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I'm actually kinda glad time skips are coming up. Playing around with Panacea-powers is cool and all, and I can totally see how comparing equestria to earth makes sense, but the novelty has worn off for me and now I'd like to see you actually play with the premise instead of setting things up.
That said, this chapter was fun.
Question. Will the mane six eventually be in this story (even if it's just for a little bit)? I'm just asking because I want to see them react to Cure and his powers.
Even if they don't, I will definitely continue to read this story.
Yeah Flex those muscles for the girls
Honestly doesn’t even feel like 150k+ already, just so into it and devouring every chapter that comes out. Again thanks for the hard work you put into these!
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Agreed. With a SoL story an occasional "normal day" is fine, and the last week has been all about changes to the family's routine. At some point they have to hit a wall where it's like... "I've learned all I can about X and until Y happens there's no point bringing it up further" or something along those lines you just have... well, normal days, again. Get up, do stuff, eat, run around w/ friends, go to bed, repeat. I've specifically tried not to make it all about the BS OP biomancer stuff because then it's just a power-wank and there's a lot of those stories out there already.
I'm front loading all of the "here's the new things the family is being introduced to" so that, just for example (this won't happen), if I have the 6-months-pregnant mare snap a timberwolf into pieces like it's nothing everyone's not like "Bad writing! That could never happen!" as opposed to, "Yeah, duh. Don't melee the biomancer-enhanced super-strong TK-adept earth pony mare, preggers or not, cause she'll wreck ya."
I mean, put yourself in the situation. Step #1 is "look out for the fam" so he's doing everything he can to protect them first, and that means introducing them to a lot of new ideas and new ways to think. Also, I want to effectively show that they'll still be embracing these new ideas and taking advantage of the opportunities available to them, at least to reasonable plateau, even during a time skip.
Here's hoping I can pull it off.
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I like your optimism. I have no idea if the story will go for that long... we're 70 years before they start being born at this point. We'll see, but not any time soon.
Reminds me of that one plot thing from "Kenichi: The Mightiest Disciple". I should probably finish reading the comic one of these days
saves I like the ability of your character of an earth pony it is as if he had the genetic tonics of the bioshock game hopefully he does not end up as a splicer with so much splicing genes
Mind
Cure
The thought of them all being buff made me think of that bit in the Friendship is Manly animation by kanashiipanda where they're slow walking to Pinkie's party
So, soon we'll see a pony biomancer gigachad. I'm ready daddy.
So, did Cure ever end up reading those books on magic or runes? Or even that one on safety?
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He didn't get the rune book yet and, as for the Safety book, he'll finally give it a gander next chapter. I don't go into a lot of detail on it, so please don't get your hopes up.
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i feel lied to lol
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Fixed. Thank you. The whole Cute vs Cure thing will definitely happen again. I occasionally use a tablet to write and it always puts in Cute first, then I cuss a couple times and fix it (usually). I should really just leave them all "Cute" and do a Find & Replace all at once, but I'm kind of a dumbass sometimes, so hard way ftw.
i rushed all the way to chapter 20 in 2 days, and i love this story, cant wait to see what youll do with it
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No problem and don't worry, everyone messes up writing, even veterans who've been writing most of their life. The amount of times I've written something, proof read it and been like "wtf did I just write?" The fact that all is wrong is a few tiny spelling errors shows how good you are
At least you're not having to use a typewriter
Thanks for the update and amazing work as always!
Im surprised he hasn’t met a changeling yet, also I can’t stop thinking about the Mc flexing so hard a literal shockwave erupts from his body from the force anime style.
I quiet like slice of life stories, so I'd be fine with a 500k story
no escape...
He could add some 'secondary brains' to solve this problem. Not true brains, but little blobs of neural tissue designed only for processing sensory input.
100%, now. Ponies really should have an evolutionary adaptation to keep them from asking such questions.
Phrasing, ladies
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yeah i had some funny thought's on that one too
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SUS!!
I mean…
Technically, HiE’s are isekai stories. Not all of them are sexual based anime, theres that one where a guy gets turned into a kid in another world and has the ability to control slimes. Forgot the name but still.
Fun chapter. :D
Cure, they have them, but in a different spot...
Help, my sides. Normally I wait to catch up before commenting, but this joke is great!
I bet he looked like he was in a Baki panel
Ah, so it wasn't bug smell LOL.
If pegasus ponies can puff up, Shirley earth ponies can do something similar, right? 😈
Deed is right though, he's attracting all the ladies!
Before, zero. But the minute you says something like that, the odds go up to about 100.
Rising MVP, fr.
AWWW, CUTE.
This is my favourite chapter so far. Seeing Cure interact with people instead of talking at people, and seeing him behave less serious than usual. Very fun
I... won't say I'm not confused, now. They said for a while that it was normal and ok for him to use his talent, then suddenly when they were gonna go to the rodeo it was a bad idea, but now it's always ok to do it again. I mean, I understand the worry of someone noticing, but that was brought up after his parents said it was a bad idea. idk, I'm reading into it too much.