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Cute has to give the dude credit; the enthusiasm and commitment are there. He’s just not sure why, exactly. The stallion’s scent is close enough to a couple pegasus mares he helped with giving birth this past season, so maybe he’s a sibling to somepony he helped out.
*Webbing
An awsome chap like always!
First off, happy new year and good chapter!
OOOH so THATS what he was doing!
....also wind is so the long term in denail harem member. Calling it rn.
Huh, i have no idea what that might be for. the only thing i can think of would be a telescope.
Dawww shes in LUV!
Hellp. I have gone shipping and am now lost beacause of the cute.
HA show off.
...pretty sure thats supposed to be webbing not wedding, but good to know even the authors subconcious ships them too!
I supose it's like cosplay. Although I think there are laws(human) about using cosmitic surgery to look like someone else. He going to have to be very careful about being legally responsable if he accidentally changed a criminal even with cutie marks remaining the same. I can think of a half dozen ways to legitamitly spoof/cover a cutie Mark off the top of my head without magic.
“Nice!” he cheers, holding the muffin atop his right hoof. She’d heard about his proficiency with the earth pony telekinetic field, but watching the muffin hover a few centimeters above his upturned hood is still bizarre. With no warning whatsoever the confection splits vertically down the middle, spreading itself open from the top and laying horizontally in two halves. Magic gathers in his staff for a split second and two pads of butter appear in a flash, one on each piece.
awesome chapter, i wonder what he's building
happy new year
Sometime later in the aether:
Cure: "So that was my day..."
Celestia: "I have to put up with that shit all the time! Let me tell you about the one time a tall, white pegasus stripper changed her name to Celeste and strapped on a horn... amongst other things..."
Great chapter, if shorter than usual!
Cure got a scan of Crowned, so he should be able to tell if Crowned has been doing any "bottoming" lately. Perhaps the reason Crowned wants to be changed into a faux Prince Serpentus is because he hasn't? If so, I think Cure could interest Crowned in a "deluxe" package for bottom stallions akin to the prehensile penis or the constrictor vagina he has given other ponies...
In the words of the great musical scholar Al Yankovic, "irony is not coincidence."
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“Thanks, daddy!” The colt’s wedding retracts, seemingly melting back into his side as he turns and climbs down. Dawn’s horn flashes several times in quick succession; far faster than Emerald could hope to match. Her plate, cup, utensils, and her place at the table are all wiped clean before everything teleports itself back to its proper place.
* Wing or wing's
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Curse you, autocorrect! I usually get Hold, Hood, Home and a couple other entries when I type hoof, so it's kind of a miracle I haven't done that a hundred other times. Same with his name - It changes it to Cute pretty frequently. Speaking of which....
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Fixed. *sigh*
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It was supposed to be wing. I don't have any how "edd" got slapped into the middle of "wing". Sometimes when I am typing on my tablet I swear the cursor just moves on me. I could see if it hopped somewhere near where I'm holding it, but that's not usually the case. I frequently have to hit the Return key once or twice just because it makes it easier to spot wherever it ended up.
Celestia absolutely will not be okay with this once she finds out. Pretty sure he’s violating all sorts of property rights that he absolutely needed to clear before working on his project.
That’s on top of growing an untested and unregistered plant outside of his own personal property.
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I have a gut feeling I know what Cure is building. I am honestly shocked Celestia approved it, unless he didn’t tell her everything about it.
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And a tube of gold, what's going on here hmmmmm?
I wonder how many mares (and some stallions) have tried to mimic Celestia over the centuries? Considering illuisionary and transmutation magic, surely there are laws already in place to deal with legal and illegal impersionation...
I’m curious about your Equestrian property rights. When you own land in some places (like the state I’m living in), you own it all the way down to the core; but other places has a set depth. I’m not sure who’s considered the controlling party beyond that depth: the local governing body or if it’s like international waters. Since Cure’s near water pipes, it might fall under the jurisdiction of the Royal water company? Ministry of Water Treatment?
Wind Shear might be competing with her sister or considering it. That was some top notch flirting from our guy. Dawn’s blushing is becoming quite forthcoming as well.
That song reference was Futurama? Very good episode.
I wonder about that stallion’s safety. Cure has been targeted in the past, and it would instigate terrible things from the Princess; but an unsanctioned double won’t instantly get federal protection and could be open to something happening.
There are a few outstanding mysteries. Now, ‘the case of the 20cm Royal golden rod commissioned by the Princess’ may be added to the list. lol
Thank you for the New Year’s chapter!!
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I can just picture that Sunday’s meeting.
Celestia: “…the cake at her funeral was simply to die for.”
Cure: “Boss.”
Celestia: “Yes Cure?”
Cure: “I had only asked if you had any experience dealing with ponies impersonating royalty. I really didn’t need to know the life story of Celly Bit. And she went by that name?”
Celestia: “It was my suggestion. Alas Celly’s Pastries didn’t survive the poor mare’s passing for long.”
Cure: “let me guess, bought out by a competitor?”
Celestia: “…not quite.”
Cure: “…you bought them?!”
Celestia: “Don’t be ridiculous. Sunny Skies granddam bought them.”
Cure gives her a deadpan look.
Celestia: “Her cake recipes are still used in the kitchens to this day.”
Thanks L-F-O-D for another amazing and entertaining chapter. As always, you attention to detail and description of your chapters characters, environments, events and plots are so amazingly well done they really bring this slice of life story to.....well life. I always look forward to my Mondays and getting a chance to see your next installment to this amazing MLP story. Thank you again for all the time and hard work you've done this 2023 year to make this story a reality and update it regularly to such consistency. I sincerely wish you the best of luck writing your next chapter and also wish you a happy New year. Cheers!
I like how your "one chapter every two weeks" thing lasted less than a month. Not that I will ever complain about "MOAR WERDZ!" because this is still fantastic, and I am looking forward to Cure going to school doing a little happy dance that would put Vines to shame.
Can't wait for more! :D
Happy new year! And I hope you had a good holiday. Good chapter and much enjoyed
great chapter as usual, i wonder what the gold tube was for, but i have to admit that the part where Cure understands what a Serpentus look a like is traying to get with his change lol
I've heard of the word whitesmith, whitesmiths work with metals like silver, gold, pewter I think and probably some other metals, the white and black in white and blacksmiths are referring to the color of metals' oxides
I love it
I think he's just letting him have his "appearance" because that one in the end is a disguise, when the ponies discover that Cure is the prince, I don't think he would do that, it's one thing to find someone like you, it's another to find someone intentionally wanting to look like you is a bit uncomfortable be it face, body, color, etc.
Something tells me this is the song Cure was trying to recall. It's definitely 'ironically' as she teaches us.
Au contraire! I'm sure she has had some VERY interesting encounters and cases of Celly impersonators.
I always look forward to new chapters
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✨Happy New Year everyone!✨
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I've been wondering. Idle minds being the devil's playthings and all... If America goes to war over oil, does Equestria go to war over Sugar? It seems to me Equestria owns (or claims) just about every bit of land that could grow sugar (sugarcane, sugar beet, etc). Faust knows ponies go through a lot of it in just about every meal.
I dunno, maybe it's just the Pinkie Pie certified authentic(tm) tinfoil hat speaking?
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There’s very little I could see Equestria going to war over. That said, when Equestria defends itself, they make sure to win.
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…Besides Cure is a walking WMD before you take into account his human memories. Add those in and Cure might as well be dubbed the Alicorn of Death.
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No whitesmiths work with iron and steel.
Poor Emerald, getting usurped from her position as her own family’s matriarch, and by Cure, the “earth” pony colt to boot. I wonder how this may play out in the future…
And then LFOD is inserting (not quite) cliffhangers (or Chekov’s guns?) with the gold pipe and alicorn seeds along the rail lines. Was it JUST a Cure-plant shoot, or is there something more to develop? So much to look forward to, it’s gonna be a good year! And another update expected next week, even better
Remind me of another old story where Celestia has a bad imitator.
- MLP: FiM
- Adventure
- Comedy
- Mystery
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Alicorn of death the nightmare cure named "Bubonic" After the plage with the same name or a more famous name "The Black Death"
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Except Cure is a blue colt.
Now Cure might give himself a name no pony dares speak. Because his nightmare name is a symbol with no pronunciation and therefore he’s referred to as “The Nightmare Formerly Known as Cure Wave.”
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Discord is easily Cure’s number one fan chaos entity. So much so he’s probably content to mostly behave while Cure leaves nothing but chaos in his wake.
Just finished a reread, a thought occurred to me about the future. Is his test at CSGU gonna involve a certain dragon egg? :P
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I would hope not. Will be interesting to see how the timeline has been changed later on.
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You're not entirely wrong going by the info I'm finding, but from what I'm finding that meaning refers to just polishing and filing iron or steel, and whitesmith doesn't only exclusively mean that, it means what I said also. Also learned brownsmith is a thing too
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Just call him Nurgle.
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a telescope wouldn't need to be gold, nor that thick.
HAP-PY NEW YEAR!
I wonder what mysterious device Cure could be building. I didn't pay too much attention to the description, but I can't think of what use a gold tube could have. Does he want to be a Bond villain or something?
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ngl, i dont know the measurment system they are using.
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it would be too easy for Cure to make a dragon egg hatch. How about animating a golem? As this is pure magic.
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I think Mort suits him a little better. 😉
I forgot to move from my read later to following that error has been corrected. Anyways.
Nice
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He's already buggered the timeline so outrageously by this point it hardly matters. Half the mane six are gonna turn out male, if they're born at all. Some of them might be born decades later. Possibly earlier but much less likely. Spike not being there for Twilight to hatch won't matter all that much if Twilight's not born til 15 years after NMM shows up. I'd hope Cure'd be savvy enough not to do it even if the egg's presented to him, but he hasn't been particularly careful about how his actions are effecting the timeline so far so who knows.
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That’s true. I was more thinking about how he has enough going on without adding Spike. And yeah I don’t expect the mane six to be around just that I wonder how NMM will be handled.
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Yeah my big curiosity of the situation is if he realizes it is Spike's egg, would he refuse to hatch it to try to keep the timeline as in tact as possible, and possibly fail his test, or would he hatch it and mess up the timeline even more?
Or would it not even matter? Would it just be a speculated test of ingenuity for any entrants so the judges can see creativity, etc?
If it was hatched, what then of Twilight in the future, would the test be a different dragon egg? Would it be a test she could seemingly solve without much issue, and as a result not overload on magic?
Basically those thoughts were going through my head, and I put them in a somewhat odd spot given this part of the story doesn't even talk about it, so apologies there.
I've given some headcanons for the future Mane 6 in this timeline. How about some villains?
Nightmare Moon appears in Ponyville, and due to Cure's advice to Celestia, is recognized by several ponies in the crowd. Cure himself greets her, and lays out an ultimatum; Luna can have everything she wanted, if Nightmare Moon leaves. Otherwise, she'll have to contend with an unknown Alicorn who has been preparing for her return for years. Nightmare refuses, and prepares to attack, only to be struck from behind by the Elements of Harmony, who got into position while she was distracted by Cure. He and Celestia had engineered the bearers' discovery of the Elements some time ago, and read them in on Nightmare's return rather than leave things to a roll of the dice.
Discord is deliberately released, and the changed circumstances means he can't simply start spreading chaos without being locked up again. Cure greets him cordially, and matches Discord's style of humour with his own, including the use of magic for gags and pranks. Having known Cure for awhile, the bearers laugh at both of their antics. Discord realizes he loves the attention, and with some prodding from Cure, agrees that using chaos as a tool of domination is tacky and hypocritical. He's also intrigued by Twilight's proposition of a chaos-derived perfect random number generator.
Chrysalis, having been discovered and caught years before Nightmare Moon's return, received treatment for her mental issues and reformed along with most of the rest of her hive, though there are militant splinter factions who believe Chrysalis was brainwashed. Cadance acted as Chrysalis' therapist, and they became good friends as a result. Chrysalis still appears at the Canterlot wedding as the Mare of Honour, and does impersonate Cadance briefly in order to thwart a kidnapping attempt by some rogue changelings.
Sombra is captured within hours of his return, and Radiant Hope is found and brought in as a character witness for his trial. He is ultimately sentenced to exile from the Crystal Empire, extradited to Equestria, and placed in a prison specialized in rehabilitating career criminals. Cure puts him in contact with Twilight so they can discuss magic theory.
Tirek never gets out of Tartarus. Sucks to be him.
Starlight Glimmer actually gets her mark before Sunburst, leading to them attending CSGU together. They quickly become an unstoppable team, with Sunburst's talent for magic theory, and Starlight's talent for the practical side of magic. This earns resentment from their peers, which Starlight internalizes over time, quickly developing imposter syndrome and deciding that it really is unfair that so many ponies are limited by their marks, while she got such a potent one. After graduation, she convinces Sunburst to work with her on a way to harmlessly swap ponies' marks around in order to alleviate the unfairness of ponies being stuck with narrow talents. Going through proper channels, she eventually develops the spell, and is referred to Twilight Sparkle to help refine it. Sunburst then moves to the Crystal Empire to go through their library after having exhausted Canterlot's.
When Cure is helping deliver foals at a hospital (it's traditional by that point, he's expected to do it occasionally), he's startled when one new pegasus dam names her filly Cozy Glow. Having encountered her so early in her life, he assigns some changeling spies to keep an eye on her and warn him if she starts showing signs of mental conditions such as megalomania. Such signs never manifest. She's a normal pegasus filly, albeit with a talent for military strategy.
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Cure would probably hatch the dragon egg. As he does not worry about the timeline too much as Cure said. He was just going to live life without worrying about the timeline while making the future better for everyPony. Thats for his 80 year old self to worry about lol
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I like to imagine that Spike will still end up as Twilight's assistant, but he'll be old enough that she'll call him "Uncle Spike".