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OH COME ON!!! I was looking forward to his first day of school. At least him getting ready and first period.
Oh god!
Wouldn’t he say buck rather than fuck?
Oh cool!! Now you just need bumps, have it rotate, and pulse.
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Nope, wife is right. She's glaring at Title for laughing at her while she's panicking.
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D'oh! Fixed. I dunno why but I've caught myself typing "998" instead of "908" more than once. At least I can blame autocorrect for "Cure->Cute" and "yer->her" but that's definitely all me.
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Definitely. Yakety Sax is the quintessential silly chase music. Thank you, Benny Hill!
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Glad ya liked it! It was definitely a spur of the moment thought. The running joke has been that she's super hungry because she's preggers, but she also mentioned early on that she had to exercise before. Heck I think she joked about her eating back in like... chapter 3 too. I wish I could claim to be that good of a planner, but sometimes things just work out.
There's another much bigger coincidence that I swear I didn't plan out at all, too. You'd have to probably dig into the cast list to have any hope of catching that though. It'll get mentioned eventually. More of a "Cure realizes something" thing, though... not really important story-wise. Maybe. I may run with it.
“It vibrates?!?”
Oh boy, when Cure gets older he could legitimately cater to any kink his partner desired....
Good chapter! That village \town is going to produce so many super ponies XD
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I think the first pony to curse in the story (except drunk Cure) was Amethyst dropping F bombs in 13. I never got why folks started using "buck" for that.
Then again, maybe that is canon. Maybe Apple Bucking Season is actually just what they call the time of year that they need some action.
Awesome work as expected! 👍
I think NSFW stuff is fine to compliment a story. Now if a good story transitions into nothing but NSFW, thats a problem.
I mean, we've got cute ponies with spiders growing and bursting out of them to then go after (i mean play) with other ponies. Kinda awesome but also very disturbing to some. And the talk of the whole reproductive process too, sex is very much a part of that.
So yeah, keep it coming.
Thanks for the update!
I wonder if polished apple is Granny Smith’s sister or cousin? I mean Granny Smith looks like an old lady pony in her 80s~100s so she might be around.
I feel like some unicorn will make Cure mad one day and he'll reshape the unicorn's horn to look like a penis lol, "dickhead."
Welp all other studs are now out of business.
Wonder dong over here wins.
I hope that wasn't a bad decision
Welp, good chapter, made me laugh loudly on the street.
As for nsfw, nothing wrong with it, in the end we gave a story about a young colt growing up (with him being bio mancer, no puberty issues I guess) with a family that is planning to expand
I don't like coop for the sake of clop, but nothing wrong with it being part of the fic itself
author, wouldn't it be better if, in addition to those who already know the mc's secret as a biomantic, there are no more, that is, it would be better if the mc kept it a secret for at least 100 years and then, after having done a lot of good, the mc could use that fact when facing Princess Celestia, another interesting thing now that comes to mind... could you have Cadance as CureWave's romantic partner? She is one of the best characters and she is not given much prominence, nor does she have many other companions apart from shining armor.
I think... I think it would be nice if CureWave Ascends Alicorn naturally and is promoted by the magic of harmony... it gives the mc a chance to get involved in whatever he comes up with, but I think his ascension, if it happens , it must be saving a life... I would have said create life but you already did it with the bugs, maybe save Cadance and help her with her promotion to Alicorn, that would be enough.
By God, I want the mc to be a supreme magician!!! Even if his specialty isn't magic itself, make him the best of the best at runes and create super runic arrangements!
I am sad that some of the dialogue got turned into exposition summary. I am quite looking forward to all your technical and curio speeches. It especially builds interesting depths for all parties involved.
But, I understand if and when you do this to some dialogues. You've certainly earned some slack after all those lengthy talks for the past 20 plus chapters. I am curious to see where the crystal pony path will lead to.
You're doing great, Wordsmith!
Ps. I was imagining some anime "man of culture" thing with Deed having two instead of one. But I can get behind a less abominable biohazard family
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I forgot to add this:
Cure is practically ripe to live some young kid's dream of being a superhero. Especially if he has to go around healing anonymously
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I'm certain the kids would not betray his trust, at least, not intentionally. But the more that know his secret, the more likely something will slip out. On the other hand, his circle of protective friends keeps growing when it was just his immediate family at first.
I've not been keeping track but the "Go to the top" party seems to be the largest. Something to keep in mind should Cure have a close call with some pony with power-- a noble, duke, or just some higher ranking guard. (I really hope this grandfather character doesn't turn out to be scummy)
Also, Cure brought up the heat sensors again. I wonder if those could detect a disguised changeling? That is, the heat signature is all wrong because no one would expect a pony to have Infravision. That's not considering his passive aura of scanning (out to a meter or so?) that would reveal an infiltrator rather quickly with so many internals being extremely wrong.
I've been lurking on this story for a while. I thought I'd finally comment.
I love your characters. I can tell you spend a lot of time developing them.
Cure, funny as heck. And almost too smart sometimes. OPAF. He tempts fate way to much. I'm wondering when that will bite him.
Vines, the protective mother. I love her reactions to when Cure gets to adult in his explanations.
Title, the encouraging mom. It's nice to see a parent take part in their child's interests.
Deed. The ultimate dad, doing dad things with his son, who was also a dad.
Then his friends.
I love the conflict resolution with Wind Shear. That was very well done.
I can't wait to see if there is anything more being between Dawn and Cute.
I also like that you set this 100 years in the past (prior to the show). It's a good way to stop people from having expectations and allows you the freedom to write characters your way.
You already rated this "M" and as long as you include a warning in the story description, I don't think you have to worry about sex scenes. It's your story, write scenes or not.
On a personal note, I don't mind if a chapter leads to a scene without warning. I think it actually helps the story read and flow better than having garish warnings right in the middle of the text.
By the way, If people can't tell what kind of story this is almost 30 chapters in, then nothing can help them.
Keep up the great work.
And thank you for posting.
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I mean, Cure might be the one who makes the changelings
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He could inform Celestia, “There’s no wrong way to fantasize—since I could make any of it happen.”
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We the author has referenced the comics before so they may follow the comics origin.
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Wow, thanks for the compliments! I'm glad you, and everyone else mostly, are enjoying it.
I agree, if someone came into an M rated fic where, in chapter like.. 6? the MC realizes he can wonk with biology and is shocked that there's eventually sex in it (the Sex tag has been there since day 0) then they're probably a lil daft. That said, it didn't feel completely fair to go 200k words with barely anything and drop a sex scene in there with no warning.
From now on I'll likely not put a "A/N" warning in. The scene itself should be all the warning necessary and I'll put a NSFW note in the chapter title so no one is surprised.
I appreciate everyone's input on this and I'm glad you're all enjoying it. Everyone just keep in mind, as the description says, this is primarily a SoL story. The next chapter skips ahead a couple weeks because two important meetings are coming up, so field trip #1 will come out on Thursday.
Also sad we missed the first day of school, feels like I missed a chapter, that'd be the obvious point to see the teachers and classmates but it looks like we may be time skipping past school for the most part? I hope we didn't just skip over seeing his school performance, that's always fun.
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Ah I see it now, sorry.
i'd unless it's supposed to be part of the accent, it's often hard to tell.
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Did they make a decision on the gender of the foal(s) though?
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Because it's a horse pun and no one ever misses a chance to use one of those.
It's commonly used as a difference between HiE characters and natives as the natives almost always use horse pun curses and may not even recognise non puns as curse words.
Welphis Sire beat the odds once so Filly and Colt fraternal twins.
Thinking about it Cure Wave should only ever do that horn enhancement to unicorns he can absolutely trust won't use it for evil.
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It likely would not be anything special at this point (school I mean).
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It was discussed in earlier chapters that they could chose the gender of the foal(s) if they wanted, it's unclear at this point if there was a decision made on that.
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He's more likely to be kidnapped by someone or a group wanting an edge than someone to misuse the edge he gives them for evil.
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He has has the added education of an adult from earth, barring this being a fic where they use a different number base or ponies being naturally good at math he will have a strong advantage over the other students. He'll also probably accidentally reveal his advanced knowledge by answering previously unanswered questions by accident because he doesn't know that he's not supposed to be able to answer them. Keep in mind a lot of their science is just "it's magic" which isn't an explanation.
Then there will be topics that he just sucks at for HiEs this is usually equestrian history.
He may even suck at the things he does know because the ponies may have working but incorrect understandings of how things work so even though he knows the correct answer it may not be the answer they are looking for or it may not even be accurate anymore since some things differ from earth and equestria or because the correct answers are horse puns of the answers he knows.
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Suddenly I can picture him casually explaining the Krebs cycle to his teacher.
So we just not gunna let Cure think about being spider-stallion? Surely he wanted to be spiderman at one point in his old life, spiderman is cool
So not only did Cure enhance his dad's size and stamina, he also turned it into a vibrator. Forget him and his parents being set for life, his whole bloodline will never have to work.
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"Spider-dam, Spider-dam,
Does what whatever a spider can.
Can she swing, from a thread?
No she can't, she's too heavy.
Hey there,
There goes th- *SMACK* OW!"
"I AM NOT FAT, YOUNG COLT!"
Cure spent a very good portion of his human life In a monogamous marriage, I'm finding it difficult to comprehend how nonchalant he is at the thought of going into a polygamous relationship, although his mind is a fusion of a pony brain and human memories. Still, I expect if, or more likely when, he is presented with this conundrum, his human mind will object to a certain degree, atleast I hope it does.
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Humans can be polyamorous too. It's mostly frowned upon for silly nonsensical reasons, but I can see some humans easily embracing it if allowed.
What is yanno? Seriously
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In a way, I can already see him with Celestia, since with the line of his plan it will come to that at some point.
>:D
You know, I can easily see this being something that could come back and bite them all later.
Yeah, something like what happened here.
At least in that story, the guy got off because the dead owner of the horn testified that the possessor was innocent.
This case, I think would be a lot harder to pull off that sort of explanation.
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Yeah, I can see Cure rocking Celestia's world, lol.
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Slurring speech for "you know?"
Hrm, perhaps Dawn will make it into the herd, things are preparing for transitioning into seriousness.
That end though. 😂
YES. DO THAT DUMMY. YOU ONLH LIVE O-... twice. Twice is likely the max.