Know your mare, know your mare, know your mare...
There the two were, looking each other down. One with an ivory collar and the other with thick dark sunglasses. While one was over joyed to have a friend here, the other looked far less enthusiastic.
Vinyl and Octavia...
...Are wondering why they're both here...
"That thought comes to mind, yes."
"Not even for a second..."
Vinyl Scratch...
...has already figured out our plan...
"It's not that hard to figure out."
Vinyl and Octavia...
...Are tired of beating around the bush...
"Beating around what bush?"
"..."
Well...
...at least Vinyl is...
"Vinyl? What are they going on about?"
"Doesn't matter, they'll tell you anyway."
Smart...
...roll the tape...
Vinyl Scratch…
…doesn’t like it when her lover is insulted…
“It’s not about her being insulted, it’s about you doing it without her having a chance to defend herself… This isn’t Las Pegasus where it’s a free for all.”
Vinyl Scratch…
…just admitted to Octavia being her lover…
“I’ll give you that one."
Wooo...
...trouble in paradise...?
"W-Well, I'm sure it was merely a slip of the tongue. Vinyl was most likely frazzled is all."
"..."
Octavia...
...is a lot more ashamed than Vinyl has hoped...
"I knew she would react that way, so it doesn't come as a surprise for me."
"Vinyl, don't feed into these things' perverse desires to watch us squirm."
Octavia...
...Is asking Vinyl to lie about her feelings...
...That's really got to hurt...
"I'm asking no such thing. Feelings must always be shared, but there's a time and place for it."
"Yeah... too bad that time and place never comes for us..."
"Vinyl!"
Octavia and Vinyl...
...two of--
Do you 'ike each otha'...?
"Huh?"
"What?"
Do t'e two of ya' 'ike each otha'...?
"Well..."
"Ya' know..."
Listen...
...I see the two of ya' 'alkin' down the streets day af'a day...
...And ya' wanna know som'in'...?
...I've ne'er seen any pony so 'appy...
"But Vinyl is always so--"
But you always tell 'er how she annoys you...
...you tell 'er you always notice 'er when she does it...
...So she 'eeps doin' it...
"...Is that true...?"
"Psh, well, heh..."
If ya' ask me...
...you two should leave...
...go 'ome...
...and talk...
...as a couple...
Silence fell on the light as the two only looked at one another, exchanging warm yet awkward smiles before disappearing into the darkness side by side.
...What the buck was that!?
Us 'etting to know...
Octavia Scratch...
But we were supposed to destroy--
Naa...
...I think it looks better that way...
But-but...
Do you think we'll be invited to the--
GAH!
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I don't know what to say...
Hooray for voice #1 and 3. 2 can go buck himself.
Rocky, Madame leFlour, and Sir Lints-Alot??
711481
I got a good word for you. What.
Hah!! Failure of one voice results in my victory! You actually HELPED them!! Us:1 you;1
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Your accent is slipping again Pip errr I mean Mr. 3 or is it all just a ruse is it,it is, isn't it
711511
Brillian speculation my good man
As soon as you think you've got these voices pinned they do a new trick!
Now let's see how u fare against... Three!! Muhahahaha!
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Victory will be mine.,,
711595 That happens two from now... And it won't be pretty.
Pipsqueak is italics and underline, Chrysalis is italics, and Fancypants is bold.
Ribbing turns into couple's therapy this time in KNOW YOUR MARE!
*applause*
711564 EVERYBODY WINS!
Yay!
Your FINALLY starting to make my job easier!! Thank the lunar plot! God damn I didn't want to have to work with a third voice.
711811 I haven't really changed anything...
711615 is that a warning, or a threat? Either way we never back down from a challenge!! Even if I couldn't do three I can still think up duos involving them. Just saying the cutie mark crusaders cutie marks will be in voice derailment. Wonder what it'll look like...
Cutie mark crusader voice derailers!!
711895 Why do you keep saying we?
711824 yeah but this chapter (34) means the underlined voice isn't bad after all!!!
711904 that's a good question. I honestly don't know. If I where to take as guess probably we for me and the characters. Ex. We (me and the characters) will win.
711925 When did he ever act bad? I always thought he acted playfully or jostling.
711927 Really? Tell me, how do you plan to win?
711925 so it's the italics that's evil. If you ask me the underlined voice reminds me of a filly talking
This is so awesome. Can't wait for the next one!
Right then. I figured out who voice 3 is. You made it really obvious in this chapter.
711951 That's the point, we're winding down to the reveal around chapter 40.
709249 I liked this chapter. Especially how the other two voices turned on Italics. Too bad Twilight didn't have anyone to help her. (Either another character or a voice.)
711936 same here, and the only filly that hasn't gone is twist. So that's my guess, backed up by the speech pattern in this chapter (34)
711976 At Twilight's turn, no one wanted to help her for their own reasons. But in Vinyl and Octavia's case, underline felt that something had to be done or these two would be broken a part... which is too horrible for anyone to just let happen
711935 I have studied all the characters and their relations with each other. So I know good match ups.
Ex. Cutie mark crusaders.
When separated, their flaws show much more. Also they are normally fairly docile making them easy to handle. However, when together this changes dramatically. First, they are much more energetic, making it hard to control them, unless they actually are working towards a common goal. They also bolster eachothers confidence. They are however, fairly reckless. They charge headfirst into problems and danger, not actually thinking about their actions until after they finish, or fail miserably. When in battle, they have a sort of Tag-team stragety. When one faulters, the other two gain strength to fill the gap and restore their teammate. When or if, the teammate is restored, they emerge stronger than before. They are tight friends that are united because they have the faults they do. They are tenacious and durable, even of they are pretty reckless and boisterous .
That's the bio on the cutie mark crusaders as a group.
712018 Which with any grouping can be used as a double edged sword. Exactly what would've happened to Octavia and Vinyl if underline didn't cut in. Either way, the problem is that you're not writing the story or characters. So you can't win, only if I allow it. But, as I always say: "let the characters speak to me and if they say it's to be so, it is so."
Favorite one yet
So one voice is twist but who are the others
712036 well yea. My only weapon is the groupings (honestly I actually thought their strengths would out weigh their weaknesses). The one reason I like them, is that it makes things interesting, they have a chance to recover from a big blow, unlike a single character vs multiple voices. But you are right I have absolutely no effect on the outcomes. But I do enjoy the pep,and smack, talk. It adds effect.
711993 While they are not my favorite pairing, they are my favorite for one another (and quite adorable together). So I'm glad the voices supported them.
I guess I just love Twilight so much that I want everyone else to love her too.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png (Just in case you didn't figure it out, my favorite pairing involves Twilight.)
712066 I can kinda see that based on the voice, but I find it hard to believe she would call Twilight a "nerdling". She seems a little bit nerdy herself, so I don't see where she has grounds to call her a name like that. But that's just my opinion.
712103 Then you may enjoy chapter 40... but we'll get to that later . I for one can't devoldge my favorites because then someone may think i'm going easier on people because I like them.
712114 yeah but perhaps she feels better about her self by saying things about others
Nice chapter, it really starts to show how underline knows when things need to be stopped in their tracks.
712178 Thanks for that input. I'll take it into consideration from here on
712133 You're right, I didn't even think about that. Although from what I recall, Twist tends to lisp rather than leave letters out. And underline has used s's (esses? s'es? You understand what I'm trying to say, right?) plenty of times without a lisp. We'll just have to wait and see.
712122 I'm not sure if you're telling me that somepony will be in love with Twilight or if you're referring to her unnamed love interest in my favorite pairing. Oh well. It's only 6 chapters away. And you've been updating pretty quickly. I look forward to more (even though some chapters make me sad).
DAWWW! They totally are going clop each other brains out when they're done, you know that right? Underline voice just got them laid
712202 yeah wait and see guessing from what has happened before it is going to be somepony els
I'm not really one for ScratchXOctavia but im glad Octavia didn't cry this time. good job. You saved a bunny's life. i wasn't kidding when i said i was going to kill something if you made her cry again. i see bunnies every day around my home, it's like its breeding season or something*sarcasm* but you know what i mean.
712253 yay !! Bunnies were saved!!
712274
i seriously wasn't kidding about killing the bunny. i friggin love Octavia. look at my name! Octavia, Octavio, you know. obvious stuff.
I punched something when i saw her cry the first time. I was about to throttle my computer
712292 Uh... that's... great ... I'm just gonna... go work on her next part...
712292 i wonder.... Would tavi condone killing bunnies and throwing computures out of anger? Don't get me wrong she might condone breaking objects, but killing bunnies? That is where she draws the line. Don't get me wrong, I love octy too. That's is why I brought up octy and vinyl as a couple against the voices. I believed they would have better chances together than separate. If they fall, they will be able to get up after. But alone, they would have been destroyed. Even together, they barely.
This is totally great. I'd like to see many other guests. Like Zecora, Blueblood, or maybe even if it's possible Flutterbully.
712423 No way is Zecora coming on... I'm no rhymer
712343 this is just in case u don't like the cutie mark crusaders idea, you could do RD and AJ I could go into that grouping bio, but that would take too long. But if you need it I can provide it. They have great potential and history. Also my phone is on 6% battery.
712446 I'll let you in on a little secret. Every chapter is already written. I have the next seven chapters ready to be submitted. I COULD give them to you... but I rather spoon feed my stories.