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One of my favourite stories and you threaten to ruin it with taxes. Why must you be so cruel
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Remind me, how long before Nightmare Moons return does this happen??
Also, this is good. Loved the shopping scenes. Such a trickster!!
As if Cure's ability wasn't deadly enough. He can already insta-kill anyone who gets within two meters of him with but a thought. If he decides to pursue this idea and turn himself into a pony hydralisk, he'll probably be able to snipe someone from a hundred meters away. Bulwark is going to shit a brick when he learns the colt can pull stuff like this with ease.
weaponised sneezing, nice touch... Now just to figure the dart launcher.
Nice chapter surprisingly with taxes beyond holiday taxes
Thanks for the update and amazing work as always!
Im looking forward to a meeting with Celestia. I can see it happening.
The Flower Trio would love to get their hooves on those special scented flower seeds.
Sandalwood has a horrible smell.
Reminds me of that comic dub where Rarity gives Twilight some jewelry, basically a jewel with a string attached to a horn ring, and uses it as a toilet pull string. I couldn’t find the comic.
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Here’s hoping he never gets his hooves on a cockatrice. Stone gazes would be much harder to explain, but if it worked like anything else he’s got and can basically turn it on and off with a thought, that colt is already op as is.
Loved this chapter. Would have liked to see more from the book and appliance store, but that's more that I like world building. Overall though very good!
I thought Cure already submitted the Periodic Table in his school assessment, and was said earlier that the teachers thought it was a thesis, and are reviewing the Table
Has Cure hit upon the idea of giving his family and friends phone gems so they can be on communication with each other? Maybe send text messages or possibly even photos? a maybe with some “Hey, Siri” thrown in there?
Yea
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The stone gaze is a magical effect, so it probably falls into that metaphysical realm that he can't replicate.
However, a scan of a cockatrice may allow him to turn his eyes into directed magical foci for other things...
Finally caught up. When you said you were sick a few chapters ago I desided to re-read this story, since I thought you'd be bed ridden for far longer. Also, i never realised just how much you written in such a short time, I'm both impressed and a little worried about you. Strike while the irons hot and all that, but make sure you're taking care of yourself, ok? ❤
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In my rereading, I've noticed a few small errors that I missed the 1st time. I can't remember which chapters though, so you're going to have to check each 1, sorry
As for this chapter:
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I just wanna do my part to polish this great story, as this has quickly become 1 of my all time favourite stories
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Nightmare Moon doesn't return for another 92 years. If you look at beginning of a chapter you will see the date, "Sunday, November 16th, 908 AB". Nightmare Moon returns in 1000AB on the day of the summer sun celebration...
At least that is what Cures assumes of this universe, we readers can only assume the same.
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Alright. Thank you
I absolutely love this chapter's focus and its pace throughout. Also first actual bad pony!
I personally love a good action story but the way this chapter played on the action before going back to the usual slice of life was perfect.
Fantastic chapter "LiveFreeOrDie", I am especially looking forward to seeing how everyone will react to there chosen gifts.
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A fullstop has escaped you, master writer.
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I am hoping we get to the POV of Solar telling his sire about his day with Cure. Not forgetting to mention Cure's feelings about the Unicorn as well as Cure's own insists to talk about it. As quoted below.
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I had not considered the gaze belonging to the metaphysical realm either. You make a good point, although I like the idea that it would allow a magical focus through the eyes. Reminds me of fluttershy and her stare.
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I like this blooper. Definitely got a laugh out of me.
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In "Catharsis" a long range telecommunication device is one of the first things Cure says he'd like to be able to make when learning enchanting. Sadly, until he can find some kind of spell to put on a crystal or until he can make his own spells he's SoL for now.
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I think I also made some joke about the French Toast recipe in there and nobody commented on that, so *shrug*
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I think one of those words is a link to a Google Image Search that will answer this for you.
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(Maybe)
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Blooper nothin. Cure's already the proud parent of about a dozen fireflies. Foal services are gonna rip his shit up once they find him.
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I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it so much! I appreciate that, really.
Thank you, everyone, for the compliments, critiques, and just for taking the time to read & comment. I believe I have addressed all of the typos pointed out, too, so thanks for that also.
Taxes don't start until next month, why would you make me think about them early!
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Ohhhhhh! That feels obvious in hindsight.
sunset shimmer* "CHANGE ME INTO AN ALICORN"
Cure Wave* slaps wings on bacon haired unicorn* "congratulations. you are now an alicorn. that'le be five billion bits."
SS. "WHAT?! i dont have that kind of money!"
Cure wave gives her a deadpan look before the newly minted "Alicorn" wing promptly fall off and vanish. "then no wings for you till you grow them yourself."
on a side note... what if Celestia is an accomplished biomancer and that's why she is seemingly immortal? what if she new Luna would be trapped in the moon for a thousand years and had to learn biomancy so that she could last long enough to see her sister again?
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With all the phat stacks of money Cure is raking in, I'd think the taxman would be very interested in him insofar as finances go. The only issue I'd have is that I don't believe taxes have been set aside as he gets paid to make for a rather tough pill to swallow come tax time. It's a bit like my sister, who's self-employed, who has to keep this in mind how much she owed and to have it ready when tax time rolls around. As an hourly myself, it's all taken out before I see my paycheck. Too much actually which means a nice return every year (equivalent to almost three weeks pay).
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I should have paid more attention to geography but how far is his hometown from Canterlot/Ponyville? Would the town be in the path of the eventual disasters that will happen in the future?
I could see Cure absolutely wrecking Tirek since bioweapons could doom him before he even knows he's been infected. That and I've read some other rather brutal (human concieved) ways to take out the demon. The flipside is this would also ruin the magical moment Twilight and company are supposed to have so she can open the locked box... eh.
Might be best to just lurk in the background and silently buff the girls so they can get through all the events thrown at them.
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Ok, while using the map and the written quotes at the end of this comment as references.
We learn Golden Hill, Cure's home town, is a 15 minute train ride away from Baltimare which in turn is 350 miles (~550KM) away from Canterlot which takes a ten hour train ride.
With some assumptions with train speed, Golden Hill is about 8.75 miles from Baltimare.
Cure's Home town is about 340~345 miles east of Canterlot.
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Dunno why, but somehow this story have everything I love to see in a good story. The only issue I have with it is that I reached current last page and can't wait for more.
UPD: Yay, more!
Dude MC is going for maximum over-harem! K- k- k- combo!!!
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Cure is genuinely terrifying... Like, imagine you just go about your day, accidentally bump into a random passerby on the streets and suddenly your entire body is just mush
The power of the sax is universal.
And here we see a sample of why messing with a biomancer is essentially suicide.
Very, very neat.
And I should mention I quite look forward to the interactions and their consequences with Discord, Celestia, Luna, etc.
Heh! I bet Rarity would be shitting diamond bricks if Cure was still available in 90+ years to supply her with bolts of silk like that!
Ha! Waving money around has this rather curious effect on attitudes...