wrong. Rainbow Dash is absolutely, totally, a hundred percent sure of it. But then why did she just buy a wagon load of apology bouquets? by HoofBitingActionOverload 9,255 words · 10,066 views · 1,275 likes · 36 dislikes
  • Hard Reset Twilight gives her life to stop a changeling invasion. Repeatedly. by Eakin 36,610 words · 73,400 views · 6,914 likes · 108 dislikes

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Depends on what you're looking for, I suppose.

If you're looking for comedy, "Celebration at Twilight's" is something stupid I threw together because somebody told me to/gave me the idea for it.

"Sierra" is more of an artsy piece I wrote for Scribblefest 2017. I wanted to see if I could tell a story where every paragraph is an important point that happened every year of the main character's life. I'm quite fond of it, even if it didn't rate all that well.

"Why?" is probably my favorite thing I've written, and not just because it's my #1 story. I wanted to tell a story centered on the picture that became its cover art, so I wrote the whole thing in under a day with no planning or anything whatsoever. Writing a story with no dialogue from the POV of a character who doesn't understand what's happening was a fun experience and one I'll likely not be able to recreate.

And then I have a bunch of raridash drivel and some longer stories that you can look at if you're interested. My current efforts are being directed toward the "Two Thousand Miles" series that I started writing last year. But that books is just the first of four, and is mature for a reason.

Glad that you enjoy my work!

I knew your name was familiar! I liked another one of your stories as well, The Mare of the Equestrian 8th.

I shall have to figure out which of your other stories to read next after Numbers. Any suggestions?

Congrats on the 600

My god you have incredible ideas. It's like everytime I see your name I have to bookmark the story it's on.

You just need one more follower! You got this! :pinkiesmile:

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