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Hussar! it is live!
Cure...
Get Princess Celestia to show you a friggin' WORLD MAP!
Here's one tenet you missed in editing.
Such a wonderful chapter with Cure talking with Celestia nice lore bits to chew on and some comedy all within a single room. I would love to see a Cooking with the Cure chapter with Celestia trying out dishes from Earth I bet she will like pancakes and French toast.
I wonder if Celestia will crown Cure as the ruler before the main 6 come around or not...I could see both. on the first hand, she will be a lot more relaxed with Cure around to take the edge off so she might crown him before or she could get progressively more paranoid the closer her sister's release date nears and stays the one on the throne both are possible. (P.s LivefreeOrDie this is not a question for you just something to start a discussion in the comments)
mistake with the name here with Cure being called Piece i presume?
Adorable. This is what I was waiting for.
Finally it's here!
HA! She's never going to forget that
I know, I know
This was amazing!
> That Storm King dude will nearly wipe ‘em out, then come for us next.
The hippogriffs were in Seaquestria for an extended period, far too long for the Storm King to have been idle in the meantime. Of course, Ed might not know that.
Speaking of which, if somepony kicks a spiky green ball at you, DODGE.
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I think celeastea well think twice before she jeast taking item's without asking first know knowing what she almost did over some seeds
yay more alicorn snuggles! and more preparing for the future, always good. and more rationalizing the injection of memories. although i do honestly believe that cure would have likely killed himself trying something profoundly stupid if it weren't for the artificial injection of wisdom. (i think the author might have touched on this?) i suspect celestia would like a life sized plushie to snuggle. good hearthswarming gift ideas, right?
Poor Celestia was lore dumped and drown in exposition.
Great chapter : )
whoowee this weeks chapter so awesome
poor celestia with that info dump
how can you out write yourself so much
Cool, now I can stop harping on about what Celestia might have sussed out through implication. After a minute or two to think, now I'm wondering about that old meme with Celestia and bananas
Nice
Wunderbar!! Celestia took that like a champ! It’s a testament to Cure’s parents that they took his revelation as well as she did. I imagine anypony else would have gone loopy. Can’t unmake the soup now, princess.
Hoss just took the spell and nothing!! Super soldier battle uniforms: lighter, tougher, faster, softer, stronger, non chafing, form fitting, and soon machine washable.
About Cure’s medical advice, I recall Cure and Title brainstorming about a mare-specific ‘relaxation’ treat a while back. Celestia may benefit greatly from this. Learning to live with stress is not the way to deal with it healthily.
Cure’s going to need his own team of geniuses.
Cure vs Tirek would be a very interesting match even if Tirek was fully powered, I’m sure Cure could figure out a long-range delivery method of a biological force of nature to disable the guy.
I’m also very excited to think about what Cure will discover about Changeling biology when that time comes. They’re biologies are alien to any creature on Earth and Equus, and I think this author will come up with some amazing ideas for them.
Has Dawn seen Celestia raise the sun before? I wonder if this will be a big event for her coming up soon. I hope the families and friends of Golden Hills are doing well. Can’t wait to see them again. The reunion will be so fun!
Thank you, author!!
That closing scene was adorable, although his real mom might be getting all fidgety from her Motherly-Sense tingling.
Going back to replicating tech in Equestria, I think he might have better luck breaking down the requirements instead of trying to cram all of it into a single spell. Like all prototypes, start huge and optimize it later. Flight might be easier too since crystals could use a "simpler" wind spell to blow against wings and provide thrust... which would work for faster ships too. Magically spun flywheels, some gears to turn that momentum into torque and you have a perpetual motion machine to put into trains initially, then trackless trains (auto-mobile). You would need to work on a proper suspension so the whole thing doesn't rattle to pieces on dirt roads.
If Cure ever puzzles out how to turn mechanical work into magical energy, wow, that'd be a huge breakthrough in mana sustainability for stuff that needs to get charged up and not enough ponies to do it.
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no, it's stating that cure has had his piece to say, or share of the information he wanted to impart. It's just, awkwardly, the start of a sentence and as such, capitalized making it follow the format of a "he said" "she said" inciting your confusion.
Link to paramount logo https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/sony-pictures-entertaiment/images/5/53/TRISTAR_PICTURES_PEGASUS.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20150131182620 does not work
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Thanks for the catch. I've fixed the URL and also corrected it. Paramount's logo was the mountain. TriStar, as the URL indicates, had the pegasus. D'oh.
Absolutely awesome chapter
Bump for the feature algoritm.
Each time those two interact I can't help but think to myself-
"Man, this relation will be so weird in the future, as they get to know each other even more. It will only get more bizzare from here on out."
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And I couldn't be happier.
Good gracious.
I can barely stomach editing my own comments on mobile, let alone 18,000 word chapters...
Excellent chapter, by the way.
Covered so much stuff, but still left me excited for the rest that wasn't covered.
Even Cure has holes in his knowledge, mercifully aware of them as he is.
This is so deliciously meta, I love it
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I would put quotation marks here, as this feels, i dunno, disrespectful to Celestia and this world? Probably not explaining it well, but I personally think it would be better, but it's upto you.
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“Wow, I may have unleashed the world’s first memetic hazard!” he proudly beams. Her raised brow prompts him to explain. “A memetic hazard is where a word or phrase gets associated with something else to the point where it is annoying and you can’t get it outta yer head."
Get out of my head. Get out of my head. Get out of my head. Get out of my head. Get out of my head. Get out of my head.
If you had used the words AMONG US within the sentence or paragraph I would have lost my shit.
Example: "I don't really see that being a problem among us, as we are alicorns and have a higher mental fortitude than the average pony"
Or something along those lines
Amazing chapter, purely Cure and Celestia having the BIG TALK, from events yet to come and future threats to Celestia's sex life (or rather lack of it), and her tendency to kill herself in order to use the alicorn immortality tramp card....
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If Cure gets any prep time, he beats any enemy that doesn't also glass the continent (or have some metaphysical "I win" button like the Elements). If he didn't have ethical problems with it, he could be a smart, teleporting, biological grey goo that takes over the planet (now with armies of pigeons raining spellfire on his foes!) with every toxin found in nature and magic power and range expanding proportionally to his exponentially increasing mass.
If Cure ever goes Nightmare, Celestia basically has a responsibility to first strike him and whatever city he happens to be standing in and also the surrounding region, just to be sure. Or at least she would if the world didn't run on tropes. "Villain eats the entire world and starts nibbling on the universe" is not a particularly satisfying ending.
That being said, does anyone have a good Nightmare name referencing "Cure Weave" or "Serpentus"? The best I can think of are too obscure or too cringe.
When she asked Cure if he knew any more secrets of hers the first thing to come to my mind was: "Do you like bananas?"
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The Smooze.
Kidding aside, Cure’s special talent if used as a fallen Alicorn is outright terrifying. Especially given Cure’s memories of Earth and of the various plagues/pandemics that humanity has faced over recorded history.
Cure’s likely domain is life in all of its stages. Death is a natural part of life. And if cure is ever pushed beyond that breaking point, he could end life very quickly, very easily, and with little to no direct involvement. Cure could create an airborne respiratory virus that is for all intents and purposes COVID crossed with, Alzheimer’s, ALS, rabies, leprosy, HIV/AIDS, and Ebola.
He could make it so that it attacks all sentient life on Eques until the only beings left on the planet are the ones who are naturally immortal. Even then they would not be immune from the disease itself. They would be alive unable to truly die as the worst disease imaginable continually ravages their bodies and minds.
He could do this. He could do this quite easily. His nightmare name wouldn’t even have to be long.
It could simply be… Mors.
Which is Latin for Death itself.
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Could simply be Genesis, or Cancer Genesis, life and growth without guidance. I don't particularly see any cool names working out for him though.
Saw "Friend Maker" for Twilight once, sounded silly, but it was rather insidious how it was introduced and the name grew on me. It's all about the presentation.
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A name for a Nightmare Cure? Interesting I would say Dreadmaw or Bio-Beast could be a name we would use. Or Blacklight Unorignal I know but his capabilities would be largely similar to Hide until he can get the kill shot simple and effective like cure likes.
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Cures Nightmare name could be the Withering Dread
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I got it... Mort
Simple and funny for cure, for even when he goes to the dark side he still keeps his sense of humor
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/30613/mort-takes-a-holiday
If he's the Cure, his Nightmare would be the Vaccince.
It would seem our fine author is not lacking in the Culture department!
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The others aren’t total inversions of their names or domains, they’re bent/corrupted versions. Just utilizing those domains to cause disharmony and destruction. Becoming a total opposite doesn’t seem as tragic as a once force for good using that same power to commit evil. An extreme version of his namesake and power would be sterilization. So, a name that was previously brought up that would apply in a twisted way would be Panacea. In his case, a cure for all ills because he would utilize his analysis to strategically wipe out all biological life. If it allows him to create and shape cells, he can take them all apart.
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Pony Snark
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I kek'd.
As for Cure's Nightmare name you all have some good suggestions. I'm inclined to say Cancer or some variant thereof would be pretty good. Cancerous? Maybe Blight or Scourge would work too. Biohazard, Anti Biotic, Epidemic, Pandemic, Pathogen, and Virulence all are from a glossary page I found and sound adequately horrifying.
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I can't think of many chapters that I've published that could have either waited or I should have completely skipped. Maybe the talent show one which is probably my least favorite, but that was an off-day 'why not' semi-omake.
I think having actual dates instead of having time flow ambiguously makes it harder to just kinda skip ahead. In most stories you have very little, if any, idea of how much time has passed between chapters. Here you can say, "It's been 8 months since he got his memories. Why hasn't he shown his friends how to do X?"
He'll step out of the shadows eventually, when he's ready or forced to. If the pace is too slow then do what I (try, but fail to) do with some stories; check back in a few months instead of after each chapter is published.
Just my two cents, how about Flat Line
Cure has enough of a flair for the dramatic to go with the classics.
What about Pestilence?
I don't remember it being mentioned and it seems not to be mentioned in this chapter.
What's the difference between his original cosmetic deaging and his new real deaging?
Best guess is degredation/healing speed.
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They did, ponies with his ability even a light version of it very often accidentally kill themselves making an already exceedingly rare ability that much more rare and it was suggested that his past knowledge is likely the only reason that didn't happen in his case.
Excerpt from ch28
Excerpt from ch51
I'm wanting to think there was meeting between cure and celestia or his parents where the memories bit was directly mentioned as being the reason but I wasn't able to find it at a quick search.
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What about Pestilence? I think it was one of the horsemen of the apocalypse.
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I could also see it where he goes so far into preserving life, he prevents anything from dying. Could eventually make everything stagnate because there'd be no reason to get better. That's its own brand of hell.
I think the best corruptions are ones where everything is taken to an extreme, with no tolerance for moderation.
It's far more sad when a character falls into such extremes and it feels so much better as a resolution when they can be made to realize as such.
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I like Pestilence! You have my vote
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Cure's Nightmar Name wild be well DEATH no matter what u do you will die no one can touch hem kill hem harm hem or any thing except the elements or becus he also has the tree of harmony as a cutie mark maby suffering he well inflict random pane suffering and worse suffering bringing theam to a miner panes to close to death but not letting theam cure wave can probably even affect discord