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Ah! It's up! Hazzah!
The new chapter is alive.... RUSH IT
Weird, I could have sworn I typed this out already, but apparently it's just one of those Mondays.
So, as per my A/N on Chapter 70, the loss of my edits wasn't because I wasn't saving my work as I went. I was. Here's easiest to follow way I can describe it: You paste in the chapter. That's Version 1 of the chapter. You make changes and, after each one, hit Save. So imagine you're at Version 50, you make a change, the browser crashes, and brings back Version 1, except you think that you're working on Version 50 still, not realizing that your browser reopened a cached copy of Version 1. You make a change and hit save. You just made a new Version 2(b) instead of Version 51, thus removing all of the updates between 1 and 50.
Oh well, done now, even if I lost a good piece of dialogue in there and some better descriptions of the house. Lesson learned and all that.
Mmmmmm dopamine
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Oh, ouch!
This was a fun chapter.
I can already picture how Cure’s week is going to be very… interesting.
Heck yeah, I'm loving the dynamic between Cure and Celestia
When Cure went a little far with the shapeshifting, I was sad to see Celestia's reaction. More than understandable and much too early for such displays from Cure. At least he knows he needs to take it easier.
I'm getting really excited to see Cure’s coronation. I wonder what kind of speech he's made.
A wonderful chapter, awesome work!
Another amazing chapter as always I eagerly await the next one.
Cure, you can't just go around almost traumatizing every alicorn you meet, they're in such short supply!
good stuff
I wonder if perhaps Luna's mind isn't tethered to the moon. Maybe she could have insight into cure's memory situation. That'd be neat, but I don't think there's groundwork for that at all here.
I'm not doing fireworks this year. Not out of any concerns for my digits, but the fact the lawn is utterly dried out and would likely go up like Dresden during the bombing if a stray spark hits it.
For the last few years I have spent less and less time here on FimFic due to the lack of quality stories. There are currently a few I feel are worth reading that are being updated. I have been on FimFic for almost a decade now and on average there are 2-3 stand out stories a year that really keep me coming back to FimFic. I just wanted to say to LiveFreeOrDie, in case you didnt already know, that this story is one of those stories that I look forward to every Monday. I read them on my work break and it helps me not feel so bad about Mondays. So thank you again, you are doing a great job.
I missed this story this morning, I can usually see LFOD’s online before I clock in for work and will read paragraphs at a time on breaks, then consume the whole thing at lunch. I had to go without new horsewords for my lunch today! Reruns of the Canterlot arc are filling, but just don’t quite taste the same. So excited for the next week (in story) lots going on. I’d imagine the pegasus/bat defense class will suddenly have hundreds (maybe not literally, but dozens?) of “new” students showing up!
Should be RAP?
Not sure if Cure is talking about his grandmother (Deed’s mom) or Ed’s mom and grandmother, but I’m guessing Ed’s
I think I’m interpreting this as Crisp Script is the author of the “Scarlet Heart” series and Cure is asking for a recommendation for one of that series from Celestia, not really her favorite out of “every book in existence” or a “historical” book. But I suppose some of those romance novels could be historical period pieces…
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You know, with time only making him more experienced, I would be surprised if he didn't make a proper Changeling absolutely crap their pants if he went The Thing on them in the midst of a scuffle. I mean, there's shock and awe with the usual megaspells, and then there's literally becoming nightmare fuel... for real.
And I hope Luna doesn't get too jealous when all her Nocturn are simping for the new kid on the royal block. (She's probably gonna try putting the moves on him anyway since she'll only know of Serpentus as a very virile and powerful stallion of an alicorn. Oh! I can't wait! Gonna need a whole bag of popcorn for that chaos, heh)
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Discord is probably already a big fan of Cure’s.
…
You know, it would actually be funny if Discord and Cure had a little chat the next time he’s in Canterlot. Oh nothing too strenuous like Discord breaking out or anything.
Just a simple chat between the lord of Chaos and the Alicorn of life about … butterflies and the effects of their wings.
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I certainly would love to hear what Cure might have to say to Discord.
He certainly could be friends with the Discord the show finished with. What an entertaining chat that would be?
That said, I feel Cure doing so now would be out of place? Despite Cure not always succeeding at being cautious, he appears to generally try to be cautious with all serious matters, like Discord.
Yet the story could completely deviate from the canon plot line and have Discord released early.
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Honestly the thought that he could create, (or upgrade if it already exists,) the tree of Harmony has been circling my mind. We never got Celestia to confirm the tree's existence.
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I am quite excited for the Chaos that is likely to ensue. I can imagine LFOD completely deviating from the canon story, much to Cure's frustration.
Man, I can't wait for Tia and Cure to do some lovey dovey stuff, always nice seeing her let off the mask.
Good chapter!
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I look forward to seeing our hero encounter a changeling. Ooh! Maybe there’ll be one at the coronation to check out the hullabaloo and report on it to Chryssy? And Cadenza and Luna will both be very interesting additions when it’s their turn!!
Sad that Solar is busy. Glad the Princess will consider Hollow Shades, and Cure’s things are humming through the medical testing! Good job, kid. And good job to Clean Deed: has four wives, a side Apple, and maybe soon another! Your boy is the ultimate wing pony.
Congratulations to Lt. Spear. I’ll wager Cure will have another present for you in a couple of weeks! That shindig is going to be epic.
The egg issue is interesting. Will Celestia need that as well? I forgot if she ever mentioned if she’s still got any of those left.
AWESOME CHAPTER
yeeah RPs mom is not writing history books
i really hope we get to see cure's meeting with the filly from the zoo ^^
I now ponder if Cure will embrace his life calling as the first Alicorn Shoggoth Prince to ever walk these lands.
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Thanks for the compliment. I'm not really what you would consider a writer, but I did my best.
Though despite that, I still found some punctuation errors and stuff I wasn't satisfied with, that I went back and fixed. Hopefully I didn't screw up anywhere else.
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If an Alicorn's regeneration factor is taken into consideration, then I would say that there is a very good chance that Celestia still has viable ova/eggs left that can be fertilized so she can get pregnant, even after all these centuries.
I think that the issue you mentioned would be considered one of those age related things that happens, such as: wrinkly skin, age related eyesight/ hearing issues, menopause, osteoporosis, incontinence and such.
So whatever is keeping her biologically young and from ever aging, is also most likely keeping all of her internal organs, including her "foal factory" as well, up and running at peak efficiency.
If that really is the case, then Celestia, and all the other Alicorns as well, are more or less going to be fertile and capable of having children whenever they want, forever.
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I’ll be a little disappointed if Luna, upon thinking she’s being pranked, doesn’t try to get some of her own back on the spot. Remember that short comic?
”Sister! I see thou hast forgotten thine own lengthy lectures on contraception and safe copulation in mine absence! Pray tell me, just how many additional nieces and nephews will I have to make up to for missing lifetimes of birthdays and Hearthswarmings, hmm?”
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money to buy them is the reason i'am not.
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What makes you think Cure is the one who starts the conversation? 😉
My only complaint is that Cure doesn't have more interactions with those that he's healing. Yeah, we get detailed summary , almost like a drawn-out chart of his cuddling piles with him but then we get a "and then it was so" barely a mention of a quick summary of him HEALING LOST LIMBS! Like... that was so much wasted potential. I'm all for a good cuddle pile, and it does ADD depth to the story, but you could've added a few more sentences or scenes regarding such drastic healing measures.
But it's easy for me to criticize the story from this end. The story has me hook line and sinker, and I'm with it to the end. Looking forward to what you type up next.
"True mass"? Isn't it just mass?
I know the pegasus aura and reduce magic deals with anything relating to weight. But it doesn't sound it should affect mass at all. Weight implies being affected by gravity whereas mass is just how dense something is.
Unless those magic somehow removes mass, deleting chunks of flesh for example, then Cure calling it "true mass" is redundant and implies there are different kinds of mass.
If cure weights lighter with magic and is put in water, it doesn't mean he will suddenly float where he could be sinking before. Only mass/density affects this. Which is what looks like teleporting equates to.
Unless, your intention was to imply there is actually more than one kind of mass an object has through magic or metaphysics... then you could consider my point moot.
I would actually love to be a fly on the wall at the trail of that so called "noble" who thought it was a perfectly great idea, to commit high treason, and try and kidnap the future prince, even though he wasn't an alicorn at the time.
Yeah, cure should hold back the freaky things a little bit more.
It would be interesting to see how his talent interacts with a silicon versus carbon based life form, e.g., the Tree of Harmony.
OBTW, love the fluff.
While I understand ponykind problem, in Cure's case, this sounds like an excuse. I'm pretty sure that he can make any mare pregnant without needing to perform the 'deed'.
This isn't as crazy as some of Cure's abilities. From nature he already has access to ‘Parthenogenesis’ with all the insects he scanned (and maybe with the snakes). And it's not science fiction either, Chinese and Japanese scientists have made it possible for mice to reproduce using only females, only males, and with only one female. So, with Cure's cheats, this would be pretty easy to replicate.
I can see a world where he hasn't figured it out yet, but after everything she's seen and with her own motivations, I'm pretty sure Dawn can come to the same conclusion on her own.
aaaaaaaand cue unnecessary time skip.
Thanks for the chapter.
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The mare still needs the deed done to get the seed 4 the egg that don't have a sperm bank of cure yeat open
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Not really, scientists have already done it, you can search for it like: “Mice, gene editing, parthenogenesis”. And let's remember that we are talking about OP Cure.
But you make a good point, even easier would be to just create sperm banks with the ability to separate Y chromosomes 🤔 He could start with Canterlot or some other unicorn city 'cause their culture would adapt to using them even faster.
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I want to be the fly on the wall for pretty much everything involving cure
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I think people get Quisy when talking about things like regrowing limbs like in past chapters. that is probably the reason why it's not covered much in the story.
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You raise a very good point
this paragraph feels like there's some acknowledgement of not truly being cure, of identifying more with the memories than with beinga pony. have i managed to forget some instance where he told her about his true past or is this out of left field?
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There is a reason why sexual reproduction is the dominant reproductive method of nearly every animal (and most plants) despite it being vastly more complicated than parthenogenesis, it is better for long term genetic diversity.
Also, yeah, immaculate conception is well within Cure's capabilities, but that comes with a lot of difficult ethical questions that are largely sidestepped by merely aiding fertility.
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Yeah, that's a good point... But still, the “Dawn has to understand that I need to -be- with a lot of mares for the greater good” is confusing. Even if it's not parthenogenesis there are alternatives, I wouldn't be surprised if he can get a mare pregnant with just a touch
And besides, an alicorn can’t breed with a normal pony so he’s already genetically manipulating his seed to succeed. So, I don't see the benefit of him wanting to be a stud outside of a narrative confrontation with Dawn. Unless I’m missing something...
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Cure mentioned to Celestia that he has some memories, including possible future events, while the two of them were in the privacy bubble before raising the sun the morning the family departed Canterlot
>foreshadowing of foal crimes as Celestia's berserk button
>exceedingly rare healing talent identified in a foal
>exceedingly rare talent is bringing lifesaving(potentially) treatments for free
>suspected alicorn potential of said foal is realized
>vanguard of the foalnapper/foalmurderer faction of said foal, the foal's family, extended family, and friends including a junior guardsman among them is sentenced a whopping 8 years, and some temporary tattoos
Damn, slow the fuck down Celestia. What's a minotaur's expected lifespan anyway, like 16 years? And this is her enraged, huh? Wonder what the sentence would be for stealing one of her cakes. Cure should have just ripped out all their nerves and stitched them into their assholes when he had the chance.
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Either that or maybe Luna's mind is tethered to the dream realm or another one entirely, with the later one possibly being the same for Cure.
That concept kinda makes me think of the "Akashic Records."