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This is a tale of a drake wishing to become more.

Spike hands in his two weeks resignation to Twilight. Spends some time working for Fluttershy. Then the agency comes to request him often.

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Update it every day for a full 7 months.

Huh. That will be the most selfish "good luck" for a challenge I'll ever give.

Good luck! :pinkiesmile:
I like it so far

It's about time that Spike does something good other than being an assistant.

Update it every day for a full 7 months.

holy crap.
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what this guy said. good luck dude

you'll need it

Comment posted by MythrilMoth deleted Apr 16th, 2017

The gut. The only true way for any women to woo her man.
Like it so far, though more descriptors for spike! Still thought he was a tiny baby dragon even after you explained it!

Comment posted by FamousLastWords deleted Apr 16th, 2017

Well she's being an immature bitch.

Woah, that's a different take on the situation, usually it's all sunshine and lolipops when he decides to leave. Glad to see this take a different path.

Now to find a place to call itself home.

I can see this going two ways based on the title

option A

Or the more likely Option B the one we all want to see

6729369 I swear to god Twilight had some head damage after season one and before season two the mare from the ticket, Zeccora, and Winter Wrap up wouldn't be this stupid. Still a bit of a bitch though, Spike drowning in frozen water and the second ticket was Spike's being the examples.

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with the original two tickets, didn't Spike say he didn't want one as it was too 'frou frou' and that he did not want to go?
check between 2:17 to 2:22

Spike's gonna get whacked?!?

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Nah, Spike's gonna get recruited by a super secret agency because of his power.

That plans on taking advantage of his insecurities and unhappiness.

So might not actually be that cool.

6743878 Yeah, but how long is he just going to do their bidding before he starts to question their motives or goals?

6743924 or option B take over the place

its seems no matter what Spike does, he is always going to be used by someone.

God damn it! spike youer back to square one but with just a different view lol

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Kiiinda
but think of it this way
Spike kinda did not have a choice with Twilight he was born into serving Twilight
Spike chose to go to Flutters, sure she is letting him stay
but it is HIS choice now to work

He need help from Momlestia.

6751319 alot of people say he never had a chose but he can litarly talk to the leader of Theyer country at anytime.

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mmm true to true
the only reason i can think of is that he just has never thought about calling Celestia, but that is a little to simple...
maybe that since Twilight birthed him she 'had' control over him like a mother?
it just depends on the authors Canon if Twilight, Celestia, or someone else being Spikes mother for a time.
even if he mail her what 'COULD' Celestia do?
Sure she could take Spike back,, but that does not solve anything for Spike

so... he's part of a dragon slaying cult? or is he part of a slave ring? I guess we won't know until MUCH later, if at all

Spike really did just... stop being one assistant and start being another, didn't he?

I guess he did want to be treated well, not to never be an assistant, but it still seems like he was all ready to seize another role, only to fall into the same one with another pony.

Let's hope the prices aren't chicken feed.

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I do believe that the horse knows as Twilight Sparkle is a phychopathic, maniacal, uncontrollable, mentally askew, megalomaniac who believes that child abuse is legal. She's insane. The smarty pants incident can attest to that.
At the end off the epusode, you can infer that spike indeed wanted the ticket, but was too embarrassed or shy or something to admit it. I still don't understand how come as soon as Twilight sends the letter, Sunbutt has seven tickets instantly ready. I really think the tickets should have names printed on them. What if one is stolen? Would it say

Twilight Sparkle and her friends are hereby invited to the GGG

? Would they not let spike go because he is treated like a pet?


Dunno.

The Butterscotch Pegasus

Lavender Unicorn Syndrome.

Great chapter. Very in character and well written. Excited for more.

Not a bad chapter. The chatter with Applejack seems a bit forced, though I'm a sucker for the ribbion seen. I know this is a rushed tale, but if you could slow down the pace, and make us feel. Then we would be more connected to the cast.

nice chapter hopefully twilight will stop acting like a jerk

Damn it, Fluttershy is just best pony right now. Am I sensing FlutterSpike in the story?

Is Applejack being sly, or is she really just oblivious as to that Spike hasn't been in the library, and even before that he was being asked to stay in the library nearly constantly by Twilight?

Or is AJ only talking about since Spike left, and I was thinking of some other story where Twilight kept Spike in the library a lot.

Great chapter. Liking the FlutterSpike.

Despite the grammar errors, this fic is awesome, you have my attention.

6816235 Thank you, sir. I have an editor on the mistakes; please stay tuned for the next chapter.

“Oh, but I’ll still have five afterwards.”

um... does she have another friend I don't know about, or did you accidentally add herself in her group of friends?

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well she DOES sound kinda deranged right now
maybe she added smartypants

and she wondered why Spike wanted to leave her. :twilightangry2: = bitch

twilight is being stupid but on the plus side flutterspike!!!

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