Page generated in 0.06 seconds
Total duration
949 users online
1,261,874 hits today, 2,244,100 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Ya its up
11672696
11672674
I used to work retail. We had one employee who would, with very little provocation, get more than a tad snippy with customers. Part of that was the area (it was a typical response to confrontation there), but part was definitely just him being kind of a butthole on some days. When it was caught before the customer stormed out of the building (which they didn't always do because they needed what they were there for) it was completely acceptable to do what was needed to placate them.
A 10% discount on many things doesn't even take most of them down to cost (which was also discussed in the chapter), so instead of a 15% profit on the last sale you'd ever get from that person you may be only profiting 5%, but there's a chance they'll come back again and there's also a chance that the story will change from "they're all assholes, I'm never going back" to "the one guy was a dick, but the rest were nice." It's absolutely worth the 10% to most businesses, trust me.
Cure, as he said, didn't let it be known who he was until after she told him to get bent. You can call it blackmail or extortion, and you're not really wrong, but it's also a common way to make up for poor customer service. He was more aggressive about it than a foal would be, but that's just him in general. Similarly, if you go to a restaurant and get bad food you should absolutely let the waiter/waitress know and give them a chance to correct it. That's basically what he did here.
11672696
"She wasn't wearing her armour" Oh yeah that would explain that then, nothing to make them expect that the colt might be able to afford anything.
"Like I said I think without his family to ground him he's getting a big head" pretty sure that's exactly what the author was going for as cure has gone from being relatively poor to being insanely rich and the money is going to his head.
Likewise with the massively expensive/valuable gifts he's giving out to those around him IIRC earlier he was trying to be careful about that and now he's like: and you get a car and you get a car *everybody gets a car!!!*.
It will be a long month waiting for Cure to finally get his crown!
It’s always a struggle when it comes to these types of stories that I love. One the one hand I can’t wait to read it, then on the other once I have read it I have to wait for the next one. Now I have to wait a month?! Oh well, it is what it is. It just means that the next chapter will be even better!
Did I miss something interesting about hippogryphs?
Man, am I the only one who hates that name?
Nice stopping point tomorrow is in 3 weeks long sleeping period lol thay all got captured in thear sleep and no 1 knows who how or why but in 3 weeks time they wake up in a panic becus Nightmare Moon some how put theam in a 3 week nightmare in 1 day joined with every 1 around Celeastea and that is a sign of nightmare moons seal is weakening slowly and only celeastea and cure might know what happening lol
awesome chapter, the reunion with his parent's and little sister made my heart melt
cure inventing hay burger is just awesomely funny xD
It'd be funny if Cure eventually woke Celestia up with a changeling cuddling her
I hope we will have a timeskip soon !
Thanks for the chapter !
See ya next month author
woo another good time
Celestia wake up on the roof of the castle
but that probably next chapter
i just started my first read and currently on chapter 30, and still every time i read name deez all i hear is :
https://www.youtube.com/shorts/flCHvPNVwHM
Ferric’s reaction. I’m rooting for you, girl!! Also, Cure may want to invest in a white-gold patent. Do they have naval brass invented in universe? That’s a useful metal for nautical applications.
“Marked fillyfriend.” That sounds like the girls are getting serious about this. Huzzah! The business about “first wife” is also an interesting cultural concept. Dawn does seem like she’d fit the bill; but Glacial might too. I look forward to seeing more of her character during the planned double date.
I’m curious about this. Definitely involves the recent wound that was Luna’s banishment. Could it also have had some part with Dawnbreaker?
I’ve got bits that says Celestia’s totally going to shake her flank and let loose. Totally hung over for the coronation? Maybe lol!
One month? Pah! That just means I get the chance to start the story over and try to find details I missed before.
lmao can't wait to see Savvy flying over her parents in circles only to be called down by her brother and listening like an angel.
I do wonder how they can try to control a rowdy filly with wings without some wings of their own maybe they will get wings for their marriage redos honeymoon. (Forgot what it was called and idk how to put the spoiler black bar up)
You know, the more Cure tries to get Celestia to loosen up, the earlier she'll retire.
Especially since he is the only other royalty.
Big yikes for him!
Lol I hope and kinda worry that she's gonna get drunk and have a 'hold my beer' moment. Like figure-eighting the sun, hoof-wrestling everyone, or doing something equally hilarious. Of course whatever she ends up doing will be in the newspaper 'Mystery mare *** ***** *****'.
We grow ever closer to the coronation and I’m excited for it! Keep up the awesome work my good author!
As for the hiatus, you do you and have a good one. We’ll all still be here
I hopeeagerly awaiting your return.Thanks for the chapter.
Hope everything goes well this next weeks.
Best wishes!
NOOOOOOOO! 3 weeks without a new chapter. How am I ment to get my start of the week dopamine now!
11672728
Decades in retail myself but never commissioned, just hourly slave labor, heh. 95% of the customers I have no problem with, it's that last 5% that are self-entitled, stupid, and/or stealing. (And while it's frowned upon, I do have a crowbar and I know Vegas will take you out back and break things so you don't steal again... but they never let me)
11673051
Reread the story?
Also so very glad Cure got that long hug from his dam. After doing what he did last chapter an additional 10 times. He definitely needed it.
Cure will be Twilight's favorite pony, if it wasn't certain before it damn well is now!
11672984
That would be hilarious if Tia had a 'hold my beer' moment! Author, please put such a moment in the story for Tia's night on the town!
Here's hoping Sol Gloria doesn't get white girl wasted and beds Deed.
11673103
it's getting harder to reread the story I can't get through the story before the next chapter gets here. (In three weeks)
11673123
Cure will quite literally break Twiggle's brain lol that is, if we ever get to that far on the story, or at least, in a sequel.
I need some fan art of this asap.
But for real why has there not been any fan art made of Cure Wave yet? This is just me of the most popular ongoing stories right?
Some 1 should read this story on YouTube that can put the time and effort to do it on hear spear time that would help the story get more out thear
11673303
You’re assuming he’s not Grandpa Cure Wave.
11673362
You know....... I find the idea of this absolutely adorable.
11673363
If anything, Cure being Twilight’s Grandpa… actually explains a ton.
Just remember Cure, McDonalds is really a real estate company that sells burgers on the side. Franchising and rent is the real money makers
Gonna be real and did some math, if the author goes at the rate they are( every monday) with an average in story time skip of 9 days, to cover the 91 years remaining till Canon.
He will need to write 3322 chapters and it will take him 65 years...
I expect to see at least 2-3 large time skips of 15 to 20 years, to have a realistic time table.
11673446
65 years of content?! Yes please bring it on!
On a real note with so much time cure could make bodies like a huge Dragon on standby for use or he could go around the world and explore outside of Equestria I would love to see what he encounters, From getting scans of rare and/or Dangerous creatures. creating monsters for the royal pony guards to fight. (Would love to see a show made out of this one) Make his own home inside of a giant tree that reaches for the sky for his family to live in. (Would love to see this last one) and much more
Just be sure to have some signs warning it's a no fly zone. Afterall, patrons are ment to be playing golf, not duck hunt
--------------------------------
-------------------------------
*you've
-------------------------------
*look
--------------------------------
*Both
---------------------------------
*wringing (i think. At least something feels off about this sentence)
Lol, cure forcing celestia to go out and have a little fun. Hopefully the night ends with celestia at the bottom of a cuddle pile. I still say celestia would make a good pillow.
11673530
hit a Pegasus get Oooo what thay are not supposed to be thear it's a no fly zone so were did that fly come frome Cure we got a nother one that can't read NO FLING WARNING if you fly past this you well be fined 100 bits plus medical if you get hit sorry but stupid can't be cured cure called back good thing we put up that net to catch them
11673530
Typos fixed. Thx!
11673446
The numbers sound right, so I haven't double checked them. At the current average of 11.5k per chapter that would mean a 37.6 million word (~75,000 page) story assuming you meant 3322 total chapters (not 3322 more) before canon even starts.
I'm not quite sure I'm that committed, tbh.
Every reader's response.
I know I've said it before, but we will see some time skips coming up before too long. There's a few things that'll happen before the end of the year, then I have 4-5 chapters planned for the first half of next year. I plan on having several once Cure comes to live in the capital for school as well.
It's really hard to completely skip SoL events because, inevitably, life is just full of interesting little events. *shrug*
11673633
(Sorry, i just couldn't help myself lol. It's just a bit of fun, don't take it seriously, ok? )
Great last few chapters. Will get my fix during the hiatus.
I'm surely forgetting something, but why do the parents want Savvy to have wings so seemingly suddenly?
And why are they so immediately against their next foals having them, when the logic should be the same?
11673863
Title search is savvy dam she has a more open mind than Spreading Vines who is pragnt with the twins
11672728
“You can do it, cut HIS freaking head off!” Wait, no, the other one “You can do it” hips “all” gyrate “night” vigorously “long”. But we still haven’t seen Cure pull his head off. Bisection at the talent show, giraffe neck while meeting Celestia, but no decapitation, get to it LFOD! Going to miss the story, but have a great time while you’re away. I’m sure there’ll be a bunch of us counting the days until you return
I wonder if the red tree in Cure’s room is a regrown Cure Tree (from the Griffin restaurant mass?) or something the royal gardeners brought in. I wonder who has more work to do daily when he is away, Cure’s maid or his landscaping pony?
Had a thought about the future, in story, Cure and Dawn at CSGU. He flies home on the weekends, does she? Or do they meet their guard escorts, Dawn climbs up onto Cure’s back and screams in his ear for the next two hours as all the pegasussesses hit top speed, do loop de loops, barrel rolls and inverted flybys of migrating geese
11673859
Ah, don’t worry about Solar Wolf, they’re just talk to text and don’t bother to edit or use punctuation
How does 5 minutes after they’re born sound? You know, once Harmony ascends them to Alicornhood…
11674122
I also have dyslexia and a speech impediment so ya
And that is also stupid Oooo jeast becus I don't put a punctuation's lets all ignore theam ya grate pulse u should not till ppl to Oooo he is stupid basically
Thanks for the chapter.
11674109
Ah, makes sense.
Thanks.