This is a story about a sheep. A little sheep, locked deep in prison, put there by ponies. He doesn't want to be there, but then he's had to do a lot of things he doesn't want to. It's a shame he deserves to be in there.
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Poor Prey
Nice picture.
Oof. More Threstrals? This is both good and bad. Good, because I love seeing the day guard get snubbed by the Night Guard, And Bad because now Prey has to deal with a whole lot more threstrals and the whole 'i'm not a child' thing all over again.
I'm sure significantly increasing the amount of guards that ponies are opposing at every opportunity will have no repercussions whatsoever. Clearly, what they all needed was to see more of them arriving in the dead of night, armed and without any public announcement.
Nice to see them get back to work.
God, that Lemon picture is f****** terrifying. I look forward to.prey's inevitable horror when it is Celestia who awards the medals.
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I agree with that. Honestly, with this and Lunaβs whole βunapologeticβ demeanor, I have a feeling that history is going to repeat itself.
Randy the banana pony.
What was THAT used to do???
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You may be right. I haven't put much thought into it insofar, but we haven't really seen that alt-universe tag come into play yet.
Uoho back in active duty.
So the first trial will be a ceremony with medals and all this stuff.
you always go back and forth between physical danger and non physical danger, poor Prey.
As always, thanks for the chapter.
"There are no spies in equestria!"
Changelings:
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Love this guy
Love how you introduce all of these cases that could be foreshadowing something to happen. God I love this.
Want moar! Need moar!
You know you're a good author when 11k words feels short to a reader.
I'm still hoping for Prey and Luna to become tenuous friends.
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That being said, the whole of the Night Gaurd are severely understaffed, and the ISND has suffered for it. Increasing the work force will help them significantly and keep the ISND working on the important cases.
A significant increase in able working bodies might also help to mitigate and investigate corruption amongst the nobles, as the Night Guard has no respect for anyone other than Luna.
Figured it would be more recruits.
The feeling of finishing each new chapter and having to wait for a new one is an indescribable pain. It hurts deeply, and no balm or medicine can lessen the sting.
Also, the time for buggos draws closer and closer!
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If you figured it out, then good guess on the recruits. π As to what Luna is going to do with them, that will be revealed later.
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And mentioning that, only Prey knows about Changelings, or mimics as he calls them. π
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*Nighthawk*
"Justice is what I say justice is."
"Sir I burned down the city."
"Was it in Luna's name?"
"Yes sir."
"Then it's fine."
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Ah! I didn't even see that! Yellow/orange with mottled patches, like a bruised banana. π I didn't even think about that. π
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Oh my god that would be truly horrifying. And that makes me think will the Solar Guard be at the ceremony?
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More thestrals come into the picture, and more Night Guards to serve Luna. There's been talk of recruitment for a long time, so while it isn't unexpected, the secrecy of the arrival and sudden appearance will certainly ruffle a few feathers. π¦π΄
Another great chapter! A da y early too! Keel up the great work
Just minor things I caught while reading, but wow, I didn't even realize this chapter was coming up. With school and all that in the way, time feels faster even if the work is getting a bit more stressful.
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Hello. Thanks! Corrected those now. π
Great chapter! Thanks for writing it! You should start a patreon.
Are Scenic or Lilly entitled to medals too or is it just Prey, Crimson, and Gloom? Also how is Prey supposed to accept the medal when he doesn't wear anything? "Here is your award for bravery and sacrifice in service to our majesties, please hold it with your teeth so you can keep saluting."
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Yes, Scenic and Lilly are also included in the announcement of medals.
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They'll put it on his ribbon to his chagrin. π
Wouldn't investigating why there was the communication breakdown between the Night Guard and the Border Guard be something Gloom and Crimson would like to do? I can understand why Prey wouldn't want anything to do with that, but considering how it almost killed the team it seems weird to me that no one brought that up.
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Lol, Prey might just kill them if they dare touch the Ribbon. Itβll probably be a medal on a necklace.
Oh! If the ISND get a new recruit, especially a female thestral, Prey is probably going to lose it. He already needs a massive amount of patience not to strangle Gloom half the time. Ps: Armor sounds excellent
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"My precioussss."
I just thought about something. Earlier in the story the topic about Prey not being able to wear horseshoes came up and i just thought, couldn't he wear shoes out of leather / fake-leather? He would still be able to grab things and be more comfortable when walking around.
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Kind of funny to think that your first comment on this story was blaming your English teacher for you being bad at English, and now you've gone and written an 800k+ words story in English that alot of people consider to be one of the best stories on the site!
Your grammar is probably better than most native English speakers at this point.
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Yeah, question, the fuck are you both on about?
Soon! I look forward to this story every week.
Thanks for writing it!
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Annnnnd it is now up!
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One party is nitpicking and the other party is referring to one isolated experiment as an excuse to be transphobic.
But they're both talking in coded language, the second guy moreso
I mean unless itβs your own blood. That dosent taste so bad. Gotta keep it all in anyway yez?
I'm always sad seeing the missing pictures in this story, so many have disappeared between my first and second (now) reading.
Maybe one day I'll do a third reading, and they'll be back :3 And I'll help you fix the last typos. I've been reading it so often when waiting for things, I haven't had time to comment on them as I find them.
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If you spot spelling errors or the like, I'd be happy if you did point them out so I can fix them. π