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Thanks, although I wish there were more interactions with Celestia!!! I like her.
It'd be funny if someone sent Cure a copy of their book asking for a proof read. A novel or a textbook, I'm not sure which would be funnier.
Good chapter! I hope you get to relax on your time off
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I hope u have a good thanksgiving.
This was a nice chapter Wait till Savvy starts talking it's going to be so cute! And I also hope Cure starts making Combat training "Monsters" for him and anyone else he will be training with.
Wonder if he's ever gonna store spare body parts in a fridge or something. Imagine opening the fridge one morning and seeing a couple of arms, some legs, and a head sitting in there.
I'm kinda curious about the noble house thing, since it seems a little non-specific. You mentioned the benefits, but nothing is all good. Noble houses in antiquity held some pretty strong sway against members, and since Cure isn't the patriarch, does that imply Brick could legally leverage Cure? Or worse, someone, say Cure's grandparents, could usurp the position someway and do the same? Are they even members, since they disowned Cure's sire? Could they legally sue for trying to keep them from their 'rightful' place in the house, or even at its head? I'm just surprised Cure gave in so easy without making a consideration like that since he doesn't know all the facts.
Anyway, great chapter as always, I look forward to seeing more Audrey, and enjoy your time off!
Sad to hear no updates for the next few weeks but I hope you get to feeling better soon.
This fic is amazing and I love the world building.
Grand Prince Cure Wave of Equestria, Alicorn of Life, Patriarch of House Vita. I'm sure that's not the last title or honorific he's going to receive, either. I wonder how many Celestia has? It's probably a whole paragraph.
I think that 'is' is a typo. Or maybe the 'are'. Not sure which.
Come to think of it, I believe there are only two things Celestia has explicitly forbidden Cure from doing. One is him personally going after the perpetrators of the attempted kidnapping. The other is him using his talent to stimulate all the pain receptors in someone's body*. I wonder if his grandparents and lawyers would have been reassured or worried by that.
*Which was just a hypothetical he said he'd never actually do, but still... quite horrifying. He could use his talent (directly or 'delegate' it with a plant) to keep someone alive and in absolute agony for as long as he wants. Being turned into a statue or sent to the moon for a thousand years is a slap on the wrist compared to what Cure could do to someone.
Well, ponies didn't had one walking ecodisastester and consequently, mild lead poisoning of entire population.
Nice chapter! I'm looking forward for his next interaction with Celestia too : )
I really want to see him go beast mode on some poor smucks
Great chapter as always, you can call it "business time" lol... it was nice to see Brick again with his herd. it was fun seeing how Cure reacted to the studding offers and how Sabre tried to protect the poor innocent colt
hope time flies by fast until the next chapter when we get Celestia back, always love to see her interact with cure
Btw... Only one or two chapters to the 1 million cure wordz mark
I do wonder about Vine’s parents. That a hot mess of unknowns.
I like Audrey. Does she have any speech implements? I imagine it’d be like a parrot that says cute things like, “who’s a good baby?” Cure had a lot of good jokes in this chapter.
The business trips may need some advertising to book up the scheduling. I forgot who Snowstorm was. With his popularity in the thestral community and potential medical trip to Dusk Hollow, maybe we’ll get to see Ebony’s character a bit more? SGT Song is fun.
I’m glad that the girls are taking the date thing seriously and not just diving into it. Cure’s advice was wise that they consider the ups and downs of that potential life. (Rooting for Ferric !)
Another wonderful chapter.
"Feeeeeed me, Cure Wave!"
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"Did I say a few minutes? I meant a few seconds."
"Well if it's just'a few seconds, I'm sure ya won't mind missin out in tha future."
"W-well lets not get too hastey here, I-I was only joking."
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*introduce you all
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*how
I can already imagine he give Twilight a spare before Discord's challenge.
Discord: Ha! I have taken your horn. You have to do it non-magical way.
Twilight: I have spare! <attach it to her forehead and cast magic>
Discord: How?!
This just reminds me that coconuts do actually migrate! On their own!
Very nice chapter, the business knowledge shock was nice, and the little eye "pets" are adorable abominations, even if they are essentially puppets. The ambiguity of that is a nice touch.
Happy Thanksgiving, enjoy your time, we'll all be here when you get back.
awesome chapter cures antic are glorious xD
pure vines from farm girl to my son is flippin rich ^^
i do wonder my self when the bastard grandsire show up with his sales pitch
ore cures great grand parents on vines site, wait did they even se the twins yet ? i dont sink so
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are you happy? now this image is stuck in my head when i think of Cures plant
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Sapphire is one of those girls that is everypony’s girlfriend and nopony’s ‘steady’ girl. At least for a few more years. That puts Cure with 5 (am I counting right?) fillies; Dawn, RP, Ferric, Glacial and Drift… now he just needs to meet a bat… and a zebra… and a hippogriff… and a griffin… the “nobles” are already clamoring for his attention… poor Cure
Thx its cool!
Thanks for the chapter man. Take your well deserved break and enjoy yourself. Looking forward to seeing the saga continue once you're back.
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These are all good points, but I can't imagine it would turn into a serious thing. Even if Brick is the patriarch, he is really the patriarch in name only. Cure not only has the highest station in the nobility, but he is also the rightful founder of the noble house. Brick is more like the legal management for the house. It's kinda like how if Equestrian society were presented accurately in fiction, nobility would always support Celesta in public regardless of how they feel, because all she would have to do to exile someone from polite society is say "I am deeply disappointed in Lord Graham Cracker's involvement in the unfortunate events relating to the closure of several Fillydelphia pastry shoppes" or whatever, and then she makes a hot potato of whatever pernicious social situation is occurring.
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If it was biology and they wanted a fact check, I think he'd be in to that. Major props to them, actually.
Ok not really related to this chapter, but how long until Cure is wondering through the canterlot market with Celestia and spot a poor family of traveling seed sellers? Be the first opertunity for a series regular in the form of filly/granny/smith to show up. Seems depending on the interpitation of some of the cannon 'dates', he's about the right age for that.
and I even saw at least one askin me to officiate their wedding.” i want to see this happen not gonna lie. also hope you feel good and have good days ahead :)
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The only way to make that better is to add a post-it on the parts, "DO NOT EAT"
Cure will have to save that idea for when his grandparents visit the house-- oh wait! No, when Celestia is by the house for an unofficial visit. Innocently ask them to get the head of lettuce from the refrigerator... which just so happens to be next to the other "head".
Cure keeps talking about how ponies will soon figure out that Prince Serpentus = Cure Wave, but I wonder if what's going to happen is that he will be protected by the same hypnotism aura that stops almost all ponies from noticing that Princess Celestia = Sunny Skies.
They also aren’t Tabloids and this is the story of the century.
Those papers want the evidence confirming Cure is Prince Serpentus to be indisputable and its credibility beyond a shadow of a doubt.
Getting this right means your career is made for the rest of your life. Getting this wrong means your career is ruined.
Im genuinely confused why Cure keeps Drift around at this point. She just seems ungrateful, rude and shows no character growth despite their little sit down at the start of the story.
Enjoy your break!
I do wonder if there are going to be any serious opposition to Cure? Some sort of force that will actually challenge him? I could even see him going the way of Luna for a short time, not too long obviously but long enough for things to seriously change and shake things up a little. That just may be me, constantly on edge from all the stories I read XD
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My bet would be the minotaurs trying another kidnapping/assassination, or even starting a war. The zebras were opposed to him because he's cutting in on their pharmaceutical industry's market, but at this point it'll be easier for them to diversify their economy than trying to stop Cure. The minotaur ambassador, on the other hand, was opposed to Cure's abilities on religious grounds. There's no telling how far someone with that kind of mindset might go.
There could also be other challenges like monster attacks or natural disasters that Cure has to face. If a mass casualty incident happens anywhere in Equestria, Cure will cancel his appointments and fly in a straight line to that shit immediately.
I thought that Cure would have taken to that scrying thing more seriously. Maybe all the tracking and stealing info wasn't really as huge in Edward's life time. Or he is more of an offline kind of person.
It could be scrying, sure. But what about planted bugs or "buying" a guard's memories? This seems to be much more important than every other issue, Cure's family could be placed in the limelight with a huge target on their heads.
Especially that Minotuar. Not specifically him, but anyone that wishes Cure to vanish one way or another.
I really want to hear more about the mail. Specifcially the outliers in Cure's mail. Like death threats from other nations, diplomatic correspondence, or even potential mundane traps like, anthrax laced letters from Zebras, ones that could bypass magic detection or kills the security checker.
Dear Prince Serpentus,
My name is RedHeart and I’m 7 years old, and I’m an earth pony just like you were. I have always loved healping ponies and want to be able to help them when they are hurt or sick. I don’t think I
can everwant to be a doctor becaus I can’t learn the fancy spells like a unicorn can. Is it ok to just want to be a nurse? Thank you IloveyouRedheart
What, like dishes for eating off?
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Roger that.
Thanks!
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i think this is 80 years before Redheart, unless its a family name being passed down
(peering into lightsaber emitter)
ooh...looking forward to the new chapter!
You know, it would probably be interesting if a typical foal who is Cure’s age wrote a letter to him.
What’s the letter about?
Oh nothing much. Just the ramblings of a 8-9 year old who writes about all sorts of things. Like what they do for fun. How their day went. How school is.
And Cure, being who he is, happily writes back to all the foals who write to him.
Most are one offs. But there is one foal who keeps writing to the prince with regularity. And by complete happenstance they become pen pals.
It would be a sweet little detail to add flavor to the story as these correspondences continue probably for a few years.
Cures mail, there is always the nut that sends photos, photocopy of their butt etc... so how are they sorting mail with photos? an entire room full of plot shots?
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Those are probably all burned.
Assuming anypony has the spare bits to waste on getting that type of personal photos developed. Assuming they could afford a camera in the first place.
Though ubiquitous to us now a days—thank you smart phones—cameras were a significant expense. And so far Cure has been show to be the only pony who can create images from either memory or the imagination using magic.
That said, I wouldn’t be surprised in the slightest if various newspapers hadn’t already considered scrying Prince Serpentus’s every move in an effort to ID him. Those same papers were probably reminded by their legal departments that doing so violates all sorts of privacy laws.
Which is made a million times worse because he is a child.
Of course I wouldn’t be surprised in the slightest if just about every reporter assigned to this story from every outlet knows Cure Wave is Prince Serpentus at this point. They just need to little bits of evidence:
1) Indisputable proof that casts aside all shadow of a doubt.
2) The evidence that shows how Cure managed to pull off being in two places at once during his coronation.
The former will resolve itself in due time. Cure is either bound to slip up (he is nine) or he already has and the evidence is just waiting to be discovered.
As for for the latter, the reporters probably have several working theories on the subject. But theories are neither facts nor evidence… even if they are correct.
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Early photography many developed their own photos, it isn't really that hard, with B&W photos could work with red lights did not require blackout, did it at school and home, if you ever try it DON'T dump the developing baths they are slightly toxic and they contain silver that can be turned in or with a little know how you can seperate the silver yourself.
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Celestia didn't ban him from turning someone inside out....😱
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Now you’re giving LFoD ideas for Cure’s next Nightmare Night costume.
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I didn’t say stop.
I don't know if it's been mentioned, but the Grabby TK Wing Floaty Thing is probably as close to the Assert Dominance T-Pose as Cure can get. And I kinda wanna see that.