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The Soviet Turtle


I'm Australian, a dragon fan, and I like to shot things in video games. If that's not a short description of me then I don't know what is.

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Seven years after an incedeint with Spike. The mane six, the CMC and the princesses take a ride on a galleon. Which is soon taken over by an enemy ship. They take the ponies in board and plan to hold them captive for ransom, leaving the crew on small rowing boats. It seems there dates are sealed. Until a Drake, his ship and crew board the ship. It will be a very interesting week's ride home.

Proofread by StarBrony3

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 84 )

Another good story. I wonder what happened between Spike and the Mane Six.

How did this story slip pass me :pinkiehappy: cuze I love it but question are they anthro because some scenes seem Luke they are while others seem like they aren't :applejackunsure: but still love it :heart::moustache:

5727149 no there not. they're the normal cartoon version

5728304 that makes it kinda hard to see if they are shooting guns and swinging swords but I still like it:twilightsmile:

I Love it man keep up the amazing work

Why do I get the feeling that it's a case of distrust and abandonment when it comes to the strife (and that's saying it nicely) between Captain Spike and the Mane 6?? Obviously it doesn't seem that he has issue with either the princesses or the CMCs, just Twilight and the other Bearers.

The first few paragraphs apparently have a much younger Spike as pretty much an errand boy while Twilight was.....well Twilight. We probably have to see more of his past to completely understand the present contempt for them.

I want more, i need more. pweese and tank you

this is really good please oh please write more

Needs a bit of work. There were multiple grammar mistakes and incorrect punctuation. Also the drama started way too fast. I didn't get a chance to understand much before they were attacked and became slaves.

Although the premise is rather good. I'll continue reading and comment more as I go.

Well the story has caught my attention. I am rather curious to what made Spike despise the main six. I have a small idea, but I will need at least one more chapter of info to make an accurate assumption.

Also the grammar still needs work. Just about the same amount of mistakes as the last chapter.

Cool. And I'm trying to guess what made Spike leave the group. Maybe he killed the guy from the wanted poster? I don't know, We'll see, right?

nice chapter! more please!

They don't trust him huh? Well for Spike that feeling is DEFINITELY mutual.

I really love this story and I can't wait for more and I can't wait for more of some you other stories

This is back?! Yus. I cant wait for more

YEEEEEEESSSSSS!!!!!!! Its Back!!! After over a year of waiting, Spike The Pirate is continuing!! Great story, hope to see more...

Have some moustaches :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache:

6158571 Hopefully we'll get another soon. I honestly didn't expect the third one myself.

And I'm done. Not doing that forgiveness garbage, nnope.

How come we still don't know what Spike did. You would have thought we would have known by now. WHAT THE BUCK DID HE(allegedly)DO?

I personally like the fact of how your pacing the time of when we learn what happened because we get to think of all kinds of ideas and I like it. I'm just waiting for the next chapter and I love Sweetie Belle singing sea chanteys

I like how spike still nice to the cmc but how tall is spike by this point I'm guessing he's at least as tall as celestia I hope that's how tall he is

This needs to happen:

7079017 As much as i love seeing Tim Curry play a pirate captain, i don't think that would fit into the story involving a world with no humans. Sorry, but i do agree it needs to happen.

UPDATE IS NEEDED NOW! please :fluttercry:

really that ending just really but I do like the way you made the zebra crew member related to Zacora its a nice touch :ajsmug:

ahahahahaaahah! nice whens the next chapter!

I completely forgot about this story.........
Sorry:fluttershyouch:

Awesome! Looks like the love interest has been introduced, unless this is the kind of thing where she secretly does that to mess with him while actually being a cold-hearted demon. Not like that'll happen. Anywho, nice progression of events. Onwards!

Don't tell me that Spike's potential love interest is Minty. Yes, the G3 MLP pony Minty...because I truly think that is her...

EDIT: I checked on Derpibooru; unless there is a hell of a curveball here that not even Joey Bats could hit for power effectively, the description of the new pony that pretty much tackled Spike is no other than Minty. Wow, indeed...:rainbowderp::twilightoops:

Talk about coming completely out of the blue with this...damn...:applejackconfused:

Man, I didn't remember this piece of gold! Good to see an update!

Thelordofchaos is correct, we all need more chapters to this story.
:ajbemused:

MOAR YE SKIRVY DOG!! MOAR!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage:

I wanna know the name of that sea song ,please.

It's catchy as fuck.

yarr ho ho ho and somting about rum.:applejackconfused:

You know I have one thing to say and only one thing and you will listen to me.

I like this.

That is all.

“Know that spike’s pirate marefriend boarded our ship and went to go talk to spike about bouncy bouncy fun times or taking us away and he said she could have him as a teddy for three days; and that a Minotaur named Bertha who had a crush on Rese chased him around the ship for a kiss, and now spike’s marefriend's has gone and Rese is lying down in bed?”

I had to make that line coherhent--there was no way to understand that statement otherwise. More props to you if you were able to see what Pinkie said w/o having to retype it, and kudos to the one that actually typed this. It would definitely be something that Pinkie would do or say.

And to be honest, I'm a little surprised that none of the Mane 6, the Princesses, or even the CMCs did even have little emotion when out of the blue, it shows that Spike found love (or at least lust) in a fellow pirate. I would expecting at least Sweetie Belle having a little discomfort of realizing Spike is pretty much taken after all the period of his disappearance, but I guess that could be addressed in future chapters.

Great chapter, I,m glad you are bad. Spike is so good in this story.

YES IT'S ALIVE :pinkiehappy:

and I agree with Spike ;Twilight cant say she's worried or cares for him if she and the others sent him away :ajbemused:

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