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Yes yes yes the chapter is up
I just, I just really really love the dynamic Celestia and Cure have here, it's just so nice.
Looking forward to next chapter though, this one was a lot of teasing and implied shenanigans we didn't get to really see.
I wonder what those two are planning? Fight training? Magic study or exploring the city So much to do so little time!
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Etiquette lessons for cure!
I don't remember but are you planning any major time skips into the future or are you planning for this to be an endurance race of a story(long one without timeskips)?
Thanks again LFOD for another amazing chapter. I always love your Cure/Celestia dialog chapters as they have such a entertaining to read dynamic with each other, and I'm interested to see how thier relationship developes throughout the story. Thanks again for all the time and dedication you put into bringing us these amazingly well written chapters and I wish you the best of luck with future ones. Cheers!
P.s. Hope you have fun with your vacation you mentioned in the A.N., you deserve it!
A short break? Panic time!
Waiting an entire week is torture, but so worth it.
awesome chapter, at the end there i can just imagine tia like a giddy filly xD
*isn't
Magnificent chapter yet again sir
So it's surfing that confirms to Celestia that Cure has knowledge nopony has.
The only question is, did Celestia know what surfing was? She only said nopony has ever done it.
I guess that bit about the surfing probably shines some light on the extent of Cure's set of memories. I suppose she could have thought they were just some snippets of future events, but without some incredibly contrived situation, how would ocean sports be relevant to the landlocked section of land Cure previously indicated? If she doesn't take his knowledge of a new sport at face value, she might catch on to the memories being about a past life.
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I think the Boss is getting wise to his shenanigans... Cure is gonna have to step up his game. (Discord would be so proud of him!)
A bit of a cliffhanger shutting us down just before the room reveal, though, feels like one of those DIY remodel shows. This also reminded me of Cure wanting to flip houses for "easy" bits earlier in the chapter.
I know that Cure read in his family to his memories, but did he fully disclose it to Celestia?
One of the really charming aspects of how they interact is that apart from previous personal students of Celestia’s, in this story since it’s the first alicorn student she’s had, and therefore most relatable due to that and Cure being Cure, this is probably also the closest she has gotten to feeling like a mom for real. Such a relief to see her excited for a chance to spoil him with his room here. Love to see that kind of bone thrown to her in stories set during the grim period of Luna’s banishment.
the Earth Pony Guard that asked for papers from Cure should be put in for promotion.
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She got a donut… does that count?
I’m getting worried, Cure’s ‘room’ may end up bigger than even his new home; bathtub bigger his bedroom; long enough to do laps in, bed big enough for a herd of Celestia sized ponies, sitting room the size of his old house, balconies, two or three floors with really tall ceilings, guest rooms, maid’s quarters… cue Robin Leach “Lifestyles of the Rich and Famous”. But then, he’s already seen Celestia’s room his last visit so maybe not SO ostentatious.
I hope you don’t skip too much, LFOD, just to get to move on to the next event. Every one of these chapters are well worth waiting for, and if Cure is still in Canterlot when you take your time off, I, for one, would not complain. I appreciate even the unscheduled talent show chapter, and the little references to events ’unseen’, like Cure’s second visit to the Saturday AM youth defense class and Sensai Silvers’ redemption sparring matches which help drive the passage of time.
I can hear the sarcasm just dropping off of this.
Absolutely delightful chapter!
I get the feeling Celestia is gonna prank Cure with an illusion on the room. Probably super girly & blazing pink on pastel pink with lots of bows & frills. Or she maybe give him a bedroom that doubles as a garden & library. I'm excited to find out what happens.
Awesome chapter. I'd like to see more of his stay in the capital.
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Or perhaps a janitor’s closet
Alright, new chapter! I think I'm as excited for a new chapter of this story as I was for new episodes of the show lol
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"Do I really have to dam?"
"Absolutely young colt! And any more backtalk and I'll add another 200 lines!"
"But-"
"That's 200, want to make it 500?"
".........."
"Good! Now go on, get started."
With a sigh, Cure picks up the chalk and starts on the 1st of now 1,200 lines he'll be writing on the blackboard.
I will not mess with my brain or anypony else's
I will not mess with my brain or anypony else's
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*their
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Nice catch, I missed that 1
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I thought to myself 'When you jinx yourself Cure, you don't do it by halves, do you?" at that line.
Has Cure considered fibreglass or is that too modern for the old-timer in his previous life?
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No Celestia might not even know about the existence of multiworld reincarnation.
Ferric’s definitely got it for Cure. Good for her! Definitely a Ferric fan.
I could see Dawn becoming a shorty. Definitely looking forward to seeing how she gets her cutie mark. I wonder if it’ll happen during the Summer Sun Celebration? Might go with her naming convention.
I am a little worried about the family and friends traveling, but that’s a little ways off and it sounds like the Princess isn’t taking any chances this time. So that’s good.
I don’t think anypony will forget about you, Princess… I wonder what pranks she’s planning for this visit with Cure. She did say that her fun of late has been somewhat limited…
Great chapter!!
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That’s what his Dam has him write.
Here’s what happened when his sire hears about it.
“But dad! Dam already made me do this!”
“And she only had you write a sentence 1,200 times. I’m making you write a paragraph.”
“But—“
“1,500 times. Sass me, and I’ll double it.”
*sighs*
I am a pony, not an eldritch abomination. My brain is not to be removed from my body for any reason. Nor shall my head be removed from the body. Doing so will likely break Dam’s heart. And a broken heart is the one thing my special talent cannot fix.
“Technically my special talent already did that for a whole family of bat ponies.”
“And technically you now have to repeat that paragraph 2,999 more times. Get writing.”
Now as for what Title will have him do…
“This has to be illegal! Clearly this is a Cruel and unusual punishment! It’s obvious Child abuse!”
“I figured this would be your reaction. Which is why I wrote to the Princess…”
“…oh no.”
“…to look into the matter.”
“Oh please no…”
“And you’re right. This would normally fall into both of those categories.”
“…is it too late to take it all back?”
“Which is why the Princess just approved by royal proclamation an exception to the law. Just. For. You.”
“…this will take days…”
“17.9 weeks. Assuming you don’t make any mistakes.”
“There’s over 100 pages!”
“And you have to copy them all, by hoof, 3,000 times. Get writing.”
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loved the celestia interaction
Should it not be swathe rather than swatch when talking about land? A swatch is a piece of fabric whereas a swathe is a large strip or area of land
Regarding the AN, the next chapter is Cure’s room. I wonder if anypony is waiting for him inside… what else can we expect to happen this day to be worth a third chapter? Selection of personal honor guard? Formal dinner with the nobility? Meeting some of his fans/ the NHA director, Waning Storm? A Pinkie Pie surprise party(wouldn’t that be random!)? What else could we possibly look forward to??? Another week to wait before we can find out, ugh, what a tease
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Knowing Celestia, it’s a prank.
What sort of prank?
There is a camera. And the room is full of various cute and adorable colt sized outfits (and dresses!) picked out at the request of his dam… it’s time for a photo shoot!
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I'm saying it is not a prank but a room that is to big that you can have his house in it and still have room for another 3 and the bathroom is the same way
Is it weird if I want Cure to turn the room visit on its head and have him being the one introducing the features to Celestia (as he sees them)
"We've arrived."
"Sweet, welcome to my pad, Boss!" Cure excitedly exclaims as he pushes open the door.
"As you can see I have nice and heavy chest of drawers, it took two earth ponies to get that in here!" Darting around he points out various objects giving various, and false, backstories to each one. "And this mirror shows what I truly desire"
Excitement at showing Cure his room thoroughly drained, and tuning out Cure's antics, Celestia raises a hoof to her face in defeat. "I'm beginning to think this was a mistake..."
Ahh, finally caught up, now I can comment.
...
...I don't know such fancy words as to describe my enjoyment of this story properly... I'll just settle for "damn fine job" then.
Thanks for the chapter.
"I am Serpentus."
"Papers?"
"I have a horn."
"Papers?"
"I have a pair of wings."
"Papers?"
"I have my cutie mark."
"Papers?"
"I can make paper."
"Papers?"
"Papers."
"Papers?"
"...Papers."
so cure invented surfing lol
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No, he didn't reveal it, he said he only reveals it to those he was in a relationship with, I think, since they deserve to know that part of him before they accept it or not.
;)
“Canterlot University Medical…”
I see what you did there!
Cure would knock himself out with his own facehoof once he figures out velcro was a biomimicry invention--which is right up his alley.
Nature had already created burdock seeds that have velcro hooks that grab animal hair so as to spread the seeds far and wide. George de Mestral investigated the seeds' properties and figured out how to duplicate them as a fastener device in fabrics. Unfortunately, it took him several decades to get rich from his invention.
Celestia: "But it's still dark in April and September. The thing about Yakyakistan is dawn and sunset happens at the same time--on just one day out of the year."
Cure: "...On the Summer Sun Celebration..."
Celestia: "Got it in one! Congrats, colt! Blink and you'll miss it. "
Cure: ""
Visiting only for the seasons? Crafty.
To bad he isn't already aware that it's based on a plant... he could easily produce it if he scanned some burs.