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lol, Pony instincts took over for a few seconds there
I love Draft's reaction to Cure's massage! The next morning scene is just great, especially the grooming licks Cure was unconsciously doing until the third one.
I love how ambiguous it is what Brick actually does. It was mentioned that part of the business is private security, so there are legitimate, plausible reasons for Lucky to be conceal carrying and for Sunny to be injured the way she was, and it's possible they were being circumspect because of Cure's age. However, Lucky is dressed as a classic mobster and it's all real suspicious at the same time.
There's always one part of us that won't listen.
awesome chapter, the sleepover morning was just adorable
"every dam meal..." xD
Is this what happens to colts at a girl’s sleepover? I don’t think I would mind as long as lip stick and eye shadow isn’t involved.
I have no idea how to picture the cuddle pile.
This chapter's kinda fuckin weird, bro, near the end
Good chapter!
Thanks for the update and amazing work as always!
I'm a bit confused at the time scale; here, Cure is saying that Title is due in a few months, correct? Why is it then that, back in Chapter 7, according to the date header which says that was a little over a month and a half ago from this chapter, he scanned Title and was talking about how early on she is?
I'm just a bit confused, I think. I've really appreciated the slow time pacing, but I think I'm starting to get a bit lost in it, since there's a pretty large chance I'm misreading or misunderstanding something.
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This is a major error on my part early on in the story and something that I think I pointed out in at least one earlier comment. I absolutely, completely, biffed Title's pregnancy a whole lot. She should have been closer to like... 18-19 weeks at the start of the story. She's due towards the end of January, which means she got preggers around late April. I had said that spring's season is March/April, so really I just effed that all around. Sorry!
So yeah, big apology, but this is the result of me not sitting down before I started writing and doing an actual calendar. This won't really have an impact on the story other than that nagging "something isn't adding up" thing you've noticed, but between the two options I have that I've already published - one where Title is only like... 17 weeks at this point and one where she's actually due in January, which would put her closer to about 27 or so, the 17 figure just doesn't make sense on a number of fronts, so 27ish it is.
Fortunately, I think this is the last major mistake I made that wonks the timeline up. I have edited chapter 7 and included a note so that if anyone re-reads that they'll know why there was a change there. Sorry!
I will endeavor to avoid retcon bullshit like this in the future, I promise. Like I said in my note, normally when I publish something I'll have to just deal with it, but in this instance I already had said she was due in January which didn't jive with the dates back in 7.
The sleepover scene (while the parents are there) was funny as hell.
Especially the voice copying.
I imagine he used "Macho Man" Randy Savage.
(For those that don't know, search macho man on YouTube)
Yes! The best hijinks that reminds me of Saturday morning cartoons.
I'm fact I would love to see that entire scene animated.
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Thanks for the clarification regardless, I was definitely starting to get confused, so that helps a ton. Retcons or not, I'm glad you were able to address a potential "issue", story affecting or not.
I think one thing that was also confusing me was I was unsure if this world was using the equine 11 month scale, or if you were using the closer human 9 month scale.
All in all, I do really love and appreciate the date headers, the slow pacing, and the indication of how much time has passed between chapters for the sake of it. It's really nice to show such attention to detail in so many things, easily one of the things that grabbed me with this story. Looking forward towards what comes next!
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luckily no author is obligated to cater their stories to not cross the lines of what some people may find creepy or weird
if that was the case this whole site wouldn’t exist
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thanks
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Personally I feel weirded out by it but that’s just my feelings. It’s not exactly a real world situation we can practically engage with. There’s ambiguity on if he’s actually a reincarnation or if he’s just a regular kid with memories injected into him.
Either way he’s got very recent memories of being just a normal kid and he has a normal kid’s biology when it comes to his brain and presumably his endocrine system. Obviously his native instincts are intact and he’s been socialized to this point.
I figure there’s an interesting philosophical conversation in it, but it’s also likely the author is using the flirting parts for comedic intent rather than squicky stuff.
As long as nothing explicit happens and he waits until they’re older to do deeper romance stuff I figure it’s fine, despite my discomfort
Best not be vocal about his theories of the universe, especially that Celestia doesn't move the sun. Humans in the past in real life have been lynched for thinking they've figured out life's mysteries, even if centuries later they were proven right.
That last bit shows how important it is to give each character a unique way of speaking. I completely forgot who uncle lucky was until the end of this paragraph.
Aww, see, Cure? That doesn’t scream mafia family at all!
So, what you're saying is
Most pony speedrunners would be Pegasi
Cure tells the Pegasus not to use thear aura to reduce thear mass giving them a handycap to run. but it is ok for the earth ponies to use aura to grip the ground.
Unicorns have nothing to help theam run nether.
yup a totally a fair run.
No aura or magic jeast pure strength and insurance run.
Wtf is yanno
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"You know" in a dialect
:)
See he's a total mob boss. But a good one, see?
Almost let that little magic remark slip. The Cure Club will simply need to wait a little longer before more members go full.