...What now?
Know your-- Who are we supposed to be doing?
Wasn't it Trixie again?
No...
...It's too soon and she's not due for a pass for another day or two after all the dairy we fed that thing...
Right, right...
...What about Sweetie Belle?
...She's due for some good ol' fashion pay back.
The boss said we can't bring her on until we can work through the law suit...
How's that working out?
As well as Queeny does when she tries to hit on someone...
Ah, dead in the water.
I truly feel my heart trying to kill itself every moment I listen to you two...
We're just playing with you.
Yeah...
...So what about Fancypants?
This late in the game?
Psh... I thought I trained you better buddy.
You're right...
That's small potatoes...
Hmmm...
...I've got it...
You do?
Regale me. Please. I'm dying to know. Really...
Poke all you want Queeny...
...But I have the best idea ever...
...of all time perhaps...
Well don't keep me out of the loop...
...What's your plan...?
We will strike at the center of all that is good...
...The core of everyone's harmony, love, and kindness...
You don't mean--!
No, not that one...
Oh...
You mean--!
Not that one either Cap'n...
Hm...
You mean--!
YES!
...Do we still have that timey-wimey thing we towed from that Doctor?
Yes...
...Mwa-hah-hah-hah-hah!
...I just realized I'm in Haywaii cooped up in a studio with you two mules...
...I'm taking a vacation...
Really?
Are you sure?
I'm already out the door...
...
Should we replace her?
Naa, we'll be fine...
...Seriously, she's coming back, right?
I need three signatures for my intern-work to get school credit...
Don't worry little buddy, she'll be back...
...Maybe I should've went with Silver Spoon on her mission trip to Saddle Arabia...
I wouldn't worry about it...
That place is filled with penta-whals.
Penta-whals!?
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Hey, this story is really cool -> This isn't shameless
934056 Just for than I'mma downvote it (nah j/k)
934120 NO! My master plan is ruined!
934056 No, it's not. It's you plugging your own work within your own work.
Also, a grand new chapter seems to be unfolding. May the gods help us all.
I'm going to guess filly Rainbow Dash.
934138 *Gloats in victory* BOW BEFORE ME dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
934144 WorkCeption?
I think the formatting got messed up a couple times. Missed an italicized I, once, and I think a couple bold lines are supposed to be underlined.
Love yourwork so far though I got to say I would enjoy reading a side story what happen/is happening to Trixie and mabey some of the other characters.
hmm... i bet it's gonna be Faust
What about Pickle Horse?
*Cocks head to the side* Was that a Nostalgia critic refference perchance?
934145 I vote! I vote!
Still good, even after all these chapters. Kinda curious who "The boss" is. Celes? Cadence? Rarity? Got no clue. Dashie'd probably think something like this'd be the ultimate prank of the century so I'm not counting her out either.
EDIT; Thanks Web, all I really knew were the first and last two letters of her name.
You don't mean--!
No, not that one...
Oh...
You mean--!
Not that one either Cap'n...
Hm...
You mean--!
YES!
BATTLEFIELD EAAAARTH!
931356 Don't get it I'm afraid
Hold on...
"...It's too soon and she's not due for a pass for another day or two after all the dairy we fed that thing..."
This isn't a reference to the Great and Powerful Bowel Movement is it?
We will lie in wait for a great moment
I have to admit, this time I've completely left in the dark.
Penta-whals->googles it...nothing. Then I go see the self-promoted fic and...it's there.
That's where you should draw the line, sir. Fic-self-insertion+self-promotion-comment.
Oh, well, it's all fun and games and SUMMER HOLIDAYS! You should totally put summer related stuff in the next chapters.
Cause they're like 200 pics of ponies at the beach.
EDIT: ok, read first chapter of the other fic, marked it to read later. Seems fun.
Plus, the 502 error seems out, but accessing fics directly from the favourites it's broken. I had to go to the fic page.
This fic's version of Discord and Pip in control of the TARDIS... mother of God, and also the plot thickens.
Uh oh it looks like that round with the doctor wasn't for nothing, we're in trouble.
934283
Who's Candice?
whatever, my vote for the next round is either Faust (which i still think they did last round) or the Power Puff Girls
Dun Dun Dunnnn
I don't get it. Fancy Pants is the center of all that is good and the core of everyone's harmony, love, and kindness.
All that is good...?
...
Noooooo!
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They kept the TARDIS??? For their sake I hope they just took a vortex manipulator or something. For one thing, the TARDIS is sentient and probably wouldn't like them much. For another, the Doctor has wiped entire races from history... And he is very defensive of those he loves.
Was that an RvB reference I saw?
Did I just find a reference to the Nostalgia Critic's Battlefeild Earth Review?
AWESOME!!!
I wonder who... Or what.... Or when is next.....
An internship with an illegal show, yeah that's gonna be great on a resume.
Did...did you just make a reference to the intro to the Nostalgia Critic's Battlefield Earth review?
3896637 Sweet! Someone else caught it.
1091483 There's a very healthy amount of them in this fic.
3735952 With that, he could very well be put into the highest political office of the land, working out the kinks and snags of the Equestrian political machine under the noses of Celestia, Luna, Cadence, and Twilight.
Each other.
these lines made me think they are going to bring Agent Washington from RvB on....that would be pretty awesome and random.
is pipsqueak planning on doing fausticorn?
2098488
I was beat to the punch.
Silver Spoon is on a mission trip? Huh, what's it for?