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Nice chapter, tho I didn't expect to see an update at this time :P
Second time I read something similar in this chapter, and with all the talks about being summoned to the capital... is this foreshadowing? 👀
Can't wait for Cure to show off to everyone tho! He is going to Canterlot soon, right?
200 bits says Chrysalis would go all giddy at Cure's spider form, cuddling him like a puppy.
Ah well, was hoping for some soul caliber Nightmare costume
I am so excited!!! So much talk about Celestia feels like foreshadowing to actually meeting her.
I can't wait!!
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Nowhere near obscure enough!
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You're right, but that last sentence is accurate. Just do a GIS for "Victoria Secret Angel" for example.
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Scarcity is the main issue now. Let's assume that Cure did, in fact, deage Violet completely. It took half a parent's worth of magic and the only existing biomancer (that we know of) on the planet to do so. How many ponies could you do in a year compared to how many ponies there are dying of old age in a year?
As far as the population concern being an issue, in the Canterlot chapter Cure mused about the size of the country; estimating it to be 1/3 or so the size of the US. In Running of the Leaves I said something about trees still shedding leaves and there was a point about the vast majority of the country being unsettled land. If you search for it, several folks have done some work to estimate populations. They're low, very low. I think the highest one I found was like 8 million, and that's ~100 years from now. Bottom line; I believe the population of the country could double a couple times and it still would be able to survive, especially since earth ponies are the food producers and the plurality or majority of the population.
Would Cure let the Princess in on his very dangerous secret about knowing what to expect in the afterlife? I am not too sure if they can handle the concrete proof that life as they know it was just a simulation.
Either way, this is an awesome chapter! Plenty of technicals are awesomely explained as world building!
Is cure going to get a hobby
Thanks for the update and amazing work as always!
Wonder if he's gonna meet Celestia in the form of her pink haired self and does a cosmetic change to give her the flowing multicolored look. Might do the same to Luna upon her return 90 years from now?
Heh. Spider "costume".
Instantly imagining some of those lines being read in a creaky Ilwrath-like voice.
PoNiEs ArE pRrReY aNiMaLs, WeAk AnD hElPlEsSsS
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P. sure he already has one - disrupting meals.
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i up the antty at 500 bits
awesome chapter, cure's "costume" would sent me running in an instant
this story, you are an amassing writer.
im a glutton for world building
Spider legs are hydraulic. Spiders pump blood into their legs in things like arteries and then it drains back without a vein to move
Kinda reminds me of a superman quote I saw on tvtropes for, I think, the 'all loving hero' page
This is good. I really appreciate your writing style and the story has a lot of strong points. My only thing is I wish there were more slice of life style moments with Cure and the other foals. Similar to this chapter but without the extra-heavy focus on his talent or future. I'd love to see Cure just take a break for once and enjoy just being a kid.
🤢
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It is worth noting we produce 3 times the food required for Earth's current population
(1/3 lost due to poor storage/transportation, so we have an effective double food produced needed). So Equestria most certainly can feed itself and with Earth Pony magic combined with Cure's hacks? All the food.Thanks again LFOD for another amazing couple of chapters. The dialog in these chapters, as they usually are, are quite engaging and fun to read. The plot seem to be moving along at a good pace, in addition to having lots of unexpected and interesting things/events popping up, like with the accidental de-aging event of Violet Jewel. I'm excited to see what happens to the plot in the near future and how characters like Celestia will react and interact with Cure sometime in the future. Thanks again for all the time and hard work you put into bringing this amazing story to us, and I wish you all the best of luck writing your next chapter. Cheers!
Una respuesta muy plausible con respecto a porqué Scootaloo no puede volar.
Veo a Blueblood en esa línea de fuego en algún momento en el futuro.
XD
Esto va a ser muy divertido.
Good chapter!
I really hope we get to see someone push cute too far one day, just because we know he'll do something crazy to himself to scare the daylights out of them. Then of course cure will feel bad and need friends and family to help convince him he isn't a bad pony for that. Just remember the saying "a wise man fears angering a gentle man. "
I was almost hoping Cure would show up as a false Nightmare Moon or something, but that'd probably have been a bit too much...
Minor grammar point: I think the common convention for consecutive paragraphs of dialogue from the same character is to have quotation marks at the start of each paragraph, but only at the end of the final paragraph.
It's just a convention though.
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I'm still wondering how and when Cure will recognize a changeling. I assume it'll be a casual 'ping' from his ambient senses [heat pits] at first, then possibly a deeper "ranged scan" assuming Cure doesn't lose track of the pony showing all the wrong signs (abnormal body heat and then wrong organs when scanned). And then there's what to do with that information. Unlike any other government, Changelings are not bound by shared laws or even pony morals (Kinda reminds me of the Institute from Fallout 4).
...this is assuming they're even around this far in the past. It's still like 100 years before the Wedding fiasco.
Great ch thank u
If this wasn't in George Takei's voice I'm going be very disappointed.
Unnecessary word.
I was worried about the assessment Haze was going to have to provide his chain of command especially after the spider scare and de aging talk, but he seems to understand the importance of keeping the MC safe and able to work without fear.
Incredible chapter I just thought it was sad that he just scared Solar, I wish I had seen him going out at night, or scaring his parents
That bit about him taking a new look at his spider costume...spider silk, woven enchanted runes, wooden....
Anypony willing to bet the idea he just pooped will outperform kevlar woven laminated carbon nanotube armor plating?
Nearly exposed right there! Passable deflection though so secret is still safe...
Aw... Cure would be an adorable bicon </3 Oh well. Maybe he'll decide to try something new in a few centuries XP
...If they were hanging out at Cures house, you'd never be able to say a sentence like that without someone commenting on it.
Heh... heheh... heh. No pressure.