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I wonder when Cure will visit the Tree of Harmony. He had no reason to before, but now that he's ascended, and his mark has changed to depict the tree itself, it's only a matter of time.
Maybe Harmony can help Edward get closure. Assuming it doesn't reunite him with Cynthia somehow.
I'd like to think one of his fillyfriends is Cynthia reincarnated, she just doesn't have her memories. Yet, anyway.
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How do you have the Black bar show up?
Celestia, the colt needs therapy to help deal with this trauma. Talk to his parents about this ASAP and get him into sessions sooner rather than later.
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I am fully expecting one of them to call Cure “Ed” at one point relatively soon.
Relatively being when Cure ends up having a fit triggered by one of his past life’s memories and one of them knows that saying his name in a very specific tone of voice will get him to stop dead in his tracks.
“For you, the day Celestia moved the heavens while holding you was the most important day of your life. For me, it was Tuesday.”
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Hopefully Cure gets therapy before Ed's trauma causes him to develop an alter ego like Daybreaker.
I imagine he'd call himself Life Weaver, and become obsessed with combining his domain with necromancy to achieve true resurrection, hoping to see Cynthia again.
Got an instance of "badadass" in there instead of badass. Unless you want cure talking strange.
Edit* Error now fixed
I bet that really added to the confirmation of Cure's Edward story
Did Celestia seriously just tell the Alicorn of life, a (potentially killing,) virus that comes by once a year is not important?
I guess she has lived long enough that death is just another part of life, I don't know anyone who can share the level of normality that death now has in her life.
TEAM ROCKET BLASTING OFF AGAAAAAAAIN!!!
Cure and Celestia are adorable together (totally shipping them, eh, sometime before Luna returns, but after Dawn and co. family have matured) the back and forth, banter and shenanigans are always a pleasure. Forgot if I said it before, but Cure should have invited Celestia to invite Comet to the parents date night. Or perhaps the next adults date night.
The ali-yak scene got a good laugh out of me; watching Cure and Celestia play around is one of my favorite parts of this story. Looking forward to the next chapter!
I LOVE Cure and Celestia's interaction here. I can see them getting in a healthy relationship easily. (I'm so shipping them when cure grows up)
The yack-a-corn joke was amusing.... Although the discussion about discord reminded me. Doesn't discord test people? I'm pretty sure there was fanon that the whole era of chaos was so that he could retire.
I’m really looking forward to the day when Cure meets Cadence and Luna. That’s going to be amah-zheng!!
I didn’t realize the trial was coming up so soon. Couple weeks till September in universe. That’s when the soldiers competition is, right? I hope we get to see Ebony again. Maybe she’ll work up some courage to speak to Cure more. Definitely also want to watch the Golden Hills guards against all the others -especially Canterlot.
The Haze family upgrades, Fillydelphia trip, fall births, a tentative trip to Hollow Shades, fall semester starting, and now some school tours on the docket. Colt is busy! Wooh! As busy as he is, Corner was sharp to bring up Cure’s lack of musical focus. Not easy to score one on the Prince. Well done, sir.
Oh! The school term makes me wonder: is Dawn graduated from the local school or does she have more on that, and when is she and Cure going to take the CSGU entrance exam?
I thought Brick was more of a hooves-on type of guy, but I can see him having a maul.
awesome chapter, i could just imagine hIM channeling his inner and go Gimme!Gimme!Gimme!Gimme!
celestia and cure wave talk time is
YAK!
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Now he knows how "normal" ponies feel when he actually de-ages them or regrows their entire limb/wing.
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Chapter posted and read. Inspiration/motivation gained. I shall get back to writing.
Despite Cure associating Luna's invocation with batman, I do really like it in context. Maybe it's just because I have an easier time seperating human culture from a story world's own unique culture.
That said, she has also been memed into similar situations for that line. Can't have anything good in equestria. Smh.
Another excellent chapter. Looking forward to more.
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I hate when that happens, it's beautiful, but in MY opinion it's so unlikely that it's "stupid" when it happens, as if there were infinite INFINITE universes, and two souls that know each other fell into the same world, it kind of doesn't make sense, besides I don't think it would be cool to add another reincarnate, at least if they don't know each other, it would be interesting but I don't vote for that to happen, and he's not Edward, he's Cure Wave, this is shown several times.
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I'm sure the evil version would be its opposite, unlike Celestia and Luna, who have the counterpart as part of their domain, Cure I imagine it will be the opposite, Cure gives life and cures illnesses, your alter ego give illnesses and takes life, something dramatic, DEATH PLAGUE
I can't blame Cura for forgetting that Celestia has felt this more than anyone else, even I forget that when they talk their dynamic is very good, and that was to be expected, after all she is the only one where he can be him even completely, as We tend to open up more to friends than family, and Celestia is the only one who knows about the memories, the others don't know and are listed as too young to know and just work/business colleagues, with Celestia he manages together well he opens up completely, it makes their interaction incredible, and it's a shame he's still too young, aaaaa when he grows up, just wait, just wait.
Speaking of which, I really want to see him interacting with Chrysalis, she sees ponies as prey, imagine her surprise when she meets a super predator. Hehehe
Not to mention that I really thought of that stallion as a changeling, as if the relationship between male and female was so unbalanced, that at every moment there was someone wanting cure to meet, whether it was a daughter, niece, cousin, etc., etc., a single stud, I find it very difficult.
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Like that cancer-verse or whatever it's called in marvel.
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Yeah she did, up to him to learn to manage his emotions/responses. Otherwise he's gonna be miserable/an absolute pain to be around. He's aware of that, so its going to be better with time.
Imho Cure's attitude shows his actual physical/mental age. Memories changed him, but i read his childish attitude and such as "him" still being within the "frame" of the 9-yo foal he is, young impulsive (so much!) brain and all that jazz. Him childishly blowing up at Celly's comment did not surprise me at all, kind of expected to see stuff like that pop up. Him realizing, understanding ( Celly experienced/saw/dealt death reeeeeal closely thousands of times, her own death too), and apologizing after his outburst are him using the memories maturity/emotional tools to learn to be better and growing as a person/pony. Its nice to read that instead of the "cliche" miscommunication/emotional shouting match we often see.
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I agree, I also like that Cure has kept the emotional level appropriate for his age. It shows that the memories are only that, memories. Like any other intelligent creature, they are simply a tool for understanding the world at large.
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No worries LFOD, thanks for posting the chapter "early", I very much appreciated it. A couple of extra typos never hurt anyone, and the story otherwise flowed brilliantly as usual. I really enjoyed the dialog between Cure and Celestia at the end.
That said, please don't feel the need to rush a chapter out. Thanks again for supplying my Monday solace.
CURE SMASH FLU! FLU WEAK! FLU GET SMASHED UNDER HOOF!
Good stuff.
That was a nice chapter. Moving several parts of the story forward, a good pace, and showing that cure is still a grieving, young colt.
I really hope you call the chapter where he gives Solar the upgrades "Harder, Better, Faster, Stronger." Or some other super-soldier or cyborg reference. "The Six Million Bit Stallion" also fits.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Not sure about the logic behind this one. It'd be one thing if ponies were going extinct, like pandas, but we haven't really ever seen the gender imbalance pose any actual problems so far in the story, let alone have any sort of death toll. It's mostly just been framed as "this is an unfortunate aspect of our species that our culture has adapted to but would be neat to have fixed".
It’s fun seeing all these talks and moments between Celestia and cure, then you realize one day he’s gonna put one if not multiple goals in her when he’s of age at least. Possibly with Luna too. Fascinating.
This chaptor is bussin thanks look forward to more have a good day
Nice
Can't wait for a timeskip ! I really want to see Cadence and Luna soon !
Soooo what are the chances one of the mane 6 is born a colt?
Good chapter
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In before dusk gets a harem.
"My record is 4 but I think I can do it."
*4 minutes 50 seconds later.*
"I'm a potato!"
NO YOU ARE NOT!
I'm pretty sure a maul is a type of axe
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I'm going to laugh if her reaction is "take me now!" Just from the confusion.
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It's been suggested it's a curse and not natural multiple times.
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GOOOOAAAAALLLLL
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He shoots.. HE SCORES!!!!
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More like FOOOOOOOAAAAAAAALLLLLLLL.
Again Celestia? You have a problem.
Shut up and give me more quadruplets cure!
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I just had the humorous thought of NMM coming back to fight Celestia only for her to find her trying to herd "cats" (her children) and just just cut off her villain monologue at the unexpected sight.
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NMM: Really Celestia you couldn't wait for me?
Celly: it's not my fault that he's so good in bed.... And his domain means contraception doesn't work!
NMM: SAY WHAT NOW!
And this is how Luna learns she and celestia are not the only alicorns anymore.
Ya accidentally used browning instead of brownie
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Nah mauls are really big hammers
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I don't think opposite is appropriate here, more like taking the aspect to the extreme. Day breaker would protect her ponies, augment the sun and eliminate/crush those who would threaten what is hers.
Cure would likely promote life so much and disallow death altogether, perhaps even leading to total stagnation of growth and/or overcrowding of ponies. Cancer Genesis were the names I used before and felt fit his theme. The start of uncontrolled, unfettered life.
It's far more poignant to see how much a pony has fallen, taking their values further with no moderation than just to see them become an opposite.
alright, you might be getting a bit of a running commentary, but one thing really stopped me cold in my tracks.
When Cure had Corner do his little grand entry, he completely ignored the stallion's discomfort. Threatened(or made the stallion feel threatened) him in a manner that not only humiliated him, but did so using both his station and right in front of the stallion's employer. I am honestly surprised that Brick didn't put the brakes on that right off the bat. Brick has looked after his employees really well and this kind of treatment of a member of his staff of a long time seems out of line, especially to a military stallion, doing it in front of the guy's Boss and then the Boss says nothing.
note it is one of those things that honestly I think would have been Brick dismissing Corner before it got bad, and then addressing his grandson about it at the end of their conversation.
I have noticed that Cure has become more and more likely to ignore the discomfort of others in his actions towards them. His little pranks go beyond what would be considered respectful.
also, enlarge would just take a foal with foal proportions and make him bigger. he wouldn't really look like a stallion no matter how well muscled. those legs are still gonna be proportionally gangly as well as that spine being just a little bit short.
Oh, another. He may have the memories of a 47 year old poked behind his mind, but his brain is still 9 years old, it is still making neurological connections and formations. Which are influenced by his environment and interactions with others. In other words, he is still a child mentally. When an adult tells him no or not right now and then he weedles them into getting his way, he becomes spoiled. Which can cause a huge issue down the line.
fun thing that I have in mah head, the Psychopomp that collected ed. Turns out that yeah, ed is dead and his soul went on into the next place, there is only one soul in Cure Wave and that is Cure Wave's Soul, never was ed's. now, the memories of Ed, that's a different thing.
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hmmmI agree that his would be a life unchecked situation.
also I would argue in that little conversion room that plenty of cells and bacteria and the like died. afterall, if he were to stand in the center of death's domain, there would yet be life in it. or really anypony that is there. kinda the point of yin and yang, always a little bit of yin in the yang if you know what I mean
Daybreaker is A Megalomaniac and is completely obsessed with her own power. eh