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And the lady of the lake and Excalibur was also in Charmed.
I'm kinda hyped for cure's conversation with that doctor that's presumably coming up.
Uh oh.... I smell a plot. I think celestia organized this to work cure until he passed out and get a scan of him without him knowing.
One thing Cure Wave should get from scanning all those foals (or at least the colts) is how many of them have the defect that makes them produce only X sperm. (Assuming the condition is inborn and not induced by later exposure to magic or the like.)
Hey I wouldn’t mind having some.
Is that supposed to Florida or Colorado?
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It's possible she may have just been curious about how far he is currently able to use his talent.
Also, it would be hilarious if his sister was another Isekai.
who is celestia trying to fool here, (challenge him) aka i want to know what you are really capable off
isekay test xD first little sister is here yay
Haha punny.
The first time some of the family getting scanned didn't disappoint.
Cure getting scanned happened off screen but I have a feeling the doctor will have some questions later about both. Everyone was kind of preoccupied at the time and too tired for discussion after.
The story so far has been very clinical & logical even with the use of magic, so how does this fit in? Changing the full biology of a creature like that would kill it, mainly because of the one area of the body that even Cure refuses to mess with, the brain. The brain is hardwired to the functions of the body, you go messing with that one way or the other then you're asking for trouble. Then there's the sudden presence of the incorrect hormones present in the body, this again would cause conflict in the brain and the body. Additionally is the psychological effects.
There's nothing to support it with logic & reason like everything else Cure has explained. It doesn't fit with how the story has been written up to this point.
Additionally, since a lot of comic & show canon is used in this story, Twilight even stated that changing a mare into a stallion was impossible after her magic duel with the Alicorn Amulet Trixie. And I am aware some canon is ignored as it has no logic to it. Such as what ponies look like. Which just makes me question all the more why this has been written into the story.
accidental space there
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Missing a " at the beginning.
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I think a "him" in the middle would make it sound better.
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I think you ment "worn", but I could be wrong.
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I think you ment "have to help", but I could be wrong.
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Magic has also been shown to cheat at times like when cure can have his magic fix something even if he doesn't know what it's doing or what was wrong.
Anything to temporarily swap genders would be cheating a lot but it doesn't seem out of the realm of possibility for what has been shown so far.
I can imagine Cure creating some stupid stuff in the garden in hopes princess would take some samples, something like blue strawberries, that are both full of capsaicin and menthol, thus dooming someone to feel hellfire in their mouth. Or some ready to eat edibles
Will alchemy be a thing in this story? With Cure's ability to mess with plants, he'd be able to create wonderful and awful things with it, like echo flowers.
Also, how is the bee population in equestria? I imagine there would be less them in populated areas than usually.
edit: just realized that the guy not only has an inbuilt character customizator, but is also a walking 3d printer, which is even more broken
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Foaledo
Is that supposed to Florida or Colorado?
I would venture to say neither; it's not close enough to either for the horse pun. If I were to venture a guess, I'd say it's a play on the name of the city of Toledo, (pronounced Toe-lee-doe), located in Ohio.
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Toledo Foaledo
I'm waiting for him to tangle with poison joke.
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I see what you're getting at, but everything has had some component or process for how it works in the story. Even magic as Cure has spoken several times that something on the metaphysical side of pony biology plays a role in how ponies do some of the things they do as well as how spells are a mystery with their diverse spell mechanics that he intends to figure out. So it just doesn't fit with everything that's been put in so far. There's a pattern to the writing that builds things up over time organically so that it's a Slice-of-Life story. This breaks that thus creating a hiccup in the story.
And the cheating term in the story is for humor and to put characters at ease. It's a way to get a laugh from the audience and the other characters as Cure's abilities are extremely powerful compared to the average creature in Equestria. Additionally it gives Cure a healthy outlet to remind himself to keep humble about what he can and should possibly do. They even addressed this fact when he spoke to the lawyers about other talents like his, most kids get themselves killed. It can't really be applied to excuse things without explanation when this story is built on explanations, logic, & reason.
All in all I voiced my concern and that's it. I could be reading too much into this and if I am then I am.
P.S. - I did that pun on purpose. Not sorry.
I hope Lemon got her candies and order forms to the birthing teams before they left for Baltimare
Thanks for the update and amazing work as always!
Good chapter!
A comment to hopefully pull in more readers. An avid fan loving the slice of life and details. I lurk though but I humbly wait for updates.
Now I am curious... I don't remember if I already read it, but why is Cure's name much different than any in his family tree?
Did Cure's name come about from pressure by one of his grandparents?
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That doesn't read like I pun. I think if it was meant to be punny it would have been 'udderly' unbelievable.
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There was all that set up for the pun and then they spelled it correctly!
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Again, I don't think it was meant to be a pun. Looking back over the writing for context I'm now even more certain. For one thing, it's something a character said. You can argue that this is because it was a military character, but there was no mention of any change in Bulwark's face. Soldier or not, you don't think there would have been even a quirk of his lip of he was gonna make a dad joke? And that's beside the fact that he was acting like he was giving a report, as stated in the narrative text.
Also, you say there was a lot of build up, but I don't see it. The mention of helping some of the new mothers with milk production read almost like an afterthought. Sort of a 'oh by the way, he did x as well, as if this wasn't unbelievable enough already'. But anyway, given the context of the situation, that's no pun as far as I can tell. It's the word 'utterly' being used correctly, as a means of expressing more emphasis. If you replace the word 'utterly' with the word 'completely' in your mind, it reads exactly the same.
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Personally I think it has more to do with pushing his limits a bit, that is usually how personal growth works. This is Celestia were talking about though, so its probably both. She has had a lot of time to learn to balance being a good motherly pony with the necessities of competent leadership. Besides, everypony wins since, all the pretty ponies produced perfectly prosperous progeny prolifically.
Can you clarify for me as I'm having trouble keeping up, the mk II mitochondria is griffon, unicorn, pegasus and earth pony right?
Also before was he just converting mitochondria in the muscles? I've forgotten a lot of the explanation on mitochondria and Cures plans in this story with them and what parts exactly he's converting so am left a bit confused
Oh? Did Tia’s limited future sight see him as a possible Alicorn?
Ahhhh cute feast loved the ch 💕💕💕💕
Cute and lucky filly
Savvy Venture sounds like a name for a pirate
Captain Savvy Venture
"YAAR!, savvy?"
Until now I haven't understood where this horn recedes, it splits into pieces and ends up with the skull, mane, neck. where?
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I wouldn't be surprised if that were the case, he is constantly evolving and will help the ponies for many years, he becomes an alicorn either through ascension or constant evolution.
:)
I really liked the earlier draft of that exchange:
68 is not a bad number.
Celestia tossing down a challenge just before telling him to exercise his mark? Coincidence? We think not!