This is a story about a sheep. A little sheep, locked deep in prison, put there by ponies. He doesn't want to be there, but then he's had to do a lot of things he doesn't want to. It's a shame he deserves to be in there.
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I have a bad feeling about this. Like something bad is going to happen during their travels.
Hmm I would say you forgot crystal ponies, but they haven’t been found yet
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It the ISND what could possibly go wrong?
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Well, we used to have train robbers.....
2 new recruits, 2 weeks in the wilderness, a unicorn and prey..... I can only see good things happening!
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Ah classic Prey. Well it's pretty clear they're bringing a living time bomb with them. This is going to get ugly fast, isnt it.
Hah, they won't have to deal with an upstart brat ruinning a year-long load of work, so that's a thing.
Pleasant chapter as always.
Poor, poor Lilly. I feel like something horrible is going to happen to her. I just know her attitude wont stay as is.
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As proofreader I take responsibility for those mistakes.
However, I stand by "area name" -it's a thing. The name of a mountain range, for instance
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Yeah, and the kirins, but as you say, they don't know those exist yet. 😇
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Precisely. What could possibly go wrong? Like, at all? In the long history of the ISND and simple missions, when has anything ever gone wrong? 🤣
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*Tune in next time for the next thrilling instalment of "Bad Luck", now airing on "Real Life isn't Fair!" in two weeks time!*
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*Get your tickets while you still can!*
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Thank you once again for helping me by responding and pointing those things out to me. I have gone and corrected what shouldn't have been there in the first place. Thanks.
In this chapter Prey pointed out that his hometown is only three days away. Hopefully something bad does happen or I fear that’s going to be brought up. Gloom maybe a tad forgetful but he can be as stubborn as a mule when he gets an idea in his head. An Crimson seems to have the kind of mind that just remembers random information, like say the postage on a letter.
Near worst case scenario Crimson remembers the address on those family letters Prey has been writing and verbally comments on the distance. The case is solved quickly or without hassle and Gloom gets it in his head to do Prey a favor by letting him visit his family on the return trip by taking a more roundabout way.
Exiting developments this chapter, can't wait to see em continue
Lily Blossom can only lead to interesting stuff, and I love that you brought back Scenic Paint, all in all more Ponies close to him whose minds he can read
So Preys Home Village is close by? Wonder if that will come into play.
Also I figure the resistance must have gotten around quite a bit if Prey ended up around the deeper green, which is off to the south.
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What would prey’s DND alignment be?
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Well, I hadn't considered that, but I'm guessing probably Neutral Evil? Prey doesn't do something unless it benefits himself, but if it does benefit him, it doesn't really matter what it is or how reprehensible.
But then again, Prey doesn't like doing "evil" stuff, so he could be Lawful Evil perhaps? Not too sure. 😜 What do you think?
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What do you think of my new avatar?
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Umm, do you mean in relation to the conversation thread about D&D alignment? Or were you just asking the question as a separate topic? If it's the second; then as opposed to the rearing orange pony/unicorn, then it's fine and good in matching with you avatar name, of blue flame for a mane, so "spellflame".
Not really sure what to say, not something I've gotten asked before. 😝
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They are the same pony, the first one is a glamour.
I really love this story so far! My only issue is that there’s less malicious intent in Prey these chapters. A seventy-something war criminal who hates ponies would be a touch more condescending. At least internally.
In any case, LOOOVE IT
This story needs more love
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Thank you very much, I'm happy you think so! 😄
Prey is doting on Crimson like a helicopter parent. And the irony is completely lost on our favorite little lamb.
I wonder how many interactions the ISND will have with the Wonderbolts in the future? And is Spitfire Tribalist, or possibly jealous because she actually knows about them? I look forward to seeing more interaction between units, but for now, it's about time for the ISND's usual dose of suffering.
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Neutral Evil is definitely the most accurate. Neutral evil characters are defined by their selfish actions, doing whatever benefits them regardless of the consequences to others. Lawful evil operates around a strict moral code, but Prey is too unscrupulous, and chaotic evil just seeks to destroy everything, but Prey doesn't go out of his way to harm people unless his survival is at stake. The difficulty in categorizing Prey's alignment comes from the discrepancy between his methods and his goals. Prey operates like an evil overlord or a supervillain but he's not trying to take over the world, he just wants to be alive and free, something that most people in Equestria are born with but he's had to fight tooth and nail to get a mere taste of.
I just realized crimson is the protagonist
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I'm leaning towards true neutral as of reading this far, I'm only about half way though at this point.
It really just depends on those lists he and Lemon Pink are working on that I'm thinking will push him to evil and as far as lawful or chaotic goes he seems to likes rules but doesn't care about Pony law and he's to structured for chaos
Ooh! New recruits! And just as Prey was starting to get used to his new "friends" too. Haha. I wonder which one of them is going to die.
!!!!!! <3 !!!!!!!!
How do you do it? jaja, genius <3
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Not quite sure what you mean, I just write. 😅 It comes together somehow.
The funny thing about this is that prey is the least innocent of both
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Behold! The face of Evil! 😇
just looking for the opportunity
an opportunity
Prey using the phrase “White Boy” to describe the Pegasus has me laughing uncontrollably because I cannot help but think of it out of context