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Another good chapter.
I'm thinking Cure's hiding in the luggage.
Always good to see another chapter of this.
Well, he is showing off more, or is he just accepting more of what he is? His sense of humor could and likely will give somepony a heart attack at this rate. He definitely needs more practice with behaving or at least behaving well. (I'm looking forward to what a certain bug queen will make of him... and if that army of half alicorns do in fact take over the world...)
The next great sport to take over the world... ping pong...
Bulwark*
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What do you mean hiding? Cure is the Luggage.
And more than likely these shenanigans will end up with a heartbroken Vines and a very stern Alicorn frown from Princess Celestia.
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Damn, pretty nice chapter. Cure isn't leaving anything to fate this time eh?
awesome chapter this week
uuhh that last part was ominous
At this point I would almost be a little disappointed if nothing happened on the train. Can't wait to find out either way!
"Heteromorphic eyes"? That would be two completely different shaped eyes, like one eye shaped like Betty Boops', and the other like an actual eye. Cure probably meant heterochromatic, where two similar shaped things are different colours.
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d'oh!
Fixed. Thanks!
Huh, so Cute by this point is just a lump of intelligent biomass : ) Wondering how it all will behave when out of communication radius...
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If I were as paranoid as Cure is, I would have replaced the Royal Train Car (tm) with his own plant matter and built an armored box under a bench or cabinet somewhere where I would stash myself the night before. Anyone trying anything serious and the whole car would come alive with tentacles, swarms or whatever else is required, and everyone in the car besides me would be a replicant. Mom would be a non-descript pony riding in economy under an illusion, perhaps with guard.
Just think, he could go Lovecraftian on them if warrented:
"The eyes...so many eyes just...watching..."
Where's Waldo? Child's play! Where's Cure is where it's at.
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I lost track when Cure absorbed his Pegasus clone.
This will lead to problems.
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If thats true I can jsut see it being like The Luggage from Diskworld or a mimic from D&D.
Cure is great at intimidation tactics. Even better at following up on them, though he hasn't had a need to do that yet.
I'm going to guess he's in the heavy luggage.
I wonder if the description of the changeling will be what gets his memory secret revealed
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That's paranoidal
Nice
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Celestia already knows about it, so probably not.
There’s nothing to worry about. I’ll explain all this,” his tilts his head back towards the carriage, “to everypony at once we’re inside so I don’t have to repeat myself.”
Missing a 'when' or second 'once' after once to read smoothly.
Cure: But but but- money.
Ferric: No. Bad prince. *rolls up newspaper* Now, this will hurt me more than it’ll hurt you. *tap* What did you learn?
Cure: Don’t sell alicorn meat for monetary profit. (Trade it for favors. )
Several bricks can be heard hitting the ground.
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I love how Ferric is able to rein Cure in, more or less. Perhaps even more than Dawn. Vines can still do this better than anypony, though.
11860226 I meant like to the guards and his friends
Having mentioned Trot again, he's most definitely not any of the supposedly living beings. 🙃
The problem being, once things get exciting, won't most of the alternates stop and become useless due to lack of focus? Unless he's been more lenient on braining them up for autonomous action...
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It's too bad thingpone isn't here, she'd have fun with the idea!
Dear god. You really don't disappoint! Every damn meal- i mean chapter.
Thank you for bringing your gift to the world.
Is this a reference to the time Shining Armor thought a full trash can was modern art?
Neat.
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Well he IS a momma’s colt.
Superhero landing, Cure did a superhero landing (so bad for the knees)
Im wagering bits on Cure creating afew extra species eventually XD
Awesome chapter
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Indeed, I think the story is no longer about Cure but about his clones and doubles who have secretly taken over his life. Skynet in pony form.
"Obviously it's not the crow", so it's obviously the crow. Especially given how we were just reminded of the Reduce spell.
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Might be. Though the idea that modern art is garbage is far from uncommon in its right, and modern “art” has been thrown out by a museum’s janitors more than once — more than twice, even.
I personally would have gone with a Lynel from legend of Zelda but his choice is a bit more reasonable.
At this point Cure is just a biological version of T-1000.
So I wouldn't be surprised in the slightest if he was the train track or maybe all the wood screws in the train car number three.
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Ok. Now I feel stupid, because I didn't caught that.
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I could see Ping-pong actually getting some traction as an up-and-coming "new thing". As long as you can hold the paddle you can play, so none of the tribes are left out. Unicorns might make a show of it using multiple paddles against each other, however tracking and returning multiple ping-pong balls is a far greater challenge.
Found a wiki on sports in MLP and Ping-Pong is not there so, huzzah! Something new Cure can introduce.
https://mlp.fandom.com/wiki/Sports
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Yeah, but I was more referring to the interaction spawned from Shining mistaking a trash can for art. Spearhead points out that it's a trash can, but then concedes that 'who's to say it's not art'.
*their
How about Twister? Sounds very pegasus, but could still be a reference to a puzzle.
She should just have royal cars enchanted with dimensional expansion to have an extra meter or two of headroom. If the deluxe royal car also happens to have a full gym, library, spa, and swimming pool, well. There’s probably a minimum limit on how much a space of a given size will expand, and expanding a whole train car starts out with a much bigger volume than a tiny pouch, after all. May as well use it for something useful on long trips!
I think it'd be neat if Cure comes up with pseudonyms for his disguises that continue the theme of villains from human media.
A Unicorn named Riddle, after an evil wizard, works because Unicorns are the designated spellcasters of the setting.
His Alicorn disguise was almost named Serpentor, which was the name of a G.I. Joe villain.
I think a Pegasus could take a name from a comic book supervillain. I'm leaning towards Zoom, after the speedster villain.
He'll need an Earth Pony disguise eventually, when he comes out as Prince Cure Wave. I'm thinking something that references the fact that he's a demigod taking an innocuous form. Morpho, after the deadliest butterfly in the universe from the Kirby games.
Calling it now, the real Cure is in the luggage.
Loving the story as always, cant wait for the next chapter
I'm also kind of disappointed that Subtle Shift turned out to be "just" a unicorn.
I can't wait to see what happens when Cure meets a real changeling.
I liked that no one could trick Cure with their illusions.
Warrior seems kind of badass. But that's by design I suppose.
Thank you for the chapter.
While I do love the body guard idea I think that one would be quite the intriguing plot point if said bodyguard wasn’t a puppet of cure’s, it makes sense I understand but it always a treat when authors add their own unique flare or races to an AU equestira.
Anyway beside that this was an enjoyable read as always and I’m am looking forward to more!
I am loving the dichotomy of Cure.