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……..sacrifice the sun horse for the Lunar Goddess!!!!!
Freaking love the lore and depth you have put into this, it’s not just time skip after time skip of small explanations you are just forced to accept. It’s a slow burn but all of the insane ideas that could admittedly work keep me so invested. Kinda want adult Cure to give himself alicorn features, walk up to Celestia, and go “ Celestia I am your father join me so we may rule the galaxy, Oh here try one of my cum chocolates, top shelf stuff hun”
Yes, build the drug empire in the name of Cure.
I adore the comedy of this! There's too many good points to list. Continue, please.
I'm really liking the "what happens when you take the logical approach to abilities of magic" you've got going on here. Very refreshing to have a smart protagonist who is not juggling the idiot ball.
I want to see so many of these ideas play out. Are you sure your not listing stuff you want to read in the hopes people borrow them since you probably can't cover all of them?
The changlings could probably take Celestia off the board for good with magic cakes.
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Ugh, I had a big long comment typed out and the browser refreshed and lost it. Long story short: Folks can run with the ideas, I would appreciate a heads-up so we don't step on each others' toes, and I really hope that you'd at least put forth a decent amount of effort to make the blurb or side story or whatever technically well written. If you can't spell crap right, use the correct "your" or "to", or capitalize names then I will very quickly be like, "I don't know this dude, he didn't come here with me." A few instances of those are not a total deal breaker for me usually, but if there's blatant typos or spelling errors just in the story's short description then that makes me a sad panda.
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Thank you. My personal favorite moments are when Vines gets Cure. I had to step away from the keyboard for a moment on the book scene in 9 because I kept imagining her frantically playing patty-cake with this book on the ground and Cure's sitting there looking around uncomfortable, internally freaking out that he broke his dam while she's basically stomping the hell out of this library book right out in their yard.
Thanks for the comments and for reading, everyone.
Cats due to their excellent kidneys can drink sea water.
That's good shit
Thanks for the update!
I can just see him giving ‘special’ chocolate to celestia. God knows shed probably appreciate it, poor lady must be internally screaming after dealing with the nobles every single day.
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That may require specialization.
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wait really?
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So I've heard.
Hard to confirm because whenever I looked it up I only got stuff about kidney disease in cats.
So, would Cure be able to transform his whole body like a shapeshifter once he has enough magic? Like how a druid in DND can quickly shapeshift between different animal forms.
PS:
I noticed the blurb underneath your username, nice.
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Eh, kind of the wrong question since, technically, the answer could only ever be "yes". With enough magic, what's impossible? Very little, I think.
The right question is, "Will he ever do this?" and the answer almost certainly has to be "yes, to a degree." The mechanics of full-body shapeshifting are a real head-scratcher when you consider that the only way a full body transformation like that could be survived is if all biological functions basically paused while everything is moved around, then restarted, which doesn't sound like a seamless process to me.
Will he ever use his bio-powers to shapeshift like that? No, I don't think so, simply because I can't picture how it would work without instantly killing the shifter. If someone else used a spell that, somehow, inexplicably, turns him into a breezie or something like that? Who knows, I don't have that on my "to do" list though. I do have plans for more changes than just his eyes, though. He actually explores a tiny bit in the chapter I'm pre-publish reviewing now (19).
Just know that in a biological system a change is never as simple as it seems. I can't realistically expect myself to catch everything, but I've probably done about as much reading and research to figure out how this could work as I've spent actually writing. It's kind of daunting and very difficult not to just start handwaving everything technical away with "it's magic, yo". Maybe at some point I'll get there, but not yet!
Love this chapter, so many lol moments
*Zeus
*its
Awkward wording on "it wouldn’t have been immediately helpful and unnecessarily complex". Perhaps this is intentional, since speaking aloud often does not match how you'd type it?
*Dogs
"pegasus" -> "pegasi" (common option)
"pegasus" -> "pegasuses" (humorous anti-unregular-plurals option)
“That boy ain’t right…”
1 too many "then"
Oh dear, that's a dangerous morality.
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We must 'cure' them of their lack of high.
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would find it hilarious if you get the morph skill, and for a joke, turn into celestina in front of his parents lol, that would be a total mess hahahaha
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WZNikqNT7_U
Best selling movie featuring
Cure Wave and the Cutie Mark Crusaders: Bootleggers in Space!
Very neat. I especially like the idea of sending Celestia stuff and asking for feedback.
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*Morning of Nightmare Night, Cure wakes up, stretches out all his muscles, and only just notices the tips of his wings are brushing the opposite walls of his bedroom, right at the same instant he hears a "chunk" sound and it feels like his forehead is glued to the ceiling*
Cure: "Oh...? Well... fuck."
Princess Celestia: "Uh--that ISN'T why I came--wait!--the reason I arrived here. I felt your ass--dammit!--my magic detected your ascension!"
Cure: "Looks like I'm screwed."
Princess Celestia: "Not yet!"
I wonder if the whitehouse gets sent moonshine by any Floridamen
Magical Mystery Cure was never this literal! 😂
Some stories assert the existence of a hidden sect of Alicorns that simply don't want to be put out as princesses and such. But they usually don't get into the "how they came to be" aspect. 😜
Does he though? I hear them talk about being overwhelmed, but they very rarely act overwhelmed. Do they constantly act calm and collected for the sake of their colt? That sounds exhausting, especially considering they know he's more than mature enough to be understanding if they let such feelings show. I feel like they'd reach a boiling point eventually. Or Cure will, maybe. Though Cure so far spends more time thinking and theorizing than doing, so I gotta assume his brain is pretty organized and together. Maybe when you plan that much it's easier to deal with.
...Or more likely, he's intent on doing all this good to avoid losing people again, as he did in his past life. Keeping his brain constantly on things he considers "productive" so he can avoid ruminating on the lingering pain of, not just the deaths of his loved ones in the past, but his own death as well. Dude is gonna have to grieve at some point, or he's gonna fall apart under all this pressure he's putting on himself.
One day little colt, you will discover the ungodly power of lists. Being a biomancer may be cool, but charts and lists are far superior.
...I wonder when Equestria will invent Excel.
Is it a mask at this point? Who would he be performing for? The cat?