Know your mare, know your mare, know your mare...
Among the decimated debris and scattered remains of the stage, a creature unlike any other before stood; orange hue antlers standing proudly on his head.
Thorax...
Looks a lot different then what I imagined...
"Uh, well... What did you imagine?"
Small...
Black...
Easier on the eyes...
Those palettes are SO last season...
"Sorry. I sort of changed colors without a say on what new colors I'd get."
Thorax...
Is pro-white washing...
"I didn't say that."
Thorax...
Says "get with the program, or get bent"...
"Now I definitely didn't say that! Who's citing these sources?"
Thorax...
Does not even have a thorax...
"Well, actually, a 'thorax' on a Changeling is actually their--Why is there a pony sweeping over there?"
"Hey. This ain't about me. This is about you..."
Her mommy had a fit...
So now she's cleaning up...
Thorax...
Would rather give love to strangers over his own mommy...
"I-I wanted to share the love! But... Queen Chrysalis wouldn't have it."
Oh yeah? Let's test that.
"Test--?"
Queeny!
With a loud bang, the stage doors crashed open to invite a fuming figure poised like a bull to its mark. Her horn flickered with visible green bolts of lightning as steam fumed out from her nostrils. "There you are! You little traitor!"
Before another word could escape Thorax, a bolt of lightning struck his chest and sent him flying off and across the stage, soon followed by the Queen of Changelings in a blinded rage.
"I just cleaned up!"
I love a happy ending...
Now you know...
What's left of him...
Thorax.
...I hope the Trixie and Starlight don't hear about this...
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That last line of Discord's...XD
7689350 I was about to submit the story, but then it crossed me: "Oh! Discord actually knows Thorax..."
7689426 I know I just told those two, but that goes for everyone. Enough.
The ride never ends.
Despite this being tagged complete.
Poor Sunset. "I just cleaned up!"
Run, Thorax, run!
I kind of get lost (again!) which voice belongs to who.
Is here somewhere an explanation or something?
What kind of "mother" starves her own children? Care to explain that, Chrysalis?
Poor Thorax But yeah, what 7689350 said
You might wanna remove the 'the' in the last line, though.
7689944 Bold is to Discord, italic is to Chrysalis, underline is to Pipsqueak, and red is to Sunset
7690110 No starting things here. Please.
7689791 It is complete. The story can end wherever you want.
7690338 You have not done Starlight yet though.
7690347 Why would that stop it from being completed?
7690338
But- But then I'll miss some of your genious!
7690410 And that's why people keep reading. To some, it's over after a few dips in. Others just want to keep popping them like Pringles.
7690392 Because you have done everyone else. Oh, and Sunburst now.