Tea or coffee?

Thanks for the fave on The Crystal and the Mirage.

👋🏻 Hey there.

All of the chapters of The Samurai Called Jack are now completely edited by Yours Truly.

What do you think?

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I'm not sure a Star Trek crossover concept is salvageable even in the stages of Protodraft. There isn't really a point to the crossover as I can't see anything that's worth the parody or a novella worth of material. I don't see a connection between Star Trek and Rainbow Factory worth talking about. However, It would be much more worth if she sticks to the "Rainbow factory is a stage" plot or somewhere along that line

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It's gone?

Oh, that's too bad. Yes, it was rather cringeworthy, but it was one of the most original and innovative ideas posted on here. I had agreed with much of the grade given it. Also, I think there's a limit on how many tags we can post for a story, but yes, this was a comedy -- grimdark, but still funny as hell!

I told C3PO that if she rewrote it (sober, this time ), she might get it to be as good a work as Arad's XCom series. I hope she does. It certainly is too good of an idea to lose.