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Thanks & good timing! I just happened to log in to post the next chapter a day early. I figure some folks out there will be bored dealing with their family today, so hopefully this'll help ya get through the day. Warning - It didn't get the last round of spot checks I normally put a chapter through, so no promises on the spelling and grammar.
A day early š„³ now I need to read 23K cure and boss lady wordz the horror... The horror
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You take care of our cure wordz needs... Happy Easter
Another grand chapter. Always a treat when simple conversation can be made the bulk of a chapter and entertaining. Can't wait for more from the adventures (and conversations) of Cure.
I have no idea how you can pump out so many chapters, but you aren't hearing me complain, I love reading your story. Though I have a question, how are you able to keep tabs on so many characters at once, as in, that they get regularly mentioned and such, do you have a sort of list of how often a character has a role in a chapter or the like?
Happy longest chapter!
The snake!! OMG the snake! That is one of the funniest bits I have read in years. I may just reread the whole story. Well done and looking forward to more.š¤£š¤£
Thanks for the new chapter! The conversation with Celestia has one of my favorites parts of this fic so far. I'm hoping that they have a talk about what it means to be an alicorn at some point in the future.
I thought he was nine by now? I must be overestimating the length of some of the small timeskips. Still gotta be getting close.
Cure! One would think you were utterly ungrateful for the relief you had received from getting a lawyerās input on your situation!
Future historians will host numerous and lively academic debates over whether it was meant as a rhetorical emphasizer or as a grammatically intended self-negation, rest assured, Cure.
Ah, there it is. Close, but no cake yet.
You spoil us rotten with frequent, enormous, and extremely well-written chapters. Donāt feel bad if your vacation causes a little gap; sure, weāll miss you, and miss out on the laughs you inevitably give us until your return, but sometimes you gotta go do you stuff. Thatās life. Live it up!
Your Celestia definitely feels more like an actual real being, than a character. She's definitely more realistic than in the show while still being in character and it's great!
With how much Cure messes around with small additions to himself, I'm surprised he doesn't purr like a cat in his sleep at this point.
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Purring Cure is one of those things where, were anypony to actually experience it, theyād never let him change back without Geneigva Convention-violating use of sad pony eyes.
So excited for an early release, thank you!
Couple edits;
BSD and swinging grapefruit FEELS(feeds)
WARNED (earned) his sire back before the seminar
Heavy, being the dutiful BIG(but)brother
And I thought Cure already has an appointment with the lawyers from way back in āArbor Dayā? edit: it looks like that was retconnedā¦
I wonder if Cure will tell the princess about his reincarnation or whatever.
So they donāt have air brakes? As soon as a freight car detaches the brakes automatically go on because the air keeps the brakes off.
love this chapter and i did not thought it possible that someone could write a entertaining chapter THIS long that takes place mostly in a a meeting
even tho i totally was waiting for it
the only thing cure did not correct the princes on YET, is he did not acsend and she seams to think so
i hindsight i wonder if those 3 psoido guard's where changelings
Happy Easter, big guy, thanks for providing me with a good read every week. I've actually begun looking forward go Mondays thanks to you. Remember to take it easy though, alright? Don't wanna burn out and end up as one of the countless "hiatus" fics.
Loved this chapter, but what I really loved is just Cure giving Celestia a hug. There are many many times where I would love to do the same, but I never could and I never did see it happen either, until now.
It's just, jeez, going so long without someone there to just be themselves around you and offer affection has to be so exhausting, it has to be draining to a degree where you have to harden your heart lest you break down.
This is just, really wholesome and I'd love to see more of it.
A Cure for loneliness one could say.
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I had to really dig through the chapter to find what you were referring to. You are correct - I did have a line about him having an appointment. I thought I did when I was writing this, but when I looked through my "List of things Cure has to take care of" I apparently didn't note that one.
I hate making mistakes like that, too. I had previously said that when I screw up on something once I hit publish I would own it, but I admit I'm kind of at a loss on how to resolve two directly conflicting statements. I guess I'll delete that line and stick something in the note. Bah! I have shamed myself and my family and can only atone via ritual suicide. Being a fat American I will do it via the traditional way; slowly, by eating unhealthy and failing to exercise.
Ahh yes. My weekly dopamine rush has been delivered.
Happy Easter
My friend, stay safe in your travels.
Btw, i am loving the interations beetwen the boss Lady and cure. It so funny AND cute!
Anyway, thanks for another great chapter.
So many laugh-out-loud moments! Such a great chapter... The most heartwarming would have to be when Cure, in his big alicorn suit, gave Celestia a hug. *Chef Kiss* That was the cherry on top for this one.
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I almost want him to have plum forgot and they get upset. Unless it can't work out that way.
Thanks for all the hard work you're putting into this. It's my favorite currently-updating story, and definitely in the top 100 over the last... 11+ years on here (holy crap).
You have bold\italic tags missing their mark here (spaces to make them visible)
"I shall be exceedingly[ b][ i] [ /i][ /b]displeased with them"
He'll be very, very cross.
i honestly think celestia NEEDED that hug. i know if i spent as long as she does being a hugger. i would need to be hugged. but that's just me. i like to give and receive hugs.
A small mistake in Celestia's name.
Good news: Chapter update a day early!
Bad news: No chapter to look forward to on Monday.
Awesome chapter! And once again i love the way you write. Im sure I and others wouldn't mind missing a few updates. We dont want you burning out.
That trouser snake.
I just realized how freaky things will get in the bedroom for Cure and his future wives when they grow up. Them asking him to go 'big' in every sense of the word is going to be the least he'll have to put up with. "No babe I don't want to have group tentacle sex tonight. I'm tired from healing a hundred ponies at the hospital. Let's all just snuggle instead."
As for Cure being registered as an alicorn (prince), that seems like a huge deal even if it's only on paper so far. For one thing, he's not going to need an invitation to go to the castle, he could just show up and the guards will let him in.
I'm sure those lawyers he wants to hire will get a kick out of having someone who is legally an alicorn for a client. I wonder if that treason clause in lawyer-client confidentiality will apply to Cure as well? I suppose it depends on how the law is worded, is it for royals, alicorns, or just Celestia specifically?
Getting inspiration from a previous comment I made?
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1 of these ponies is not like the others, 1 of these ponies just doesn't belong. (Hint: it's the thief)
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As seen here:
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(Yes more shameless self promotion, but am really proud of my work)
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*his
ya know... you mentioned then the leader of the mercenary band was not pleased that they where going after a foal, but still wasn't talking. i wonder if his tune would change if say... it was revealed to him that not only where they going after a foal, but the only male alicorn in recorded history. an alicorn that their employers likely new about and purposefully neglected to inform them of.
finally finished reading the chapter, great as ever with Cure and celestia having a real talk, more so at the end with the hug
the snake part was a strike of genius, saying that as a snake owner lol
and while it will be hard to be without my weekly dose of cure, authors are people too... enjoy your vacation
Damn.
The polulation number seems pretty solid.
Considering ponies have heat cycles and their 1/6th issue, plus, the spread out nature of hub areas with not much civilisations in between them, three million seems about right.
I wholely believe Equestria to be much smaller in density to Earth's equivalent (America).
Fun fact, Singapore is about 12 times the size of Manhatten, or 120 times smaller than New York, but it has more than double the population of Equestria
Thanks for the chapter!
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Cure has been making comments about removing his own head since Chapter 26. He did so again when they had lunch with Solar when he came home for his first Basic break in 48.
Spoiler for 62: There is a scene in the next chapter that has the same underlying prank as the bunny thing, but it was planned out since I was writing Chapter 57.
In a way, I take the opposite approach, actually. If I haven't written out an event yet I typically specifically avoid doing anything too close to what's suggested in comments because I like to surprise the reader, at least with the fun/funny stuff. That said, if I've already written the chapter and it's not just a small blurb that can be easily altered then even if someone gets close I'm still going to roll with it. RvrOttr and Dream Seeker both came close to things that happened in the recent chapters and I didn't bother changing them - I just said "Yeah, that'll kinda happen next" and moved on.
That being said, if you come up with a funny omake please do share it. I don't know if it was you or not, but someone at one point suggested a way to mess with Mr. Binder (the librarian that Cure is oddly protective of) that I thought was pretty funny, as were the ones you referenced here.
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I try not to put characters in time out too much and I also try to have at least some conversations not center around Cure. After all, even if he's the center of the story, he isn't the center of the universe. Drift, Glacial, and Deed's interaction over her boring teacher, for example, or when the fillies are griping about their flavors. I do have notes that I keep about each character, their families, things that are going on off-screen (if Cure doesn't know something we usually won't either), etc. When there's a logical reason for that character to appear or speak up, they do.
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Thanks and a thank you to everyone else that has made similar comments about Celestia's portrayal here. I admit - When I first introduced her in Ch. 46 I was pretty nervous about hitting the publish button. She's a big character, in every measurable way. A powerful mage, a wise elder, a gentle ruler, a motherly leader, a fierce warrior, and many other things as well. Yet, at the end of the day, she is a pony with the same wants and needs as any other. That's the approach I took with her character and I'm thrilled to see such a positive response to it.
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This isn't exclusively aimed at you, but for everyone in general: No matter what you did do, didn't do, said, thought, etc. If you are under arrest the only four words that should come out of your mouth are "I want a lawyer" or some variant thereof. I would hesitate to apply an absolute, but I think it's pretty safe to say this is awfully close to one - There is no set of circumstances where, when dealing with law enforcement, you are better off on your own than you are with a lawyer. Even if you are the victim.
And yes, Cure does trash talk lawyers a little. They're easy targets. It was done in light humor anyhow given present company. After all, he is very much aware that the lawyer of all lawyers is right there in the room with him.
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I had mistakenly assumed that only the detatched cars would brake. I am not 100% sure that's how it actually works now, having poked around online after noticing your comment. The way I envisioned it was the Zebras' fallback plan (which they began to enact) was to detatch the cars, have them come to a stop (when the brakes triggered), and with the support of forces on the ground, fog memories, and vanish Cure, intending to take him alive if possible.
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Note that she didn't say anything about crowning him, only updating his tribal status.
Love it,
Dont worry bout the release schedule
Having a chapter every week is lovely but as long as you dont fully stop writing, we will wait for the next one
Also, hope you have great holidays and hope your trip will go well to
Thats all from me for now, see you next chapter
I just realized: since domains are a thing here and metaphysical stuff isn't uncommon, then Philomena, being a phoenix, might actually call shenanigans on Cure/Ed at some point š¤.
Damn, with that hovering and a wide smile, he can pull a good impression of a Cheshire cat on them.
Don't worry about always releasing a chapter on time, take a break if you feel like it and happy holidays to you
have
Hopefully not an issue, I really don't want to see this turn into a group isekai, there is already way wayyyy too much to do without bringing in others from earth.
Foes are also not automatically evenly matched and advancements are not always easily countered especially if unknown ahead of time. Cure is pretty OP, barring him being caught by surprise or managing to encounter a foe that has encountered someone with his ability before it seems unlikely for him to encounter anyone capable of easily beating him.
Pshhh have you met cure? He doesn't need awards that'll just get him more unwanted attention, he'd be happy with monetary rewards though, although he'd probably be happy with just the ponies that stole from him being brought to justice.
If he gets half what he's got planned built they are probably going to put statues of him out front of every hospital in the country whether he wants them to or not.
Is she really going to label him an alicorn anyway? He's not an alicorn, he has most of the ability of an alicorn but isn't exactly, since it's assumed he will at some point actually ascend changing his status to an alicorn now feels like jumping the gun, yet he's hardly a normal earth pony either.
I agree, it's far too early to be giving Cura awards. Giving him one for helping with all the births on his first season would be an insult to the doctors and nurses who have years of experience and helped with many more births their whole careers, whereas Cure was only gifted with a unique talent and knew how to use it.
During the fertility discussion, I thought Cure was going to ask Celestia if she would like one. I bet she would have dropped a brick. But he did just give her years of work in the space of an hour or soā¦ I imagine sheās going to have quite the decompression without that nugget.
I was also expecting Cure to drop the Ed knowledge, but that may come later? She said she intends to spend much of Saturday with Cure. Was expecting a cliffhanger, āSo, assuming our calendar is accurate, in about 91 yearsā¦ā to be continuedā¦
Iām curious about the Wonderboltās flight suits and if the canon suits will be different than the ones theyāre currently using -implying Cure may improve them for future generations of āBolts?
Cure is totally giving way more gifts to the Lieutenant than the Captain. Dude seriously likes wings.
Welp..I'm late this time...hopefully you have had a good week so far and good luck on the next chapters dude...
This is about as good to me as reincarnated to master the blade and that was bucking awesome to me so far!.
Also ps. This chapter was also fire and I loved it :)
HE SAID THE THING! Thank you!
At this rate, Celestia falling in love with him is almost inevitable, and she apparently knows it. He has demonstrated extreme long-term thinking/planning, his 'work' on aging and his apparent Alicornhood give her hope, he's not intimidated by her, he makes her laugh, and he produces tasty sweets. He has demonstrated a full understanding of her values, and has implied that he is not afraid of the dark side of what a ruler must do to protect their loved ones. He can also be of appropriate size for her when needed in whatever capacity.
So the question is not 'will she fall in love,' but 'what drama comes about when she does so?' I await with baited breath.
Yeah I have weird thighs circling my mind. Something something head < watermelons. XD I'll be honest I enjoy finding unfortunate autocorrects. This one made me snort lemonade out my nose with the helpful visuals provided by my ADHD brain and my truly Random Access Memory. FYI pink lemonade burns.
Ooh, new story to read, the description got me hooked, and has been updated recently? Count me in.
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you're in for quite the ride, just a fair warning, it is a bit info dumpey at the start, but it's all so very worth it.
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Another great chapter from a phenomenal story
Just one minor thing I noticed
Hadn't he scanned a yellow dragoness on the train beforehand?
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When he made the tryanid, he had not (yet) scanned the dragon
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You are in for a heck of a ride! Iām rereading from the very beginning, and while I miss the ādiscoveryā part of the story, Iām still enjoying the hell out this
I wonder if the Equestrian rank structure is similar to the American military, because if thatās the case, a rookie private, barely out of training, getting a THREE rank promotion, from the leader of the country, regardless of circumstances, is a PRETTY BIG DEAL! Some military schools/training are dependent upon a minimum rank or experience (privates donāt go to sergeant school), so I like to imagine the Artillery Academy has such a requirement. I hope we hear more from LFOD. Maybe even a promotion ceremony during open court Friday morning
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Right yeah my bad, he saw the dragoness before he made it but didn't get to scan her til after, thanks for the refresh on that
I imagine Celestia a bit like this in your fic.
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