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Alot of flags in this chapter...
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You're clearly just imagining things. What could possibly go wrong? Everything seems to be working out so far, after all. I'm sure there's nothing to worry about.
I wonder if that last one was meta, or if it'll actually stick
when the author raises another flag in the comment section:
readers: funny joke
author: ...
readers: it's a joke, right?
author: *doesn't elaborate*
Can someone tell me the color of Cure's mane and fur?
Thanks again LFOD for another amazing chapter. I really enjoyed the slice of life chapters you've done so far, and you've done a great job fleshing out the various characters in your story. I also really enjoy the out of the box kind of thinking Cure does when thinking of pushing the possibilities and limits of his magic as a earth pony. I'm excited to see what you have in store for us in future chapters. I wish you the best of luck writing you next chapter and thank you again for all the time and hard work you've put into to bring us the great story. Cheers!
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Almost every time I'm not commenting is going to be because I'm just not on my computer. I may on occasion come in and give away some kinda-sorta spoilerish info away, but I don't think I will here just because I'm enjoying the comments and I'm kind of a butthole sometimes.
I'm surprised nobody pointed this out yet, but do keep in mind that Deed is only one letter away from Dead.
/throws the whole pole, flag included & runs away
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Sure, sorry I've done kind of a lousy job describing the main cast. I think I literally put like one line each in back in chapter 1 or 2.
Although I didn't plan to use her colors, Cure has the same coat as Rainbow Dash and, if you took the green stripe in her hair and made his whole mane & tail that color you'd basically have exactly what I envisioned for him.
Spreading Vines is easy because there is, conveniently, a male earth pony I found named Wensley who has almost her exact color scheme. She's just a shade or two darker green - more "emerald" than "shamrock" I guess. According to the page he's an Apple clan member, which is funny because I had originally toyed with the idea of her being one too before I abandoned that. (Her focus on not-apple-related plants was one idea I considered for her being kind of disowned)
Clean Deed is a bit more plain with a darker brown coat and black mane. Think Doctor Hooves' mane/tail for his coat.
Title Search is, as indicated in the chapter, almost exactly like Cadance's colors, just without the elaborate multi-color thing going on. Since her hair changes in some image searches it's probably easier to say that Title's mane and tail are the same color as Amethyst Star's darker stripe.
Really, I should just make an index or something where I include character descriptions. I know that's useful in stories once they get kinda long. I'll double check the rules to see if that's permitted because I do remember some restrictions about what kind of chapters are allowed or not.
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Thanks for the compliment! I'm glad you're enjoying it. The SoL parts are personally my favorite. As for the rest, again, no spoilery stuff, but you'll definitely want to tune in for 24 and 25 in particular. I'm still brainstorming the mechanics a bit but I definitely had a "OMG I HAVE TO DO IT" moment last night, naturally, right before trying to go to sleep. I'm not sure how it'll be received, but it's something that really clicked with me that I haven't seen done in any other story. It REALLY feels like it should have, though, so I'm doubtful it's an original idea. A quick Google search turns up nothing concrete, but it's not like that would find a little blurb somewhere in-chapter. I know I'll post it and someone will link like... a top 10 story where that's like the main plot or something and be like, "It's right there, you dumbass." Oh well.
Well, enough hype. We'll get there in a couple weeks either way. Thanks for reading, folks.
Thanks for the update!
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...didn't get the reference until I watched the whole thing. Sad part it now I remember watching the same thing in school for science class
Clean Deed, fancy sales pony, a pony barely alive. Ponies, we can rebuild him, we have the special talent. We have the capability to make the world's 1st biomancicly created pony. Clean Deed will be that pony. Better than he was before. Better, stronger, faster.
(Anyone get the reference?)
Earth ponies are ground types.
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Okay you should have 100% made a grounded pun out of that
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Better than he was before. Better, stronger, faster, horny'er.
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huh no wonder always say E-P are down to earth xD
huh Title said someone instead of somepony Is this spelling wrong?
:D
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I like those, but TBH, I was thinking it was for more of a setup along the lines of Cure eventually explaining about "Frawnkensteen", "Eyegore", and "Abby Somepony".
After all, Biomancy can't be too awfully far from Necromancy.
(Cure looks at story tags) see? No tragedy, it's fiiinne!
THAT
THAT IS A BRILLIANT WAY TO TRANSITION BETWEEN SERIOUS AND LIGHT TOPICS. WITH HUMOUR LIKE THIS
So far it's been very sudden back and forth between them. This was an amazing Segue
Take that, Vines bitch parents! Deed is better at plowing than you! HAH! Get fucked!
Winter wheat! Winter wheat, winter wheat!