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I hope Cure gets the garden tour the others are getting, so that he can see Discord.
This was a good chapter. Philosophy, meals, and just Cure and Celestia interacting. Is nice.
Oh boy; a two-for-one special?
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No, the author just worded it really weird. This chapter is part 1 of a 2-part in-universe day, where normally each chapter has happened on a different day. Think of it as chapter 60 part 1. The second part is still coming next week, as said further down in the author's note.
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In my defence, I'm still waking up, so my reading comprehension is impaired.
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Well I'm not, and it still took me rereading it a few times for it to click. Like I said, the wording was really weird.
In a lot of stories and in real life i've noticed that people often confuse Honesty with forthrightness of their secrets. I've read more than once where a character finds out a secret about a friend. A secret that has nothing to do with them, effects them in no way. And takes that as a betrayal, As if the fact they weren't immediately given their friends secrets was some how wrong.
Every person has a right to their own secrets. They are not required to share their thoughts, knowledge and/or feelings about anything.
I'm loving this story very much it jeast gets better and better with each chapter
This was awesome and so worth the wait!
The reaction of Celestia to an alicorn colt was excellent which makes it hard for me to try and pick a favorite part of the story. The fruits were an excellent surprise ta boot.
I hope cure gets a scan of celestia. But then again. I suppose him knowing what makes an alicorn an alicorn, would mean that almost nothing is stopping him from becoming one for real.
woo what a fun chapter
celestias reaction was priceless xD
Huh, I guess it'd be too much if Cure, in response to a flabbergasted Celestia, just- *pok* -removed the horn like a hat and put it next to the dessert spoon...
I eagerly await the infodump of Cure's modifications to himself to set Celestia's mane upright...
Hoo boy, that private meeting's gonna be a HOOT. (It'll spoil the 'Magic Mane of Holding' trick, however, one that a future pink pony will use often)
Celestia feels very natural here. A lot of people tend to make her just... more, than all others. Larger than life, you know? It's always refreshing to see a Celestia that feels just as much a pony as everyone else.
Instead, Cure is the one who feels big. Very fitting and completely in line with his abilities, little eldritch abomination that he is...
Hmm... Will he dare to ask princess if he can scan her? 🤔
I wonder what sort of event could get cure to trigger the metaphysical change to alicornism with a talent such as his. Presumably it'd have to be pretty incredibly harrowing with such a powerful base talent.
I heard somewhere that the low to mid priced wines are actually better than the most expensive ones, I think it was on Adam Ruins Everything.
You know, I like the interactions with Celestia, in addition to the fact that you have written her very well, on the other hand, I think that Cure Wave's ascension officially to Alicorn should happen soon, on the one hand, it would be a boost to her magical ability, In addition to the domain that Cure would have access to even if he did not know how to use it.
regardless, author friend!!! You could have Celestia much more present!!! I like her interactions!!!
I wonder if the statue of Discord would count as discord for the sake of a scan? That could be very... interesting.
Amazing chapter, as always. And as always, I am left disappointed that the next one is not yet available, though a little stronger this time, as this meeting has been built up to for ages, now, and could very well be a MAJOR turning point in the story. Next Monday can't come soon enough!
Also, I'm adding this story to my super favorites. It's past time to do so.
Inb4 Cure shows up for Moony's return and knocks her out for an easy one-two (three-four-five-six) element KO.
I'm half expecting the more private meeting to go something like.
Cure, remember what we talked about with honesty and forthrightness?
Yyyeees?
Tell me, Cure, are you truly not an ascended Alicorn? You seem to know far more than you should or even could.
I uh...
You talk to me as if you know me and my station with passing familiarity and as if for a long time. You imply things about my friends from ages past. Tell me, Cure, were you here before even I was? Is that why I never noticed you before? You know so much more than any biomancer I've ever seen or heard of. Plants, creatures, what they're made of, manipulating cutie marks and how to use them as well as knowledge of obtaining said cutie marks. Not to mention your business acumen, knowledge of laws, high level of perception for even my own disguise and your developed intuition with knowing about the troubles your actions could cause. Your knowledge and skills are vast, there's no way you're just a foal.
L-look, Celestia, it's not so... How to explain...
Cure, are there others like you? Others I could have known to ease my own loneliness this whole time? Or is it just you?
Cure, tell me, who or what, are you? Where have you been this whole time?
I refuse to believe you're just foal, who only appeared now...
That's a hilarious reaction. I read the 'what' in JonTron's voice.
I'm loving this story so much, I can't wait for next week.
Keep up the amazing work
I absolutely love it when a character is seen as one thing by many, acts differently and almost in their opposite, while remaining perfectically in character. And Celestia is so well written, I cannot help but smile whenever I read her lines.
LOVING THIS!!!
I was kind of hoping that Drifts cutie mark would have been a simplified copy of Cure’s letter to the princess, maybe even with a faint impression of his cutie mark embossed in the wax seal (imagine a dollar sign $ with an extra loop),then with her wings on it, to really tie the mark to the event (and her to him!?!). Authors prerogative I suppose.
Two reads already today, then, probably, two more read throughs tonight, then to drop back a couple or three chapters and read back up for the rest of the week. Then this chapter a couple more times this weekend to get ready for Monday. I HATE having to wait for more, but I understand. Ugh
Thanks for the update!
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HA! That's how I read it too!
I think it must be difficult to depict characters so closely aligned with canon, but this Celestia seems spot on! Well written, author. Can’t imagine what was going through her noggin this day, but she’s been through it. Very much appreciated and am looking forward to Monday next!! The greatly anticipated event is so close.
change
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There really isn't much effective difference now, apparently he's expected to gain a domain though?
Awesome chapter! aww no more today.. oh well more to look forward too next week
Aw, Celestia was pretty happy to have another alicorn, especially one tied to the elements of harmony. She did mention all but laughter during their philosophical talk. I wonder how long it will take for him to actually ascend, as I am certain he will have the connection to harmony and chances to do something great enough to trigger it.
minotaurs
No one on her staff noticed and if they did, they didn't bother mentioning it to her.
Are palace staff desensitized to seeing alicorns even though they've ever only seen the one, or are they criminally negligent?
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He was in the middle of a troupe of foals, and until he spread his wings out for the bow, staff may not have actually paid him enough individual attention to notice them. And not knowing him personally, the horn wouldn’t have immediately struck them as off.
I loved the WHAT? moment! Not so much being interrupted IRL just as I reached it, but that did mean I got to go back and read it twice XD
Celestia comedically losing her composure just isn’t done often, and the lead up to it was executed well!
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“Well, Princess, do you believe in reincarnation?”
It might be too cruel to swap his colors out to Luna’s blues from the end of the pilot and turn his voice fillyish at the same time, though.
Oh, he could copy her colors and offer to take her place for a day as a prank (filly sized) or use his suit to give her a vacation!
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lol what would his domain be Evolution?
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lol after her knowing about his ability to copy i dont know it could go ether way imop.
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Evolution, Creation, Change? I think I'm being a bit short sighted tho if that's all I can think of. In any case, it should be fun to find out.
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Life.
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of course.
don't mind me.
finally the official meeting with boss lady very nice meet and great gift idea from cure
to bad for sunny she didn't find another true alicorn, even if cure can be one if he chooses i assume at this point
So if Cure go to the garden to see old Discord would it be possible for him to put a (cone of cotton candy) on his right claw that Discord holds out (yes) or (no)? Also too all that reads this do you think 🤔 it's mean to do that to old Discord? Ahh sweet candy soooo close yet soooo far away....hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha 😂🤣😁🤣😂
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Hey, sometimes things just aren’t obvious until someone else says them.
They're going to the hedge maze?
The one where Discord's kept?
Without either Cure or Celestia?
Right after Cure noted his dread at the thought of accelerating Discord's escape?
Woooooo!!!
New chapter is out!!!
This is going to be CHAOS!~
and I bucking love it!
Why is Cure ignored, when he says he never ascended?
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Instead of simply saying. He didn't actually say the first quote.
I love how well written the dialogue is and how well the story is written as whole. Just downright exemplary work. Celestia especially comes of very naturally here.
After the philosophical talk I do wonder if Cure will ever mention Edward to Celestia or the memories of FiM.
I've had the same thought at end of every chapter since the monday schedule started and that is: "No! Don't end! Not yet!" I'm always left wishing for more. Its just a brilliant story.
This has definitely become the highlight of my Monday. I'm loving this story as it progresses. Thank you for your awesome work LFOD.
(Yes I'm commenting on Tuesday. Shhhh...)
Kind of surprised Cure didn’t get a dart in his neck when he pulled out his staff. I picture the guards jumping but the weapon is in Celestias hoof before they can react, just not mentioned in the text. Maybe a missed opportunity for a LFOD joke?; whips the staff out, hands/hoofs it to Celestia, dart sprouts beneath his ear “Ouch” “Ouch? That should have gone right through you!” Cure flexes and the dart drops to the floor. “Where’s the blood? Why aren’t you bleeding?”
Drift’s cutie mark is bugging me. I thought I had it figured out, it seems so familiar, I know I’ve seen it before. Puzzled out the company logo on the mail ponies from the episode “Road to Friendship”, but when I looked they had a winged arrow… It would have been an awesome easter egg/callback/tie in to the show, but no/not yet. Going to keep looking
Shorter? Well, I am definitely excited for a 30k words chapter! Thirty! You are definitely a god writer in the making!
Anyways, I suspect Cure will have a huge following the more he exposes his new limbs with no disguises. Especially being a known biomanipulator with such amazing medical work and business, he could potential spawn a fanatical cult that worships him as a god itself.
Have you considered using PurpleSmart.ai to reproduce what the whole gang looks like? I still find it hard to match half their colour schemes to their names. It is a Discord server that anyone can join and prompt the bot to produce art. It is very professionally maintained and produces amazing art qualities