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Good chap! I had no idea what he was trying to do with the dragon welp. Did not expect a pull-my-finger joke.
Nice
While Cure tries to manage his secret identity as Prince Serpentus, his secret persona, Edward Weaver, continues to be a source of angst.
Celestia, get this colt some therapy.
This was so much fun, love the interaction with the dragon whelp. Just like kids, chest bumping, dare throwing, then great friends. Hope Cragle shows up at the market!
Threw me for a little loop here, but realized Cure keeps his wings hidden when in “earth pony” mode
Another amazing chapter!
WOW those 2 cops almost died frome fright from theat 📜 wean that read it then the little argument with the dragon welp and how that got more dragons to come and wach the pony eat super hot 🍗 like it was nothin
I am shocked that you didn’t use Delamare River. Because where does a fillydelphia come from? De la (from the) mare.
Delhi and Delphi aren’t even connected beyond the phonetic and spelling similarities.
Fart jokes will never not be funny to me. Yes, I am a child, why do you ask?
Cure shows incredible restraint when dealing with these tribalist ponies, but something tells me he might lash out hard on some poor bastard eventually.
I can remember watching the movie, The Money Pit, as a teen, thinking it was absolutely hilarious. Now having a house of my own for decades, that movie is a cautionary tale of dire warning to everyone. Seriously. If it can break, it will at the worst time and try to take as much with it as it can-- one year the garage door broke, then hot water heater, then the washing machine, then the dish washer, and finally ending with the HVAC going kablooie. A string of expensive stuff going from one end of the house to the other. Yeesh!
As for a cheating pony like Cure, he probably should learn more about the wider world he's been living in. Just because you can doesn't mean you should or have to when somepony can be hired to do it for you. That being said, I still waffle over flying, driving, or rental-driving to a convention in TX, 900 miles from where I live. It's all about the same cost and each method has its benefits/headaches.
Cure fiber optic upgrade when?
And I can't help but wince in sympathy for those hapless cops, even if it's satisfying to see Cure flex his authority.
They're just doing their job, ticketing a (near as I can tell) legitimately unloicensed pony-transport and grilling a suspected foal-abuser, when a surprise snake-in-the-grass Serpentus suddenly strikes!
What's a pony supposed to do?
Yeah, 'nuff said.
Sure, when you've got a hammer, every problem looks like a nail, but having a wide range of utility'll probably be needed eventually.
Awesome chapter, can't wait to see how the stall goes
Dragon biology here we go, it is as they say "Always be yourself, unless you can be a dragon, then be one."
So... Cheesecake Factory is his second restaurant project? I could easily see Celestia becoming a regular customer when it opens.
<<Ah! Kch~k you’re breaking up… can’t.. -ear you… of range kch~k love you dam!>>
Intramural hoofball tournament championship game this year featuring: Celestia’s School for Gifted Unicorns vs Serpentus’ Super School for the Sciences.
Cure might need to look into getting a secretary for errands and paperwork.
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Customer? Try “permanent resident.”
awesome chapter, love all all of it :D
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His own Raven Inkwell? Makes me curious who Celestia's major domo is right now. If it was brought up in the early chapters I've forgotten.
And doesn't Cure already have some law firm and accountant? (I could be mixing up stories tho)
Huh dragons running foundries makes perfect sense once you put it in there. Now I just can’t shake the image of a dragon just casually sticking a talon into a glowing crucible of molten steel swirling it around and then licking the molten metal from its claw and saying something like “needs more Manganese“.
Kinda hope he comes back. Cure needs a buddy that gives zero shits about his pony stuff and can snark/fight/argue back with him.
He's thinking with portals, isn't he?
Boy lotta tribalism to deal with over in the big city. With all that I nearly forgot about poor Cloud Candy, who hopefully just has a coltfriend who is having a bad day, and not actually anything worse.
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Cure can deal with the racism directed at him. He can hold himself back and compose himself when any of his mom’s tell him they can handle it.
I feel sorry for the poor soul who tries to pull that nonsense with his dam.
On a unrelated note, I hope Cure and Craggle actually strike up a genuine friendship. The banter/bluster between the two of them was fun.
As for Cure’s princely persona… I’m pretty sure this was the first time one of his parents saw him like this. And it definitely disturbed Title. Couple that with how Title observed Cure reacted to his memories of a past life, I wouldn’t be surprised at all if she’s the first of his parents to become concerned for his mental health.
I am also not surprised one bit that Cure pulled rank to get his mom out of potential legal trouble. The real question will be how Celestia responds to it once she finds out.
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I could see Ferric eventually getting a job working with/alongside some of those Fillydelphia dragons in some level.
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Agreed on Cure & Craggle developing their friendship. I noted the descriptions of Craggle and his mom and am wondering if there's a potential connection to Spike. Just how many episodes did Ed see, and would he remember Molt Down? Might it be an encounter with the roc involving Craggle's and his mom during his molt be how Celestia ends up holding onto Spike's egg for Twilight's test?
Acne treatments are probably fine. Scar cream is probably fine. Topical treatments for bruises and sore muscles are basically pain relievers. Though he may want to just focus on relieving the pain. Actually healing bruises could very well help to hide domestic abuse.
Graying/thinning hair is cosmetic. As much I wish it weren’t. He’ll probably want to stay away from that one.
You know, he could probably make a fortune if he developed and sold daily a daily multivitamin for both kids and adults that only gives out the vitamins they are lacking. He could probably work something out.
He could probably develop a whole new toothpaste and mouthwash that:
1) can actually be swallowed.
2) outright halt tooth decay until a dentist can fill the cavities.
He might want to steer clear of developing medications that do anything more complex than that without collaborating with a pharmaceutical company. I know one of them just tried to steal his trees, but the scientists they employ know more about the topic than he does. Especially about side effects and potential dangerous drug combinations.
And once your identity becomes known, all your customers will be gushing about how they were a customer of Prince Serpentus.
I’m still sure not even you know the full extent of your abilities.
Delamare would have been the better fun. Especially since the river runs through the city of Fillies.
I wouldn’t be surprised at all if Discord knows that. I am sure he gets immense amusement just from watching Cure’s antics as every creature the young Alicorn meets slowly but surely realizes just how out classed they are.
Which is hysterical when you remember thanks to Cure, Title is probably one of the fittest and healthiest mares in Equestria. I guess old habits die hard. :P
So The Cheesecake Factory will be Cure’s next business venture.
Or Cure founds Equestria’s version of the National Biscuit Company (Nabisco) and starts making a killing by producing junk food that’s actually healthy. Starting with Oreos.
Come to think of it, he would need to do both to make Oreo Cheesecake a reality in Equestria. Of course after he does so, Celestia would probably have a Cheesecake Factory open in the castle… for the castle staff of course.
Sunny Skies is seen there just about every night for an evening slice.
According to TDR’s Twilight Gets a Puppy, that’s the translation of The Sparkle Family motto.
He is 9 years old with the powers of a god. I would be shocked if he didn’t make a spectacle.
I want Cragle to join Cure’s friend group. The personality clashes will be epic!
The editor needs pictures of Spider-Pony. The editor’s two best reporters clearly have a fling going on. Though how one of them stays his top reporter is beyond him due to the latter’s frequent bathroom disappearances.
714? 4848? Looks like Cure almost got swept up in the Dragnet.
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714 Joe Friday? Joyful Friday?
But who is other one?
What 1 to 5 chapters are the best to reread???
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I agree with developing a friendship with craggle. I think cure need a more... Savage friend. I think he needs to be able to become a big scawi beast and have a "fight" in the dirt.
Who I mentally viewed in that scene.
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Sherman T. Potter.
I hope that cure and the dragon kid become friends. Than he has a long living friend bro.
I wonder if some of those “abandoned” homes along the coast show up for Cure to flip, or to even build his “summer palace”. I’d certainly love one of those for myself… I’d expect the land to be cheap
Then the thought occurred to me, Title is in an enclosed cab during the flight, did Cure put a voicebox speaker under the seat or was he yelling loud enough to be heard over the wind noise and through the window?
It would have been funny if the other cop tried to “tow” Cure’s cab while the first was writing the ticket, impounded for being unlicensed, and besides having trouble getting harnessed, just COULDN’T get it to move.
Don’t know if Cure caught the comment from Diamond, but the Governor holds a gem festival every month? Is that like the dragons food gems or Cure’s enchanting gems (why not both, both, both sounds good. Nod)? With the lower prices quoted in the store, I’m surprised he didn’t stock up with a few more higher gems too. And why not “mix and match” his ad a little? Get a full page ad just the Sunday before his visit, rotate which side note creature gets excluded with different days editions… Invite some executives in for “treatments” in exchange for discounts. He could have put a little more effort at the paper and come out with a better ad campaign
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I like the stuff between about 28 and 36 for “young” Cure
50 & 51 to explore flight
57 & 58 for some “romance”
59-65 for Celestia and ascension
Then I like to reread the two or three most recent chapters.
This story is much like the TV series and rewatching episodes is as entertaining as the first watch, plus I get to catch the little things that went unnoticed the first time
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Cure is 9 and the idea of mixing and matching probably didn’t cross his mind since he was fuming at the sticker price.
As for buying up land for a summer palace. It may be cheap now, but I wouldn’t be surprised at all if the price skyrockets after Prince Serpentus buys land and the rich elite of the country got wind of it.
Probably wouldn’t take too long for the “Newport Rhode Island” of Equestria to be founded.
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You forget, he can just de-age anyone with his power now.
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The inverse of that is also true.
That was great, I am delighted by both the cop and whelp encounters.
I enjoyed this chapter very much. I much appreciate the little conflicts you put here and then. I love it when he's more mature personality comes out and his reactions are priceless. Love it.
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When buying landing for Disney World in Florida, Walt Disney predicted the same thing happening. That's why he created multiple fake companies to buy all the land in the area through multiple parcels over time.
Nobody was the wiser and that's how Disney World came to exist. They still have enough land from their original purchase to build at least 6 more theme parks. Unlike Disneyland in California, there's no way for it to expand because all the land around it was bought after it's early success.
When Disneyland tried to buy more land to expand and build Disney California Adventure theme park, the price was ridiculous, they said "Fuck that!" And built on top of Disneyland's original parking lot.
I love the word building so much!
Who knew cabs/carts needed to have a license? Not Cure.
Also I want to point out that Cure broke the law again by forging a fake "license plate" as they left. Also against Celestia's whishes for him to not fake official documents.
Counterfeit detectors!
Makes me wonder what kind of anti counterfeit measure are taken on the various denominations of bits. Do 1 bits have anti counterfeit measures? What values does it start at and so on... All this has nothing to do with the story, but I love this stuff.
Those abandoned houses along the coast. I wonder if more solitude creatures would enjoy living in them, like dragons, minotaurs, griffons, etc.
Title Search is my favorite character in this story. Ok third favorite character in this story (beside Cure and Celestia).
I love her sense of humor, I love her trying to be the grown-up, I love how she enjoys all foods and gets teased for it, I love how she's always down to be part of a (mostly harmless) prank.
But I also love her spirit in willingness to try new things with Cure (like flying.)
I don't think the rest of Cure's family knows how much it means to him that he can use his talents for them. Sure, they did the body modifications, but Title was the only one to volunteer to fly with Cure (even though he repeatedly told them that flying was the best).
Oreo cheesecake? I only ever had strawberry and chocolate mini cheesecake at a buffet in Brainerd, MN so I never heard of Oreo.
All I could think of during the chaos in the newsroom is this.
I shall read this because it seem interesting (GOD I LOVE READING)
Gaining notoriety through challenging a dragon! 😂 can't turn his head and cough without getting noticed it seems.
"They would go there and share one ‘cause they were so dense and huge they’d both be sick of they got their own."
Be sick if they
Just another error I noticed.