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It's not paranoia if someone is out to get you.
That was an awesome chapter! You make it worth waiting for mondays!
Boss lady!!! And cure weaponizing himself... What a way to start a new arc.
Too bad cure doesn't go all out, but well... A foal got to stay in character
As usual, great chapter, now I need another dose of cure and sunny boss lady... Don't want to wait another week
Definitely a fun chapter. Sure, some people would decry the OP nature on display, but in my mind the story isn't about combat or the like, it's more about Cure and his interactions with those around him. Plus everything has kinda built to him being capable of all this, so it's not like it's a surprise, hah.
As always the character interactions are fun, especially at the end there. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us!
What an what an interesting turn of the events, I was kind of expecting Cure to be proven to be just a bit paranoid for the train ride, guess not. These weekly updates are painful to wait for, always excited to see the update on Mondays.
Ya... I don't matter how strong you are. Everyone needs to breathe.
hoo howdy have i been waiting for a chapter like this and it was awesome !
there is so much detail to unpack i just have to read this 2-3 more times, love how cure made it so that drift gets her mark
it was also nice writing so that wee don't get a hind that/ore what will happen this chapter aside from trip to canterlot.
It's such a good feeling to watch Cure kick flank.
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and they came at him with overkill force
My oh my, did Cure just go Tyranid Warrior Brood?
I love this story with how you can see the everyday life of the mc and his family. To the pranks to the world building and the romantic interest of the mc. All of it feels real and have height to them and this is only a few years into the story we still got to wait 100 or so years until the MLP cannon starts. I can’t wait to see how the mc influences the story. 10/10 stars
Awesome chapter!
Silly Cure,
Who would want a criminal for a present?
The interactions with Celestia have been some of my favorite parts of this fic, so I'm quite exicted for the next chapter.
If whoever's targeting Cure decides to keep escalating, they're definitely going to target his friends and family; unless he's blindsided by an out of context problem (e.g. some magic he didn't know how to defend against), it's the only weak link he has. Even if they wise up and send people in armored NBC gear or use long range bombardment, Cure can still has super-equine reselience and overwhelming physical force on his side.
Damn, this goes hard.
Deed and Solar:
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Heh, I enjoyed the part when Cure showed his dad affection while in the monster suit.
They were not prepared... this time. I wonder how they are going to up their game for the next attempt?
Thank you for sharing this awesome story with us.
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Yes...it'd why mustard Gass was used so much in ww2
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Yes
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Yea.....I will be surprised if the white unicorn is not a brother to the one that stole cures trees since like flim and flam are exactly the same and brothers so either disguise or he is the other unicorns brother...won't actually know until it's explained in story tho
Can't wait for that 😆
From Cure’s perspective, Drift’s mark is a simple process, but from her perspective she’s making a daring and exciting trip to deliver a critical missive to the ruler of the country. This is honestly way more important of a scenario than most mail ponies would ever deal with in their life, from her perspective. It only feels anticlimactic for us because it happened offscreen and from Cure’s perspective.
Nice chapter
Cure's CR is probably at least a 20 at this point, they didn't bring nearly enough guys
I was hoping we'd get to see something violent when I realise that this train chapter might be capable of it. Sadly, it didn't go that route. But, the story is awesomely written! The adrenaline anticipation are definitely worth it!
I do hope we get to see Cure do something actually violent for once. For better or worst.
The creature that Cure made... which the only thing I can imagine who that might ressemble would be: Cho'gath from League of Legends, or a Necromorph from Dead Space.
Do you have a real world/game/art equivalent? I find it hard to imagine what he looked like.
scary Cure is best Cure
Heh, I love how Celly is just exasperated at this point, I can't wait for her to fall over like a goat when he reveals his truth to her...
ya... definitely merciful. he could have killed them all in an instant, or activated every pain receptor in their bodies at once. ya know "Crucio!" "avada kadavra!" "Sectumsempra"
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He probably could puppeteer one against that individual's allies too
This is my favorite story at the moment. I wait with bated breath for each week's installment, and finding a new chapter available each Monday is oft' the highlight of the day. This is exactly the kind of story I, as a hardcore worldbuilder, enjoy. Where magic is real, and even the simplest of abilities, when intelligently taken to their logical extremes, can become truly powerful in one way or another. It's the same reason I love Brandon Sanderson novels.
Yes, I did just compare you to one of the most well-known fantasy authors of the modern world. You've got talent, dude.
Making Cure use a battle suit and solve everything with non lethal methods was awesome.
Stares in Ultramar
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I recomend... (as hinted in pervious chapters) checking out Warhammer 40k: Tyranid Warrior
That was amazing. The confrontation between Cure and the thugs was amazing. Like others down here, I expected violence, but this fits with the theme perfectly. An OP character isn't great for balanced combat, but perfect for slice of life.
And the interaction with Celestia was great, though cure is tipping her off a bit quick that he's got more in his head than a foal should, but after both of them feeling eachother out, cure seems to have deemed her worthy of immense trust. It looks like they're going to have a great relationship.
I'm looking forward to seeing the new cutiemark!
Thanks for the update!
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I think "Cure uses a low powered Warming cantrip on the paper and blows on it until the ink is dry, then carefully folds it." flows better.
SCREE SKREE!!
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LOL
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Does this mean that owls really can read your thoughts?
“Besides, it would be weirder if you were the only one decked out and we’re all strolling in there naked.”
I put some straight in their blood too, just to speed it up.
Hope that helps, I think BexxMosforth covered the other typos I noticed and more.
Yay! I've been waiting so long to see how Cure would handle a
realfight! It was wonderfully done, brains over brawn with some extra brawn just in case. I knew it would be clever but didn't see the abuse of transmutation coming, seems like anyone with the right knowledge could pull that one off so its even better. A white, blue maned unicorn noble huh, is Blue Blood's great grandpa going develop a case of hives?Cure wasn't exactly discrete about the trip but it wasn't advertised either. Everyone that tried to seize this opportunity must already know who he is. The seemingly conflicted factions all seeing the same opportunity here doesn't bode well for Cure's long term peaceful life. A unicorn noble is one thing, but the zebra operative smacks of national politics, and if they know who else schemes in the shadows!
Oh and for my curiosity and the other unenlightened among us. What fiction is Cure's 'battle suit' from? I can think of a few possibilities but nothing that quite fits.
All hail Citrine the Golden Queen. When thread is in the sky the queens must fly! Keep her away from the fire stone though.
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Yes, this!
When you inevitably move on to write other works in the future remember to come let us know who to look for so we can
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Anyone: "I thought you were opposed to mind control?"
Cure: "Oh, his mind is the only thing I'm not controlling."
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“It’s just one monster! CHARGE-“
“…Is that an ALICORN-“
*death laser fires*
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Unless you are someone like Alucard from the "Hellsing/Hellsing Ultimate" series who is already technically dead so they don't need to breathe. Then any sort of inhalation drugs/toxins you try to use will be absolutely worthless.
Or you are like Celestia and Luna in some fanfictions, who apparently due to their immortal nature as Alicorns, don't actually need to breath air either. As I'm sure that their isn't any breathable air on the surface of the moon or within the atmosphereof the sun.
"It was fun," he says, having just finished roleplaying a pony-loving reformed Bond-villain Warhammer Tyranid that just nonlethal reverse-ganked over twenty hostiles.
Unbelievable understatement.
Love this story.
Very well done, author.
Thanks for posting and sharing.
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I'd seriously like to see someone go just a bit too far, try to use one of his little sisters or one of his friends as a hostage. In an ill advised attempt to try and get him to give himself over to them, and it really,really piss Cure Wave off.
Then he either just "Hulks Out" or goes full on Alex Mercer, from the game series "Prototype," on them and just absolutely starts wrecking them so badly (a non lethal but still extremely painful beat down) that they actually start pissing all over themselves; while they run for their lives as they scream like a bunch of terrified little sissies.
Oh good lord, would something that ever be so incredibly satisfying...😏
Awesome ch love every bit thank u
Whoever sent all these goons after Cure, well done. You just validated all of Cure's paranoia. Now anytime he does something crazy and his family tries to talk him out of it, he'll just say "remember the train" and keep doing what he's doing.
A couple hours later, just as Cure and Celestia sit down for tea, a guard knocks at the door. “Excuse me, your Highness, the prisoners are waking up.” C: “Thank you, you have your orders, carry on.” G: “Yes Ma'am, but their bonds, we, uh, well, we can’t untie them! There’s no knots and even the unicorns can’t cut them!”
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Fixed! Thanks!
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Ditto. I think I got all of them.
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This comes up in the next chapter briefly. In fact, several of the things in the next chapter are touched on in comments from everyone.
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Perfect example. That's very close to what's in the chapter, in fact.
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At this point Cure isn't clear how much he could get away with. Levels of Force has been a recurring topic in this fic, and escalation to lethal without even attempting lower levels would probably not go over well. He's already had advisors telling Celestia something should be done about him (We don't know what yet). Rolling into Canterlot having painted the walls red with the blood of his enemies would only serve to validate the ponies expressing concern.
Doing what he did also sends a powerful and, frankly, terrifying message. He did something that would probably not be doable by any other creature on the planet, even the princess herself. An eight year old earth pony foal subdued three separate groups of attackers after midnight on a train with zero fighting, zero injuries, and not a soul even knowing it happened.
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Sort of. Less overly skeleton-y, but overall, yes.
By the way, the “I haven’t eaten a pony in a very long time” thing was very much intentional and a reference to Ed having had horse meat before.
Keep the movie references coming! media.tenor.com/xkK1gzyV038AAAAC/box-whatsinthebox.gif
Hmmmm. Next time it's going to involve bubble shields.
He'd better do daily brain backups of all his family and friends.
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'bated breath', like 'rebate' or 'abate'