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I WANT TO GIVE MORE THUMBS UP BUT I CANT!!!!!
silliness aside that was another brilliant chapter.
Huh, so in the next chapter, we can expect water (and sugar) to turn into alcohol. Now where have I heard that from, hmm...
It's amazing can't wait for more chapters in the future.
I just wish i could give you more likes for each chapter.
👍
I dream of cure making me a sperm udder to do just that.
I’ve done that before with Water Lily, Dyson, and Rainbow Twister in my story.
Just wait until Celestia meets Mark Wells or TD the nonbrony alicorn.
I honestly can’t wait till we get to see cadence make an appearance (if she ever does). She was always my favorite alicorn.
Woo! Congrats on 1K thumbs up!
This is an amazing story and every one is well deserved!
Not many authors can boast having written a story that gotten a thousand upvotes and close to a million words in about a year. You feel proud for making such an amazing story. I have read countless thousands of stories across different sites and fandoms and stories like this are extremely rare.
In any case great chapter. Wonder if the Minotaurs will become more problematic than predicted.
Also had a hilarious idea of what Sunset Shimmer would actually be Cure’s and Celestia’s child or descendant.
thanks
Congrats on the thumbs up milestone! Definitely well deserved!
You're also in the final stretches of reaching the 1,000,000 word count milestone as well! I'm overjoyed to have found your story very early on and watched it grow and flourish as it has
I'm rooting for you and your circumstances to stabilize for you to reclaim some more peace!
Another great chapter.
awesome chapter, so worth the wait every time :D
This was quite the ride of a chapter and I enjoyed everyone minute of it!
See you in 2 weeks then
I look forward to Monday now because of this story. It's always a treat to wake up and have these to look forward to. That said, don't feel a need to stress yourself over it! One of the things I love about this story is that it takes as long as it takes to get where it's going, and no faster. Rest assured that I, at least, will be here reading every chapter no matter when it comes. I hope your life situation improves!
You know, the way to fix that would be for Cure to start showing Celestia (and his friends and family) all the human movies he’s ever watched. Just like he showed her “My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic.”
Starting with Star Wars.
Heck, he could probably make it the Sunday Night Movie or something…
…record them in crystals…
…create a magical projector and audio system called DHX (instead of THX)…
…sell the ponier version of the films…
…profit immensely.
It's a pity you can't put more than one like.
I suspect some of those politicians will have the pony FBI come knocking
I am intrigued by the Minotaurs and Zebras finding solace with their opposition to Cure. With his title now widely known, I don’t think they’re going to skirt with the prospect of messing with him directly anymore. That said, espionage is definitely on the table. I am also concerned about the family and families of his friends. Cure might need to keep an eye out for that “castle in the sky” promise of his sooner than later and make sure it can fit extended family… I hope the Golden Hills guard are getting all kinds of training and additional members for Cure’s friends / potential future herd.
I like how many details the government is given. It helps establish the foundations for the rules the country follows and for the ponies’ cultural traditions. And the nobles all seem to adhere to that culture of Harmony as well which is quite refreshing. Most stories just write that group off as petulant or spoiled, but this shows them as a part of the culture even if they’re separated from the general population by their stations. But this is also their first meeting and good impressions are important for their first. Even so, Marryland apologized and that speaks of his character even if it could only be self-serving to do that.
I definitely look forward to Ferric analyzing that metal. “Feeling” it has fascinating potential.
I expected the Griffons to try tempting Cure with cuisine. Maybe next time.
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That's probably gona click as a plan a few chapters after he gets back home
Maybe I missed something, but I was surprised by the Minotaur's reaction.
Also, it's good to see the casual tribalism being brought to Celestia's attention. I'm not sure exactly what she can do about it, but hey Knowing is half the battle. (Yo Joe! )
Yeah, this story really made Mondays better than they were before. :)
Given how Cure demonstrated his ability to the two previous groups, and how candid the ambassador's family has been, I almost expected the ambassador to just straight up ask Cure for an extra set of cock and balls right about here.
I don't know why but the "this is stupid because of X" comment in the author notes had me rolling. It has been a while since I have laughed that hard.
Eh. I'm in the midst of a full reread anyway. One or two missed Mondays won't kill me. Focus on your health, physically, emotionally, financially, etc. Fanfics can wait.
On another note, I've come up with an idea for a story set in the same world with slightly opposite themeing. Knowing me, I'd probably start on it and never finish, but I figured I'd ask anyway. You cool with me
blatently stealingtaking inspiration from your ideas for my own silliness? I'm not talking a collab or anything, more a "this character does things here and occasionally gets news about the new prince" kind of thing.11705508
And the other half is violence!
And for his next trick, time to remove his head, FINALLY! I wonder if the unintended consequence from showing the griffins he can’t be “cut” will/would backfire.
Celestia’s lingerie, the ambassador’s daughters getting hoovesy (those poor fillies), and already making friends with the nobility, Cure really has it all! Great chapter. I do hope the minotaur ambassador doesn’t mistreat/ostracize/abandon his daughter and grandcalf as “tainted”
LFOD needs to take care of LFOD first. Just remember, this too shall pass. THEN you’re better able to satisfy ‘we strangers’ need for your tasty tasty horse-words. THANK YOU
Your story is awesome and one of the best I've read in years, I'm not surprised you got so many thumbs up. You even got a favourite off me
Thanks for the chapter. And good luck!
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I'm not
One sead miniaturs might think his cure trees are abomination of nature and might reject theam henceforth.
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Jala is the daughter of an embassy worker, not his own.
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Cure made it very clear during his first meeting with the princess, captain, and LT that he would be exceedingly displeased with anyone threatening ponies to get to him. I sure hope the princess passed that warning along.
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The chapter after that, there’s gonna be a plague of fishes. Yanno, like his insect grenade trick, but aquatic.
Everypony is already getting double or triple buns bre
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Noted, my mistake. still hope the poor girl and calf don’t suffer in any way blamable to Cure. (aaaaaahhhh senpai noticed me again)
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I'm just surprised Cure didn't simply give himself female body parts for a hilarious reaction from the Fillys.
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I disagree. Maybe for a fun one-off short story or something that entirely focuses on that as a concept, but absolutely not for something much bigger like this. Bringing in unrelated media like that would be tasteless filler.
Holy crap Cure, that was so smooth it makes Teflon seem like sandpaper.
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Lies always lead to more lies, thats why honesty is the best policy
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What's not to like? Swords are AWESOME!!
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Quickhorn: "Off with his head!!!"
Cure: *takes his head off* "yeah thats not gonna work buddy."
Celestia: *facehoof*
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*shouldn't / should notTake care of yourself ok? While I'm sure I'm not the only one sad to hear there will be no chapter next week, your life comes 1st always. Trust me, we can wait
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How so? Something like that can be done in passing or a cutaway and referred to in the story. That could be done with a few sentences like referring bacta tanks to his interest in changing pods (which I believe was partially done). He's not suggesting writing chapters about it.
I think you meant leans over
It's very rare but I coulda sworn I saw one or two other things that needed correcting but I get so wrapped up in these chapters and how well your story flows that by the time I reach the end of a chapter I've forgotten them haha, also sorry I know it's useless of me to say that.
Hope life gets less hectic for you and thanks for another great chapter
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Lol. Yeah that actually threw me, I didn’t understand why he suddenly felt compelled to regrow them at that point especially with him knowing the photographer was nearby, way to back out of his own reasoning there.
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I think Cure handled himself very well with the pony delegates. I'm surprised there weren't more inappropriate jokes being thrown around.
The minotaur embassador throwing a hissy fit really threw me for a loop. Like, wow! But I guess he just didn't want to be in Equestria any more.
I hope we get to see more minotaur interactions in the future. And I hope they are friendlier.
The griffons gave Cure the best gift. Who could trun down such an awesome weapon.
I'm also surprised that Cure just didn't cut his entire leg off while "testing" the sharpness. But of course that might have been to messy for Celestia.
While others would test sharpness by shaving a few hairs, splitting a hair, cutting paper, or tomatoes, we have Cure cutting his own leg.
Never stop being you, Cure.
My favorite part of this entire story is still Celestia and Cure just interacting with each other.
The IOU caramels incident... Especially the "I hid them inside a tree."
"Well you should have hidden them better."
I lost my shit.
I also forgot to add....
Every time I see this story update, I see "Life finds a way" in the list. I read it in my head in Jeff Goldblum's voice, complete with the "uh" pause.
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Does anyone else do that? Or am I just old.
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I've read a lot of fanfics over the past decade of my life and I'd like to think that I know at least a little bit about what makes for a good fanfic. Mentioning other media directly doesn't read well. It's rarely funny and doesn't add any substance. Especially bad cases are exactly what was described. "He copied the book and oooh, he made millions! Hella profit! Big cash money! Incredible dosh! Mega dollar!"
It doesn't come off as fun or quirky. It comes off as the author fellating a piece of media that has no relation to it outside of the author's own interests. The only fanfics where it does work are comedy one-offs and stream of consciousness type stories where everything comes and goes so suddenly that it's not even a single bit out of place. Stuff that you don't mind being really trashy, because that's the reason why you wanna read it in the first place.
In this story specifically, what we've seen so far is Cure making direct mentions and references when he thinks of something he can replicate, or has replicated. It makes perfect sense and there's absolutely no need to go beyond that.
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I find myself thinking of this very quote every time I start reading more chapters as I slowly but surely get caught up.
In my early 30s, though, so not quite old yet.
Smaller, self-propelled wagons would be easier, especially if they can be enclosed and climate controlled. It’s still not a perfect solution due to the need for drivers, maintenance crew, logistics ponies, administration, and flatter, better roadways. Still, it’s a step in the right direction at least
Oh Cure, glad you're focusing on public transport and now the disaster of cars
I think you meant billow, which is to blow in the wind, or fill with air, like a sheet or loose sail or even smoke or mist, not bellow, which is a loud shout.
You know 100% sane pony?
Maud.
There is no such thing as absolute sanity, it'a relative scale.
Humans are no less... but because dust, badly designed nose, smoke and alcohol kill that sense, we usually have artifical amplifiers and enhancers.
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Nah, here it should
I shall not X, nor accept that Y,Z should become common.
Negation here is in "nor". It's a begemoth of a sentence but it is warranted here as a reprimand. I would've used neither instead of not, it's more emphasized. Comma in front of nor is unnecessary
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You're right, i missed the "nor" lol. Thx for correcting me