A slightly more realistic take on the "Human in Equestria" story concept.

... For a given value of "realistic."

Okay, it's barely realistic but it is a hell of a lot of fun...

Now with an image graciously provided by Page Turner, and an audiobook version narrated by multifanficaday and if you prefer it in German, FrankyDoodle has got you covered!

And a TVTropes Page!

Last Featured: 11/26/2019! Thank you so much!

Follow Jason as he attempts to cope with his immortality, not to mention waking up in a world run by ponies!

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Have you ever woken up somewhere you don't recognize? I have, once before. This time was not all that different. Headache? Check. Dry mouth? Check. Upset stomach? Check. Hooves? Uhm, that one is new.

Hi, I'm Bruce and I'm 32. Currently, I'm in a light blue Earth Pony foal's body no one has ever seen before. The rest of Equestria thinks I'm 9 and something really traumatic happened to me. It doesn't help I swear like a sailor and I could really go for a smoke right about now. I just hope that the Everfree Forest, rampaging monstrosities, evil dark abominations against God and the Cutie Mark Crusaders don't kill me before I have just one last drag.

Oh, and ponies are hella creepy when you really think about it. Geez.

A little comedy side project. EDIT: HAHA Main project. More characters to be added if I get that far. Categories might be refined as I write. Entire thing is unplanned except vaguely. Don't Expect excessive cursing to be written out, just hinted at. Oh, and as the character is a 30-ish year old in the body of a 9 year old, sexual jokes might exists but sex itself will not occur.

Special thanks to user Momomojito for the awesome-tastic picture! First fanart, I'm so HAPPY. I've gotten more since then! I should collect it all here. Collected!

This story is a sequel to Memory Pending

The story of Moon Mender continues after his dream of an ending ceases. He continues his struggle to belong in a world so far divorced from the only other experience he can remember, but as an outsider of truly alien mindset, will he ever be able to find a place in Equestria? More importantly, will the life he left behind give up on its death grip so easily? The most important thing to remember is that things are rarely as they seem and sometimes, some things are better off forgotten.

This story is a direct sequel to Memory Pending. Without having read that, this story might be a little strange to most, which is frightening considering how strange it is already. It can be read as a standalone story of course, but you won't get the most out of it.

Further, I’m fully aware that not everypony enjoys more mature themes, so any scenes containing things of an M rated nature shall only be released in a separate story when the time comes. This story deals with more mature themes on a whole, as a warning. This version will do its best to censor the really sensual or graphic content out, of course.

Last but not least, this story has reached this final format through combined efforts of not just myself, but many a helpful pony along the way! Here’s an abbreviated list of those involved and the rolls they played:
Kiroberos – Author (Obviously)
Julia – Editor (Corrections, Grammar, and Flow)
Azu – Beta Reader (Corrections, Flow) (Until Chapter 35)
ExplosiveBrohoof – Beta Reader (Grammar) (Until Chapter 22)
Muffinking – Beta Reader (Corrections, Grammar) (Until Chapter 22)
All of my readers for being amazing, supportive, and best of all, enjoying the world we read and write about.

During a traumatic event, an outsider finds himself flung violently into Equestria. His physical form is warped into that of the inhabitants but will his mentality follow? And even more importantly, will anypony truly accept him for who he is? Take a journey alongside this inexperienced youth as he finds himself in a strange new world with very different customs and tries his hardest to find a place for himself where he didn't before. A pity he can't even remember his name...

Okay, the basics. It's first person almost entirely. Very, very long chapters. I try to wrap them up around twelve to thirteen pages but a few slipped over that, especially towards the end. I'll release them slightly stagnated, as I'll be making final revisions as I go. Character tags are NOT final. I'll add more main characters as they show up in each chapter. Expect an update one or two times a week, probably. I adore reviews and structured, constructive criticism. Even if you just want to say you like it, that's fine too. :) I write stories to entertain peoples, so any evidence I get that it's working will encourage me. I hope you enjoy the story!

A mysterious group of men has been kidnapping young women and turning them into ponies against their wills to sell them as slaves to some of the corrupt rich for profit. One such victim has been turned into a purple unicorn pony and was dubbed Twilight Sparkle by her captors. She has resigned herself to her fate as a pony slave and was awaiting the day for IT to happen... That is until the man who bought her has no such plans for her...

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This is an Alternative Universe where the mane cast are originally human but were turned into their pony forms. Each chapter will begin with a transformation of the character who has the more prominent role in the current one and most of the plot happens afterwards, that way if you don't like transformations or view them as a fetish (when it really isn't in this case), you can skip it and continue with the story at hand.
While I did add Adventure to the tags, the characters don't really travel that much, but since there isn't a Mystery and Drama category in this site (which is what this story is), I had no choice but to use this tag for the both of them.

I forgot to introduce myself, my name is Red Bomber here, but my actual internet name is Guilrel and I am the actual author of this Dark Alternative which is based off on Toongrowner's ideas of Dark Alternative Universes and I got his permission to post the story here. The reason I didn't do this before because I was a closet brony I didn't want to let my watchers know that I like the show too, especially since my first fanfic to the show is a story like this. I was actually afraid of losing them because alot of people just do that to the authors and artists they're watching and go "Oh no. Not you too." and then de-watches them. But now I don't really care about that anymore and I'll go into more detail about this on my own journal. Anyway about the nature of this story, while this isn't a clopfic, I feel like that this is the furthest almost mature story I've ever written and I'm afraid of how many people will not like it. But I have to accept it that this will happen and I hope I'll actually have the heart to finish what I started. Because I really wanted help Toongrowner expand his idea and he's a really nice friend of mine for a while now, I can't really let him down now that I'm this far.

Please view the stories in our individual galleries as well.
Toongrowner (My Provider and the one who thought of it all):
Chapter 1: http://toongrowner.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Alternative-My-Little-Slave-Ch-1-277696514
-Chapter 2-
Part 1: http://toongrowner.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Alternative-My-Little-Slave-Ch-2-part-1-302867563
Part 2: http://toongrowner.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Alternative-My-Little-Slave-Ch-2-part-2-302867753
Part 3: http://toongrowner.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Alternative-My-Little-Slave-Ch-2-part-3-302867983

Me (Guilrel The Author):
Chapter 1: http://guilrel.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Alternative-My-Little-Slave-Ch-1-304382847
-Chapter 2-
Part 1: http://guilrel.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Alternative-My-Little-Slave-Ch-2-Part-1-3-304385451
Part 2: http://guilrel.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Alternative-My-Little-Slave-Ch-2-Part-2-3-304385954
Part 3: http://guilrel.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Alternative-My-Little-Slave-Ch-2-Part-3-3-304386294

(Side Stories) A mysterious company is going around towns and cities and are transforming girls into ponies to sell them as slaves for depraved people. These are the stories of these poor victims and how they cope with the changes.
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(Deleted Scenes) These are parts of the story that were left off or cutaway from the main story because I felt they are either too weird or too out of place to fit in the main story. Because of this I'll be taking some liberties to change a few lines to make them sillier despite some of the dark tone of this story has along with the other side stories.

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(X): Means Deleted scenes
(SS): Means Side Stories

This will also be the first time that I will be literally writing down stories directly in the chapters sections even though it's only for the deleted scenes. There are two more reasons why I'm doing this. First: is to get inspiration, since I haven't been motivated to do the story recently due to my current nightly activities and the work I had to do for College, so I've been too tired to do except maybe writing down huge speeches like this. Maybe if I work on this while trying to sleep properly I'll be motivated to get Dark Alternative done sooner. The second reason is that I wanted to have a place to put the sidestories in when I'm ready to do them after chapter 3 is done. Speaking of chapter 3, Toongrowner and I have placed a preview for it in our Deviantart pages here http://guilrel.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Alternative-My-Little-Slave-Ch-3-Prvw-WIP-323293541 and here http://toongrowner.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Alternative-My-Little-Slave-Ch-3-preview-323258924 . There's this particular story that I want to write but it's not in the main story. I'll write the side stories when I'm done with chapter 3. I think... that's it I hope you enjoy the stories I will be writing in here. (Prominient main characters will be added when their side story is made, until it basically everything else). Also even though Sex is the subject for most of the conversations characters have, there are NO SCENES that involve them. Sorry cloppers, it's not that kind of fic (This extra series and the main one).

Cole Macgrath, the demon of Empire City, had been captured by Vampires and taken to their queen Bloody Mary. She turned him into a Vampire to use him but she left him to roam and destroy her children. Upon 'defeating' her in a crypt and burying the Vampires of New Marais with her. He gets transported to Canterlot and finds out that he is still a Vampire.

A guy named Gale falls from the sky and lands near ponyville. Twilight saw what looked like a falling star, then gets her friends to go check it out. Gale is a Werewolf with a good amount of control over his inner beast, but he is a Vampire as well, that can resist the thirst to a degree and feeds off of animals, other Vampires, and other Werewolves. But what will the six think of him if they find out. Oh yeah, forget to inform that his lovey dovey, easily made jealous, Vampiric little sister Reassa comes into the picture sometime as well.

first fanfiction, please be gentle. I'm new to the whole writing thing... so yeah. if it suck, tell me, if it's GOOD then please tell me.

When a human end up in Equestria he find himself in the company of Lyra and Twilight how will things turn out and why is there a human how did he get there time will tell...

Note: this is my first fanfic i have ever written... ever so any advice would be nice and if i tagged it wrong please let me know thanks also the OC characters in this story are ones i created/made up other than Broadsword who is one of my friends rated Teen for some of the lines in this wasn't sure so played it safe

The cover art was done by JPTrixie-Fan