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Ya new chapter
And this is exactly how Cure’s secret identity is gonna get blown.
Body Control magic to teach motions?
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Yep. Maybe not from the local guard but probably when he either does his medical thing or when he goes to Canterlot
Small flash backs are good at spots in the story wean you have friends talking remembering the good old days wean u get more in to the story and thay jeast talk about what u skipped to speed the story along or celeastea talks about her foalhood past problems etc.
Apparently the inspiration fairy decided to go on a vacation with out notice how rude lol
Love the chapter and cant wait for more Now after thinking about it would Cure have his human adult from before his rebirth or would he keep his pony age and be a kid on the other side of the human world mirror?
I mean… he is a prince… and she might be okay with that. Not 100% sure if Wind will get over the sharing issue, though. But she’d be nuts if she didn’t consider it. Some of the others might be likely, but no filly has gone through the test yet.
Good to know they’re keeping eyes on their charge. Keep up the good work, SGT Haze.
Everyone gets an alicorn horn staff / wand? Those could be worth an entire country with how rare spare alicorn horns are.
Thank you, author!! Hope you’re feeling better!!
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Editor from Baltimare Sun while eating his sandwich with his ace reporter at the sandwich shop outside and across the street of Cure Wave’s business: “These rumors about our recently crowned Prince are absolute rubbish.”
AR: “The absolute rubbishest.”
BSE: “That’s not a word, and I should know. My cutie mark’s a dictionary.”
AR: “Whatever you say sir.”
BSE: “Like seriously this first one claims he can turn water into Prince Blueblood’s favorite wine…”
UPS Driver: “Got a delivery here for Cure Wave!”
Cure: “Sweet! My 500 sealed wine bottles filled with tap water have arrived! Just put them outback.”
BSE: “And this one says he can give life to inanimate objects! Hogwash!”
Dawn: “Cure! The pet rock you gave me is screaming about how he lives again!”
Cure Wave: “Dawn, his name is Goliath and that shouldn’t happen until nightfall.”
Goliath: “I live again! Again!”
Cure Wave: “I should probably fix that.”
AR: “Apparently he can also turn lead into gold…”
Red: “Here is this custom lead platware I told you about, Cure.”
Cure Wave: “Sweet! I can’t wait to see how these designs look in gold!”
Red: “That would cost a fortune.”
Cure Wave: “Yeah, but I’m gonna cheat. Hello 5000% profit margin!”
AR: “And can speak in tongues unheard of in Equess.”
Cure Wave: “pujqu'mo' neH.”
Vines: “Cure, what have I told you about making up words?”
Cure Wave: “je ne m'en souviens pas.”
Vines: “CURE!”
BSE: “And the cherry on top is he can shoot lasers out of his eyes.”
Sergeant Haze: “Cure! You’ve got an urgent letter from “Sunny Skies from the palace.”
Cure Wave: “Gee Sarg, I had no idea you did mail delivery.”
Haze: “We don’t. I don’t know what strings Ms Skies pulled with her highness to get us to do this but it says by ‘Royal Decree Cure Wave is to open this missive immediately.’”
Cure Wave: “Wonder what the boss lady is upset about.” *Opens note.* “All it says is ‘Don’t even think about it.’ Well that could mean anything.”
*bush immediately next to Cure Wave spontaneously catches fire*
Cure Wave: “Fiiiinnneee!”
BSE: “Could you imagine a colt being able to do any of that? It’s ludicrous.”
AR: “Utter nonsense.”
Cure Wave: “Wasn’t there also a rumor about how his saliva glands actually produce a venom that causes ponies to hallucinate when he spits on them?”
BSE: “Yes, but that little bit has already been throughly debunked by the crown. With their press corps saying “Serpentus is far too good a clot to ever consider doing anything as crass spitting on another pony.”
Cure Wave: “…dang it.”
I see ya getting super close to the 1 million word mark!
Take a break if you need to! No updates for a while are better than you burning yourself out.
Was the hash sign supposed to be a quotation mark? I'm not sure about the paragraph break, either.
Give them the what? The D? D as in Details, of course.
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...I think each staff would litterally be worth a crown...I think
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Hehehheehheeh
Love that little story right there!
awesome chapter
Neat, I guess he can teach muscle memory or something now
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The transmute thing was already confirmed to be illegal to make the precious metals on, I presume, some list somewhere.
I know this is probably a throwaway character, but is she pink or sapphire?
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Oh that was before Cure became an immortal Alicorn, was crowned grand prince (and is now second in line to the throne), and is the most well sought out and beloved healer in all of Equestria.
No prison can hold him. No judge in Equestria could try him. The populace would riot if he were imprisoned.
The only peer he has is Princess Celestia and pretty much the worse thing she could ever do to him is increase his taxes as punishment…
…
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… you know what, to Cure, that probably counts as cruel and unusual punishment. XD
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Probably the same way he taught the bats how to blink their second membranes, just using the staff as a focus instead of the short range earth pony aura, “Feel how the muscles move? Now you do it”
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Sapphires can be pink and other colors too you know… but yeah, I always think of blue for the color sapphire
Hope Serpentus’ ”treatment” of the hypochondriacs cures them from their “flavor of the day” illnesses. Give them a 10 second nerve tingle, twitch a couple muscles so they can feel themselves being “cured” and next time they get a headache or stub a toe or suffer indigestion they’ll just take an aspirin instead of declaring a diagnosis of Lupus or Cancer or Twisted Intestines
I kinda wanted to see the burn victim story play out.
This story just never gets old with Cure and his shenanigans with his adorable Filly friends. Shame that there won't be a chapter next week though... Anyway, good update as always!
I hope you find your inspiration, I love this story and having that feeling that in a future chapter we will see several ponies talking about their healing achievements, knowing that we are witnessing them now, I can't wait for when he starts to grow up for real and vortex like an adult alicorn.
Because it is his cutie mark, private. It is the principle of things.
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I know they can, but when the word sapphire is used for the name of a color, it's sapphire blue. The word sapphire is derivative of the latin word for blue.
Yo mate, question.
We ever gonna get a time skip to adulthood in thr future? Or are you planning of ending it whiles he's still a child?
Was hoping for more with patients, but good chapter overall. The flashbacks where good as well
Finally! Usually I have nothing to catch here. XD
Whoever doing the editing doing the damn good job.
Also, no, flashback wasn't jarring. Maybe a tiny bit confusing, but being interesting prevailed.
great chapter as always, with a nice "that colt has friends in high places... don't question it" ending
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I wuld not say body control may it more like how some 1 helps some 1 this is how you move he cots theam in his magic and thay fallow the motions in till thay get it down instead of using hands
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That's extremely hard to understand.
Coats in magic?
No, that wouldn't cause Guard to alarm. Also, that wouldn't give that proficiency. But his talent allows to cheat and create dark magic's effects in mundane way. He programmed their muscle memory.
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They coate the body in magic
Like a skin how some 1 wuld help so 1 swing a baseball bat a golf club how thay stand behind theam show theam how to grip it the stance, poster and motion cure coats theam in his magic and the others relax and have cure show theam how to move like a instructor helping theam
Or how thay pick itams up and moves theam thay coate thear magic around it to fill it to move it
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I think this point is moot, since anything related to healing is gonna be free if cure is involved. pharmaceutical companies are probably gonna go extinct by the end of the century. will they try to prevent this? likely. will they succed? no way.
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Gastro-intestinal teeth are very effective, you know!
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Welcome, my hoof, say 'hi' to my face...
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Listen, its perfectly fine to have a serious villian in a slice of life story, but the way things are set up this is just a self-insert wishfullment fic.
First off this is not a slice of life fic, the author gave Godlike powers to his protagonist that fundamentally shift how the whole setting is going to work, this is a poorly made drama, not a slice of life fic.
And as far as actual slice of life goes, not even slice of life is this conflict dry, what makes a slice of life fic interesting *is* the conflict and the low stakes. Cure wave is world changing, and faces nearly no conflict at all.
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Slice of life is is life its self it has normal mundane stuff that maby you can't handle idk if thay have every BS powers out thear in the world it is how thay live day to day his villain in in the future except maby the minitors becus he changes nature, zebras becus of is cure trees taking away thear profit and thows who worck in pharmacy.
Jeast what's 4 the Colts to start his church and everything eals the worst enemies are the ones that your trying to protect
*sidles up to the Great Deku Tree.*
“Psst! Yanno that one time I saved your acorns from that giant spider thing? I need a favor. I know a guy what needs a whole pack o’ fairy assistants for a weekend.”
It just dawned on me… Cure will probably have to face a very hard day in the not so distant future now that he’s working in the ER.
How will he react when there is a pony he couldn’t save? What will he do when a pony dies right in front of him? How will he react to that?
And more importantly… well he’s already done it once.
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A patient cursed with a soul degradation spell cones in with signs of Alzheimer's forgetting themselves and loved ones, Celestia is away for (Leader duties or whatever) and can't help and the Patient sadly dies.
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Is it time for the Great Breezy Migration already???
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Cure has seen loved ones die if he failed to help a creature than he will probably try to find a way so that situation does not repeat itself.
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These powers, and how they fundamentally change the entire setting disqualifies it from Slice of Life
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I don't think that's true just because they have powers doesn't mean it can't be a slice of life. Slice of life means that there is a focus on the normal everyday life of said character just because he has power means nothing but a more interesting life for us to see. Like how the show Wizards of a Waverly Place has powers but it's still a slice of life reporting on the everyday life of a wizarding Family and the dumb stuff they do.
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Slice of life needs low stakes and low scale, being an international demon with the ear of the princess is fundamentally opposed to this. This is not Slice of Life.
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If you must have a villain, I would suggest that instead of an individual or antagonistic group, Cure’s opponent is more nebulous:
He has all these abilities and advantages, HOW does he incorporate the societal changes without unbalancing the “natural order “? Questions have been raised regarding birth rates and ratios, “outliving” retirement savings when lifespans are doubled, the impact on the pharmaceutical industry, etc.
WHAT repercussions must he and his friends endure when it’s discovered that they are using their talents “unnaturally” with their activated cutie marks? Wind Shear won the obstacle course competition their first trip to Canterlot heavily relying on her ability to cheat inertia.
HOW does everyone feel and/or react when it’s discovered Serpentus is really Cure? When it’s discovered (to what extent?) Cure is “cheating” through the use of his memories?
I think it’s the intangible “UNINTENDED CONSEQUENCES” that become Cure (and LFODs) villain, and our author is keeping us all quite invested with their excellent storytelling.
If your complaint is a collegiate definition of the difference between “drama” and “slice of life”, just remember, this is a (nearly) anonymous forum for fanfiction from My Little Pony and other than comment conversations, there is little real world impact. LFAW is presented as a slice of life story and I would consider inserting a villain unrealistic, I certainly don’t have a villain in my life, do you?
And now for something completely different… a little omake I imagined up while bored on a long drive… Cure and Dawn have been accepted into CSGU and she is now aware of Cure’s memories as Ed.
The unicorn instructor MakeGone aGull is introducing her students to magic dueling and inviting students to sign up for the dueling club. After she’s stepped out to retrieve the safety amulets Drake MayFly, who’s the son of a noble, don’t you forget, teases Cure for not joining the club as a “Mud pony” just couldn’t compete
Cure simply responds “it wouldn’t be fair”
“Afraid of embarrassing yourself and losing, Cute? Yeah, that wouldn’t be fair”
“No,” Cure responds, “unfair to the club. You misunderstand, I said I wouldn’t join the competition, but I’ll happily duel you”
Ms Gull returns with the protection amulets and barely asks for volunteers before Drake interrupts “I challenge Cure to a duel!”
Cure just shrugs and steps into the ring. Drake scoffs as Cure doesn’t even bother to pull his staff out his plot (“Cause there’s nowhere else for a Mouth Holder to put it”) before lighting his horn and throwing a tk push at the blue student.
Cure just blinks and waves a hoof left to right “These aren’t the droids you’re looking for”. Dawn snorts, drawing a glare from Drake.
“You’re next Mud Lover” as he throws a no look stun at Cure.
Cures amulet blinks yellow, registering the hit and he takes a step forward, twisting his hoof in a throwing motion “Pikachu, I choose you!”
Drake looks puzzled while Dawn is covering her giggles with both hooves, earning her another glare from the noble. “ENOUGH OF THIS” as he unleashes a fury of fireballs, (Drakes talent, don’t you know), and Cures amulet blinks yellow again.
Only for Cure to shrug off the attack, take one more step forward, waves a hoof top to bottom, says simply “Sleep” as Drake collapses to the mat, his chin touching just as Cures hoof returns to the floor. Drake’s amulet chimes out a ten count and turns red announcing the loss.
(And now you know why I don’t write stories)
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I thought it was nice and Cure would definitely do that to an arrogant pony Definitely in character for him. I bet once he is in "CSGU" he will have the big talk about his memories with the friend group.
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That is fundamentally opposed to the concept of slice of life. you do not get to tackle issues of that scale and call yourself slice of life, furthermore those conflicts you're mentioning need representatives which there just isn't any serious ones.
And as far as villains go, I'm not asking for some larger than life magical demon, but an actual antagonist. The HR pony would have been a great example of a good slice of life antagonist but it came and went and there were no lasting consequences. The Pharma company would have been a great antagonist but it came, went and was immediately resolved.
The guard or the princess could have been great antagonists and about them is it was literally lampshaded about how cure would have taken his ball and went home over it but instead it's all hunky-dory.
slice of life is a measure of stakes, it's not absence of conflict