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“Ohh yeah. Froze like a deer… err… like a foal with a hoof in the cookie jar,” he says, catching himself mid-sentence. Cure can’t remember if deer are animals or if they’re sapient, but he thinks they can possibly be intelligent beings. Either way, there damn sure aren’t any headlights around for them to get frozen in place in front of.
I have fallen in love with the story thus far and can't wait to see the what the future holds for Cure and the family. Keep up the great work.
Thanks for the update!
Loving the story so far and I will patiently wait for more.
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Derp! Thanks, fixed. Note - Author is barely sentient ~80% of the time.
Dude! I absolutely love that you are so detailed with the mechanics of spells & biology in your story.
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In the comics they are sentient.
hi. found a typo here
leans
That's a bit of a relief
If Cure is anything like the current climate Humans, it is understandable when he wants to multitask a lot of stuff at once. It would, and looks like, it had clash with pony's culture since humans need more skills to be relevant in most industry.
I was hoping some ego, either from past life or current, would make him show off more of his talent. But I will take what I can read. Especially when he has the chance to practice free reign, relatively.
It seems Cure's town is in between Manehatten and Fillydelphia. If you didn't read the comics, there is a dedicated, bipedal, dragon suburban area in Fillydelphia. It would seem like an ideal place since it is also a mostly Earth Pony town
The thing is Cure has completely forgotten the temporal differential between Equestria and the world the mirror connects to.
Sunset was there for around 4 years in the mirror before her return to Equestria here is the fun part Candace didn't know her.
Considering Candance lived in the Palace she wouldn't have needed Celestia to tell her who Sunny was when she nipped in to Steal the element of Magic.
Dawn could Be Sunset Shimmers Mother instead of Grandmother as a result.
So I wouldn't be surprised if he ends up with a Bacon haired Filly Calling him Dad.
Considering Her Family life before she got picked up By Celestia He Would be a far improvement as a sire over the original timeline.
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Was Sunset's family ever mentioned.
Shrek is love
Shrek is life.
IMO Cure totally should ask about those points, maybe about becoming an "alicorn" as well. Even if they freaked out, it would be fine given they're forced by law to keep silent. I'm not saying Cure should become an alicorn. But I am saying he should know about consequences if he'll decide to do it for some reason in the future and this was a great opportunity to learn more.
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There is a difference between a false/psudo alicorn and a real one
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It was never confirmed what the difference is though. For all Cure knows, simply having wings and a horn will activate some magic that will make him an alicorn.
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Sunset was also around the same age as Twilight (maybe a few years older). This would mean he would have to have Sunset when he is 60-70 years old.
Not impossible, but a strange age to be having children rather than spoiling grandchildren. I think it's more likely Sunset would be calling him "Grandpa," or even "Great-Grandpa."
11420034 Twilight went from Small Filly to an adult mare in her early 20's
Sunset didn't age in any significant way also the Time Differential was never measured So around 20 to one or more is quite possible
Even likely Considering Candance was in Canterlot when Twi was a little filly and never met Sunny when she lived in the palace.
The Author could write it any way he wants using that.
Good chapter, I enjoyed it
dam this in an awesome story love it so much :D
Its kinda weird he didnt mention that he could literally make himself be a unicorn when they mentioned how only unicorns could go to the medical school usually
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Some things are best left unsaid.
Your writing style is just fine, author. Lots of great humor, too.
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Consequences can be predicted only if there is a precedent.
So far such event would be a huge outside context crisis.
Ah dang. I was gonna do a 21st of September joke from Earth Wind and Fire, but we passed the date.
*imagining
What is this supposed to be?
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It's from "Et tu, Brutus?", which is supposedly what Julius Caesar said when he was being assassinated. So, a dismayed "You too?"
Can someone tell me what colors our mc is, I know he has dark brown eyes, but that always makes me confused when he talks about his appearance. So can anyone tell me what color is his coat and mane pls
Hehehe and then you are her great-great-grandfather, lol
:)
Feathers are very nice, yes
Oh, God, I would LOVE to see an omake of Celestia getting the note addressed to "Princess Burnfoal and Princess Murdernight".
The first name would make her blink.
The second is sure to give her a nervous chill down her spine--how many creatures would even know there was a second princess, and the name would be way too close to Luna/NMM!
And imagine the poor ponies caught in a compromising situation in Rm 234 when the Guard break down their door!
Also, I almost expected something to come from his staring at that Hawk/Cougar minx (nice combo, btw). She would certainly have eyes far better than what he's given himself, and so she should likely spot anything giving her a good looking over!
Easy peasy!