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Huh, despite Cure's claims to nothing happening, I was expecting something to happen. Even just cries of "fraud" or "impostor" or whatever. But nope, just a chill ceremony with some jokes. All in all decent, looking forward to the meeting.
Don't worry about skipping the tedium. Usually the ceremony is the finish point for these things. All the background stuff is handled before, and the big show is just that. (I mean, publicly swearing the oath is still important, especially in a magical setting like this, but all the paperwork creating his position should have been done a while ago. At most he should just have to sign a couple things.)
Anyway, The big day went off without a hitch. WOO!
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The Celebration was way too public for something like that. Serpentus is very popular with the masses, so unless a noble was sure they had SOLID evidence, making an outcry now would just blow back poorly for them. There'll be plenty of time for shenanigans later.
I can't wait to see the ambassadors, It'll be interesting to see some Griffinstone Griffons, from their kingdom's height. I wonder what he was looking for in that moment of eye contact?
Another fun chapter.
Thank you for posting another grand chapter of laughs and intrigue.
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Not to mention the show he made of regrowing the artillery captain's eye. How do you claim falsehood after that?
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Illusions, clearly
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I’m sure a number of them have already figured out exactly who he is, who is important to him, and are working on ways to weaponize that knowledge without having the immediate repercussions blowing back on them.
That third part is tricky, but give them enough time with a couple of shovels and they’ll have their own graves dug out in no time.
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“Illusions”
The conspirator said, also believing that Equus is a sphere and that the sun moves on its own.
I’m not sure where to put this but this seems fitting.
I would loooooove to have my OC meet Cure Wave but I have to write the back log still. About 3 to 4 years worth of activities need to take place.
I bet if cure knew how wine is graded, he could make an objectively perfect wine substitute
Cure got a new best friend at the end there
Early chapter! Woo hoo!!!
woho what read ! my cure need's a sated finaly for now :D
ha i love this blooblood hes a riot xD
this chapter was awesome, what a ceremony !
What did cure do at the start? At first I assumed he had hidden or removed (biomancer, remember his suit doesn't have any) his genitalia but then later it said "second unit", then there was also the chapter title which doesn't seem to reference anything else in the chapter full double set of genitalia, double balls or just double dicks? It was later confirmed to just be an illusion as he didn't want them taking any photos of whatever he had done but never clarified what was done.
It's also notable that he has an unnamed body double which with so many other named characters actually seems to stand out, probably for the best though if they don't know it since they are trying to pretend he's him to not accidentally call the double the wrong name.
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Same way modern fakes are done, you have someone fake being injured so they can be "healed" on stage, in equestria it's even easier as you could with illusion magic fake more in depth injuries like an eye rather than just the normal wheelchair/crutches routine.
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Substitute? He can probably make a plant that dispenses actual wine, not sure what he would be substituting. Nonalcoholic maybe? idk.
Reading the chapter at 4am on a monday morning because i couldn't sleep. Worth it. Great as always
I think I’ve finally found my one criticism with this story.
Cure’s friends (mainly foals aged approximately 10-14-ish) are slightly more cognizant than someone their age should be. Like, you done a good job giving them the appropriate level of ignorance, but not (in my opinion) the corresponding level of a lack of self awareness someone their age should have.
This really comes out in how you’ve written their humor (dialogue is great, as well as your style of humor). They tend to make quips that really come with time, experience, and an exposure to the harsher facts of reality.
This is my only complaint, and I will happily continue to read and enjoy prose. Thank you for the chapter!
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I read it as a literal trouser “snake”. Probably what Title was referring to earlier that morning “you going to do it?” I bet Celestia was entirely unaware
I was a little puzzled when Duke Dandy was mentioned as already familiar to Cure, but a quick check back in the “Pest” chapter, Duke Dandy introduced Bunlestia in Celestias court
Yes a new chapter... now the wait for the next one..
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Wine is a fermented food made from fruit. If it's produced through other means it's not "wine"
Awake
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Another read through, I am now convinced that Cure gave himself a snakes hemipenis. Google it if you dare
Awesome chapter : ) Take care.
I'm also curious on what exactly he did to get such a reaction : )
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Snakes have double equipment, but the title makes me think of four ball krogans, so dunno, dunno. Maybe both?
Immediately, my mind thought of the short song sung at Twilight's coronation, except with the lyrics "The Prince of Balls he cometh, behold, BEHOLD," etc....... me and my weird brain
Anyway, welcome back!
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*later that day*
"There, that should do it." Cure says, holding the newly created bottle of wine.
"May I try it?" Senior asks. With a nod of approval, he takes the bottle and pours himself a glass. "The viscosity appears the same." Taking a sniff, he comments "That lovely aroma", before taking sip.
The room goes quiet for half a minute before Cure asks "is it to your liking?"
A single tear falls down Senior's cheek, before he looks into Cure’s eyes "Marry me".
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I think "The tom himself is a dark brown and black griffon, with a more hawk-like appearance." flows better, but that's just my opinion.
I swear 1/4th of what I read on this site is this story lol
Oh yeah, another chapter! Read it, good as usual.
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Trust me, you would not want to read how real kids act. I know it would drive me insane. Kids of that age are just not good to be around with if you're an adult, and they are barely any better when you are a kid too.
I honestly think the story would be a bit better off if all ages were simply shifted up a couple years. Nothing would really change but it would prevent the "these children are too adult" thing from happening.
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I’m already aware what real kids are like. I have spent most of my life surrounded by young kids. I also happen to not dislike kids for all their faults. I know many adults lose touch with their inner child as they grow, or forget what it’s like to be a kid. Neither has been an issue for me, and I find myself lucky to have learned empathy for younger people.
I’m aware that kids’ behavior is usually made more manageable in stories, and that’s not what I’m talking about. Whether they be rambunctious rascals or well behaved, there’s a certain trait of innocence and wonder kids have that shape their worldview. That’s why many people say children have the best outlook on life, because they haven’t experienced the harsh realities that life teaches you with time and experience.
As people mature, they learn these things and how to cope with them, such as with different types of humor. In my opinion, these kids already have an edge to their humor that just feels slightly ‘ahead of the game’ for their age.
Even with this opinion, it doesn’t diminish my enjoyment of the story. I just wanted to share it with the author more as a ‘I finally found something’ due to his quality of work.
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Ah, yeah, that makes sense. Now I get what you're saying, and I agree.
I am so glad that Cure didn't take it to seriously and make a couple jokes.
And I am especially happy that Celestia played along, and even tired to pawn off her court!
That was a great read.
You're thinking about skipping the coronation paperwork?
Hey! Those were some good chapters!
Anyhow, I hope your IRL smooths out.
What's this? An early upload!
In all seriousness I love the chapter, glad we skipped the whole paperwork side of things. Glad Cure didn't get too formal with the speech, the casual feeling just flowed so well with the chapter.
All the best to you LFOD. Thanks again for the awesome story telling.
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Literally all Cure would be doing is signing a couple of forms. All the rest of the rigamarole should have been taken care of by Celestia prior to Cure showing up in Canterlot.
What would probably be more interesting is Cure’s first real experience with the political “elites”. It will be hysterical to see Cure literally waltz right into a room full of sharks … and watch as those sharks realize they are dealing with a nine year old killer whale.
Think Cure + taxes? Maybe take it up a half-notch? Ferric was on point. Probably good Princess’s plans fell through.
Analyzing the drink may be interesting. Specific fruit blend, water content, and process of sugar extraction are important factors besides the specific strain of culture used to produce the alcohols. Added sugar like honey which is greatly affected by the type of flowers pollinated adds complication. Reproducing the yeast would help Vladimir on the way to making his own, but the rest of the recipe would be needed for a replication. (Steaming grapes actually makes the juice sweeter than you might expect, for example.) Or maybe Cure will keep that to himself and his grandpa and be the Prince’s supplier when he gets the flavor right…
Griffons are going to love Cure, I think.
Baltimare may need a new small department to schedule the flood of requests for appointments that will be coming especially after the newspapers start circulating.
So did I
You know author I feel like you married someone, by the by if you get a child (And are a man) make sure to make a dna test, you never know these days.
Cure, by the time she meets Blueblood, she’ll already know.
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Excellent metaphor, too true as well, can't wait for them to realise this 9 year old will not have the wool so easily pulled over his eyes.
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I'd blame Cure, just like everyone should.
Years of being exposed to his otherworldly sarcasm and "wit", for a given definition of wit, have tainted the foal-like innocence of his friends. Discord would be proud of such an achievement or at least mildly annoyed some little upstart is horning in on his shtick.
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Pulse every thing in equestia learns faster than on earth. By a lot. Cue even pointed that out wean savvy was born wean he asked questions about how fast do foals learn to walk and potty training
Gee Cure! How come your dam lets you have two wieners?
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I think an actual snake down there would have gotten a lot more attention than what he got.
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The end product is identical but If we're going with the "a tomato is not a vegetable" technicality sure.
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Sounds plausible, maybe it's leaving open for a reference in a later chapter? No one commented on what was done in this chapter although some laughs were had.
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Would be in theme for him.
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I was absolutely sure there was going to be a big balls reference in there but there wasn't as far as I noticed
Probably meant as a reference to his ability to cure the gender imbalance.
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I highly recommend djazz's epub converter instead of fimfiction's native one as their's will actually embed pictures in the epub file while the native epub generator won't.
Thus BlueBlood pledges his loyalty to new the God Emperor of Chardonnay
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His loyalty, his fortunes, his daughters, his son, and his wife.
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What? Of course Blueblood will gladly give his Uncle Cure everything in his will.
I'm only on chapter 25 right now, so maybe this has already occurred. But I just pictured something happening and can't unsee it. With all those movie/song references Cure has made related to his human memories, I could totally see him doing this:
Cure: Staring off in the distance
Vines: "What's wrong, honey?"
Cure: "Earlier today, I experienced something that really shouldn't be that big of a deal given what I remember from a past life, but my colt brain is going crazy right now because I just kissed a girl...and I liked it...the taste of her cherry chapstick."
Vines: ....
. . . I just realized that this is going to give a legitimate reason for pony cartoon physics in regards to injury in the main timeline... he bio engineered it into them...
Pinky's biology is gonna be so weird...
"No Twilight I can't help you understand Pinky, I tried once and all I got for my effort was the taste of pink a confetti headache and the smell of rainbow for my trouble...take my advice and let it rest"
- Prince Serpentus discussing Pinky Pie(Subject Frootloop) with Twilight Sparkle.
Good chapter! I think I had withdrawals with missing this story >.>
They will remember that.
Great chapter as usual, five stars. Can't wait for more :)
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I've been making this observation on a few chapters by now.
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Aren't ponies, or at least pegasi, fairly crash-resistant already?
As far as Pinkie goes, Cure already explained it as Earth ponies can use magic just as well as any unicorn with practice or a cheating mcCheaterpants cutie mark cheat... and don't forget she's also been (or will be) selected by Harmony itself to be a bearer. That's got to be amplifying her cutie mark for a stacking magic buff.
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Cure Wave
Light Blue Coat / Green mane & tail
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Yeah kinda worried about Zecora when I read that paragraph.
Yorkshire, let's goooo
Also I thought ballin the chapter referred to the eye ball, not a new royal pair XD
It is impressive that you have on the whole maintained a weekly schedule with the quality and breath of your writing. Just take care of yourself