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All hail the dovahking FU RO DAH!!!
I like how he handled the conflict, that did seem realistic and well played.
This is pretty good in general, I am wondering though, for someone who says he wants to be careful and methodical, Cure is taking some pretty big leaps. I mean, it's barely been a week since he got his mark and he gets the idea of "let's see if I can upgrade my visual cortex" That feels kind-of fast to me.
Did he ever actually read that book on magic safety? Binder gave it to him and said it was important, and then it was never brought up again.
i'm loving this entire thing so much
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Yeah he is you find out next chapter I think been a week since I read it.
You know at the rate he does things I can't help but feel he is going to accidental himself into alicornhood later on and it be one of those things he himself didn't see the total scoop of planning. Granted he is good at planning much less getting others thoughts and opinions.
Yet I can't help but think he is crossing that finish line there in a totally both planned and not planned way. And I will totally understand and enjoy the chaos of such.
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He's pretty much accidentally speedrunning the whole alicorn thing, which the author even sort of lampshaded in this chapter too.
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Y'all need to stop hacking into my notes and reading ahead. It isn't fair! This is a topic that will be addressed in 18... which I wrote like a week and a half ago, mind you. I took an approach that I have never seen, which I find baffling. I'm sure it's been done, but not where I've seen. Meh, enough hype.
I should have it ready tomorrow but 19 won't hit until Mondayish.
Bandit - I had it in my notes he didn't get the book. Looking at 8, I see he did. My original thought was he would only need the book when he starts learning about runes since he isn't actually "casting" anything yet. I must have made the classic test-taker's mistake and changed that after the fact. Oops. Well, maybe he'll stop doing stuff all the time and have a chance to catch up on his reading soon.
You're spot on about rushing things, though. I have something lined up to address this planned but not yet written.
Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment, folks.
This is quite a good fanfic, really enjoying it! I'm definitely looking forward for the updates!
I’m happy I found this fic. Just got done binge reading all the chapters. Great work can’t wait for more!
>> All minerals break down over time in nature
Many, but far from all. There are plenty of stable isotopes.
Heh reminds me of another story where a biomancer used their skills to defend themselves. It can get messy.. good chapter though
What's with the "if"?
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That may come down to the "I still have the biology of an eight-year-old colt, and everything is at least twice as exciting as it normally would be for a colt because of my memories" thing.
It's not as noticeable with an extra sentence in the middle but he effectively just said "my finest feature is obviously my charming personality, obviously" which like... nothing's wrong with it grammatically but it sounds weird to say obviously two times in 5 words ya know?
Damn, he's a manipulative little shit, isn't he? And with the enhanced voice too. I wonder how this plays out.
Cure's statement up to here was totally true, but to be fair to the guy doing his best 'protective father' operation, Cure was on top in a very precarious position, poised to do serious damage. Didn't really look like a victim there kid. At least he kept the race out of it.
Because, Duh! IT'S AWESOME!
Great chapter, and the reflection at the end was well put together.
That’s good and all until you have half the guard looking for you
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Guard 1 Falls dead.
Guard 2: What just happened?
Cure: I don't know he just fell dead when he came within 2 meters from me.
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He just developed a spastic colon. Idk what happened…
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a spastic colon,
does that mean that Cure could do the magical version of the brown note
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That would be hilarious, and honestly a fantastic get away button.
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I think you're ignoring the fact that there's six OLDER fillies, all around one YOUNGER colt. So, not only is there an age advantage, but a numbers advantage. Really a 'protective' father would just put themselves between the foals and demand to know WHAT was going on...instead, he singled the younger colt as the aggressor.
I'm not sure "changeling" implies anything about deception if you're unaware of the myth about the fae creature, or surrounding context. It could be the name of something that changes with the seasons for example.
Realistically, the analogies don't hold and it's probably more like an Autoencoder or a Variational autoencoder. You have a very large input that you need to crank down into a maximally compressed form; this appears to be an active component that's doing preprocessing.
Noice
Heh, talk about an exciting evening!
Nah that's not Alicorn. But a good mock of a pegacorn!
CURE
THIS IS STILL MAGIC
PLEASE. PLEASE READ THE MAGIC SAFETY BOOK
SAFETY FIRST, CURE!