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Great to see new chapter, my only problem is I read very fast , can finish a 250 to 300 page paperback in under an hour.
Nice
love seeing Cure working with some hospital cases and the interactions that happen. I forget Cure's age but I guess he is eleven?
About to start reading but gotta say that the fact that SFW had to be included in the title gave me my first chuckle of the day. I'm sure there will be more as I read on.
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Cure is currently 9 years old.
Typo, but Cure is cute, to be fair.
Thanks again LFOD for another great chapter. Lots of nice fluff earlier in the chapter with Cure and his family. I'm curious to see how the trial and the whole authority conflict with the court summons will develope next chapter. I also enjoyed the hospital patient scenes you did this chapter, which had a bit of drama, but not enough to turn the chapter into a depressive drama fest. Lastly, CONGRATULATIONS on reaching the 1million word count on this story! This feat is always an accomplishment for any writer and sadly is a feat we readers rarely see when it comes to our favorite stories coming to thier premature ends. Thank you again for all the time, dedication, and hard work you've personaly sunk into keeping this amazing story alive and thriving, with such regular and lengthy chapters. I wish you the best of luck writing you next chapter. CHEERS!
Sorry about this but I had a thought a couple of days ago that i just remembered and this was before this chapter was published.
Earlier before his ascension, it was stated that Cure has predator brain. That is untrue, he has memories of someone with predator brain, but he has a prey brain now. His thought processes and instincts are a lot more different from predator brain. Since he has refrained from tampering with his brain and brain chemistry, he wouldn't technically have predator brain. Though slowly, he can think more easily along the lines of a predator as his brain develops due to the memories' influence, but I don't think he would ever have a trie predator brain, unless the ascension altered that with the bat pony. Although I would think not.
I know I have been super critical in these last couple of comments from this and the last chapter, but I read this in a binge, refraining from commenting. I think I have laid out my primary concerns at this point. I hope I can be more constructive im my criticism from here on.
Yay new chapter
Good chapter, I enjoy when he uses his ability.
Hope things settle down for you
Looking forward to meeting Amethyst’s family -especially the sister. Trip to Filly will be fun. Dragon Town? How does that sound anything but awesome?!
Really loved getting some more perspective from Vines. Secretly worried about that family of hers and what will happen when they show up.
Crazy busy week for Cure. Glad the mare is on the track to healing even if she’s less than happy to do so at the start. I’m sure she’ll be more willing after the cravings die down and the counseling gets going.
Somefilly’s going to have quite a story to tell at school. lol And the guards just stood there. Tsk tsk.
Thank you for the chapter, author!!
Respect
oh my gosh, this is addorable!
Ship ship ship!
This is addorable.
HAH the overeating jokes strike again!
Hmmm this has bitten my curiousity. She a wild one in bed or something?
Edit: SO about dragon town, is that where the golden dragon he helped lives? I could totally see her being grateful to him.
Hmm, had a thought; when is Cure's birthday? It's got to be soon. I'd hope that Celestia will crash the extended family party too because if there's cake... well, you know. I'd assume there's an Official Party for the Prince too, but that just sounds too stuffy.
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HAH of course cakeflanks would come.... and get relentlessly teased by cure.
...the question would be how would she justify showing up to the public without outing cure as an alicorn tho? Also arent birthdays not really a big deal becuase ponies tend to be born one of two months thanks to estreus?
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Pinkie Pie would be horrified to hear that!
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Lol fair enough, but i meant it more as one big celebration during those two months rather than an individual party.
Man, you could feel the alcohol addiction tugging at that mare's words at any of Cure's suggestions, it's heartbreaking.
Whenever Cure talks about his schedule, I can't help but think about how much he would benefit from meeting the Alicorn of
ChecklistsFriendship.Best of luck with all the chaos this week! I always look forward to more, but take your time. We'll be here.
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......in before he's where she gets it from
good on him for respecting her autonomy. it would’ve been evil to do it against her will, or without her consent.
I think it works better without this part, but that could just be me.
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Another great chapter!
I want to know when cure can pass the speed of sound mach 1 2 3? flying with magic and biological alteration
Love the character development all throughout this chapter, Cure, Vines, his guards, the rest of the family, hospital patients and staff. A huge, diverse, natural cast and we don’t need an introduction to each one. (Cute)Cure is such a lady killer. Awesome. I also can’t imagine this was the first time he’s given a filly patient a flower…
Hope to see a little bit of Dragon Town. I’m just picturing San Franciscos China Town, but full of dragons instead of just the one puppet being danced in the parades
Was also expecting this to be the day Solar was upgraded from the chapter title, but not disappointed, lots of good stuff to look forward to. Take your time LFOD, it’s ready when it’s ready and we will still be here when it arrives
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I too hope to revisit Citrine (golden dragon from the train) at some point
THEN or THIS WAY YOU CAN or THUS perhaps?
The “This have your location on the ad” is a little funky. Great chapter though! Looking forward to seeing Cure go Prince mode on those court peeps.
awesome chapter, love the development and hospital day to day stuff on ocation
uuh about to meet more fam awesome ^^
Call her fat without calling her fat
Oh my... Tentacles, lol... i can hear George takei in my head every time i read these words anywhere
as for the chapter itself, while i always prefer Cure X Celestia shenanigans, it's fun to read Cure X family and his time in work, more so when he uses a plant tentacle to help a pony, it was fun to see him have fun with his smelling powers.
can't wait for next week's chapter
Cure…
…I don’t know who is going to tan his hide first once it comes to light how many laws he’s broken with this little project of his.
Especially when you remember how strongly he reacted when his family’s property rights were disregarded under orders from the crown.
Whether or not any prosecutor would want to end their career by charging the Grand Prince to face the consequences for said laws is another matter entirely.
Actually that might be interesting to explore. Just what sort of legal boundaries does Cure have now that he is 2nd in line to the throne of a more or less absolute monarchy.
Oh right I have been wanting to say this funny little...well its low hanging fruit.
Look, some willowy bint laying about in caves distributing wings and horns is no basis for a system of government.
Supreme executive power...
Also, thinking about it, Discord, as a Chaos spirit, is a major impetus for change. Seems he went too far(unless the whole Cosmos thing is canon here) and needed discipline. The Alicorns IMO have the responsibility of the mantle, but shouldn't be responsible for rule. Celestia being so long lived and the people and government not experiencing any real changes over the millennium has created a kind of stagnation. Order is pretty much stasis now that I think about it. Death being an agent of Order, and Life actually being one of Chaos. Food for thought.
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Brings to mind the story of ester. King was tricked into allowing a wholesale slaughter of christians, they were to be moved to a place in the kingdom and allowed to be slaughtered for one day. The King found out his bride was to be among those to be moved and slaughtered and could do nothing because none are above the Law, not even the King.
Here is what the King did, he offered a bounty for those who would protect his wife and for the head of every person who attempted to kill her. Since she was at the camp and anyone who attacked there could be assumed to be attacking her, so many mercenaries and the lake came to protect Eater that none were harmed.
There's ways around the Laws, but violations of the Law are still violations.
loving this but not gonna lie, i forgot which of cures fillie friends are the ones courting him and whitch ones are just a friend
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Not a terrible problem to have, you can just reread the chapter a couple times. Then drop back a couple/few chapters and reread back to current. It’s what I do…
Had a depressing thought, the FWI (flying while intoxicated) mare, could her “crash” been more than a little intentional? Definitely more going on than just alcoholism
Too much of the story just devolves into dick jokes way too often.
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Herding gets confusing;
Dawn and Ferric definitely; 100%
Rising Pitch probably; call it 98%
Glacier probably 98%, but her and Crosswind come together and Wind is a little lower, maybe 90% (there’s still a little friction between Cure and Wind)
Delta Coast definitely not (5%?) she’s “with” Heavy Lift
Sapphire probably not, I’ve described her before as everypony’s girl but nopony’s steady girlfriend (25% perhaps?)
WindShear probably not (?) she’s single (now) but spoke about mono with a pegasus before (-%), herding with siblings is possible, but uncommon (IIRC; -%), is Cure’s employee (+/-%? exposure vs fraternization), but Cure IS rich, AND the prince (+%!)
Just my take on it, from memory, hope it helps
Love the start of this chapter, we need more wholesome mother loving on her colt even if he acts mature due to his past life and the like still think we need more of those fun, lovely, and wholesome interactions before we get to the start of FiM. Maybe even a few after getting past the start, not many stories have lovely wholesome family moments I’ve noticed, yes they are out they but usually only in canceled or forever hiatus stories.
Anyways lovely chapter, glad to see it and eager for the next. Keep up the awesome work!
I'm equal parts curious and apprehensive of what Cure has planned with that cylinder, crystals, and apparently rituals. The scale he appears to be working at is something I'd typically associate with villains.
I think he would have told Celestia what he's doing by now if he genuinely thought it was harmless. Maybe he's using the "easier to beg forgiveness than ask permission" approach.
The entire beginning of this chapter-Vines taking care of her foal-was just so cute, I thought I was going to explode.
I enjoyed all of Cure's family interactions in this chapter, especially when they poke fun of Title's weight.
I love to see moments like this mixed in with the overall story.
That alcoholic was a hard bit of reality. I'm surprised that and domestic abuse is the only thing Cure has come across so far (with the exception of "natural causes").
Thank you very much for the chapter!
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I'm not referring to action by itself. I was talking about elements that produce conflict. Such as elements like drama or maybe some culture clash, maybe his alien perspective to the pony life, problems he has to deal with. That's what I was asking for. I don't mind that he's living big nor that he's happy but I would like to see him deal with issues. Something to change the routine.
Had a thought, Celestia needs to pop into the astral realm from time to time just to see if Cure is starting to grow his Alicorn abilities and he can feel when she “calls” him instead of just “on schedule” Sundays
I am so sorry to curse you all with this profane, cursed thought, but whenever I see the words "Oh, hey babe" or some very similar variation in this story, I can't help but have this pop into my head.
I'd have embedded it but it doesn't seem to work with shorts unfortunately. It's just audio, nothing nsfw though I still wouldn't play it loudly in public.
https://www.youtube.com/shorts/LbVDJQTT5o4
“It needs licked too”
I have a gut feeling Cure’s little secret will be let out of the bag in Fillydelphia.
I don’t know how or why, but it will happen there. And it will be because of something he absolutely did not account for.
Missing the before alicorn of life given it's his title
I feel bad when all I really say is the errors in chapters so I'll say it again, I love your story and the crazy amount of effort you put in, and the quality is great too, too few stories these days have proper editing
Having the Alicorn of Life
His
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The real Dark shit about this is all those guns have their serial numbers filed off, so they're untraceable....
Chekov's been a BAAAAAAD strawpony.
Enjoy the ride. It's a fun one!
This story somehow fell off my radar around summer (I last finished chapter 72, apparently), so I'm doing a re-read before trying to catch back up. Currently on Ch.8, and it's just as enjoyable on the second trip through. Glad it's still going, hopefully I catch back up soon!
Not going to have a chapter ready for tomorrow. The house has been a wreck the last week and a half, so writing time has been sparse and frequently interrupted. 95 is about halfway done, maybe? I dunno, I'm pretty bad at estimating chapter length. It should be ready well ahead of 2/5.
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Well, that is a little disappointing, but totally understandable. You have been an absolute writing machine. I’ll still be here, waiting, whenever you have something ready! Gonna MISS you!
I hope, despite disruptions and attempts to write, you had a decent week LFOD.